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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome 
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update didiπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘...thanks for PM😳...eagerly awaiting your next part...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER

wow RAM thinks about his own baby.nice dude...but he has a past...πŸ˜•.so plzdiscloseit fast.plzzz


thank u for comment, yes Ram has a past but for that u have to wait for a while so have patience
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jineejiggs


thank u for comment, yes Ram has a past but for that u have to wait for a while so have patience

ok but plz next PART ASAP.plzzz
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Posted: 11 years ago
  bndi scene and wait more like this secne
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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks a ton for this cute comment
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: BALHLOVER


ok but plz next PART ASAP.plzzz


will try to give next update on Wednesday
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Posted: 11 years ago
here I am with my next update, hope u all enjoy

recap

Dadi ne achanak se aisi baat bol di sabke samne ke dono ke toh hosh hi udd gaye, ek awkwardness  si prevail kar rahi hain inn dono ke beech.

Let's leave them in this situation and let them handle it their own.




In the evening everyone were enjoying tea with garmagaram pakoda. Shree was in Priya's lap and was trying to eat a pakoda from her plate. Jitni baar Priya pakoda ki plate hata deti hain utni hi baar Shree uski chhote chhote haathon se usko kheenchne ki koshish karti hain, yeh dekh ke sab ko bada mazaa aa raha hain. Aakhir Priya ne usko ek dum thoda sa pakoda khilaya aur woh us pakode ko chhus chhus (lick) ke khaane ki koshish karti hain, usko sab ke saath beythna bohot achha lagta hain, toh Neha aur Priya ne socha ke Shree ko leke thoda aas paas ghum ke aye.


Toh Priya ne Rajni se permission maangi aur Priya, Neha aur Rishabh yeh teeno Shree ko leke bazaar chali ayi. Kisi bhi naye jagaah jakar agar uska bazaar na dekhe toh uss jagah ko puri taraah se samajhna namumkin hain. Yeh teeno bazaar aye aur thoda idhar udhar ki cheeze kharide, Shree ko ek khilona khareed ke diya Rishabh ne toh Neha ne uske liye bohot saare ribbons aur designer clips khareede aur Priya ne uske liye ek colourful frock khareeda, baki sab ke liye sweets aur chocolates khareede. Ab Shree ko neend aa rahi thi toh sab wapas aa gaye. Kids ko chocolate bohot pasand aaye aur sweets baki sab ke liye tha.


Now it was dinner time so everyone were having dinner and lastly when it comes to sweetdish Ram was very happy to see rasmalai and gajar ka halwa. He looked upon Priya with astonishment and Priya smiled him back. Priya knew that he has a strong sweet tooth.


Next day in the morning after the breakfast sab bachhon ne zid pakdi hain ki Priya ko unlogon ke saath khelna hain, ab Priya unn logon ko mana nahi kar payi, aur sab ke saath khelne chali gayi terrace pe. Ab khel bhi kya, aankhon pe patti bandh ke chuna parega, toh start hua khel, turn by turn ata raha toh kuch der baad Priya ki turn ayi toh Aman ne uske aankhon me patti bandhi aur ghuma diya, sab Priya ko awaaz de rahe hain aur clap kar rahe hain, par Priya kisi ko pakad hi nahi paa rahi hain. In the meantime Ram who has gone outside with Vikram and Roshan came back and asked for Priya, Neha who was there said she is playing with kids on the terrace. Ram was surprised that Priya is playing, he was inquisitive also, so he came on the terrace and saw Priya was playing. Kids saw him but he signs not to say anything and continue with their play, after sometime Priya was exhausted but couldn't catch anybody but came very near to Ram, unknowingly she catch him and all kids started shouting and by that she almost tipped and was about to fall when she felt some strong arms catch her from falling, immediately she removed the scarf from her eyes and saw Ram was holding her and by that time all kids have gone from there. Ram was holding her very tight. Priya who by now was tired and was also sweating. The sun rays fall on her and in that particular moment she was looking very beautiful. For the moment Ram couldn't take his eyes off from her.


Ram got back in his senses when Priya said


Priya – Mr. Kapoor aap kab aye?


Ram released her and said,


Ram – woh actually Neha ne kahan ke tum bachhon ke saath terrace pe khel rahi ho, toh main……………


Priya – ha woh bachhon ne zid kiya toh main bhi aa gayi, bade dino baad bada mazaa aya, aap ko kuch kaam tha?


Ram – haan woh main keh raha tha ke jab sab saath yahan hain aur bachhen bhi hain toh kyun na kal picnic ho jaye?


Yeh dono baat karte karte neeche ate hain, aur Rishabh yeh sunn leta hain


Rishabh – arre bhai aap toh Amritsar aake ek dum hi relax ho gaye hain, waise idea achha hain, picnic ho jaye, waise bhi yahan dekhne ke liye bohot kuch hain


Sab covered verandah pe beythe hue the, toh Rishabh wahi ake yeh news sunata hain, ab sab bohot excited ho jate hain, toh tabhi Ram kehta hain


Ram – pata hi nahi chala kab waqt beet gaya, hum logon ki ticket confirm ho gayi hain, we are leaving day after tomorrow.


Yeh sunn ke sabko bohot dukh hua, kuch hi dino me yeh saare itne ghul mil gaye hain ke maano jaise lagte hain sab ek pariwaar ke hi hain.


Toh dadi kehti hain


Dadi – arre Amritsar aake kuch toh dekha hi nahi bacchon ne, ek kaam karte hain kal hum sab woh sab dekhne chalenge, bada mazaa ayega.


Yeh sunn ke sab bohot khush hote hain.


Vikram – kal lunch bhi bahar hi karenge, kisi dhaabe par, bachhon ne dhaaba toh dekha hi nahi.


Ab sab bohot khush hote hain.


Tabhi Jyoti ati hain aur kehti hain,


Jyoti – parjaijee, aaj meri dost ki shaadi hain aur usne aap sab ko bulaya hain toh wahan bhi jana hain.


Kaajal – kaise jayenge Jyoti, ghar par sab mehmaan aye hain, tu ek kaam kar, tu chali jaa akele


Jyoti making sad face says, OK


Now Krishnaji has seen that and said, - agar hum chalenge toh teri saheli ko koi problem toh nahi hogi?


Jyoti was very happy to hear and said, chaijee kya aap sach me ayengi?


Neha – sach me ayenge, tu abhi se bol koi pareshaani toh nahi hogi?


Jyoti – koi pareshani nahi hogi.


Neha – toh phir done, hum sab ayenge.


Kaajal – chaijee, par…..


Krishna – tu fikar mat kar, tum log chale jao, main aur beeji rukte hain


Rishabh – maa, aap aur dadi bhi jao, hum sab log yahan manage kar lenge.


Krishna – tu sab manage kar payega?


Rishabh looking towards Vikram and signaling him so Vikram also said, ha ha aunty, hum sab manage kar lenge, u don't have to worry.


Ab sab ladies hasne laage toh Vikram ne kahan, kyun kya hum log manage nahi kar sakte?


Neha – ha ha, khud ka khayal rakhna ata nahi, aur manage karoge, kaise karoge?


Ab Ram field pe utarta hain aur kehta hain kar lenge manage yaar, tujhe fikar karne ki zaarorat nahi hain


Sab hass rahe the inn logon ki baatein sunn ke, toh tabhi Roshan bole, manage kya karna hain, raat ka dinner hi toh banana hain, woh sab ho jayega kyun Rishabh, Vikram?


Rishabh, Vikram, Sohan unanimously said, ha ha ho jayega, hum log kar lenge, don't worry.


Kaajal saying to Roshan, aap ko pata bhi hain kaun si cheez kahan pe rakhhi hain?


Roshan was little nervous seeing Kaajal but said, toh kya hua, pata chal jayega, tum log jao.


With so much encouragement from gents, finally it was decided that ladies are going to shaadi but will try to come back early.


Ab baat yeh huin ke pehne kya toh Kajaal ne Priya ko apna ek salwar suit offer kiya and Rajni ne Neha ko, yeh dono chahte the ke Priya aur Neha bilkul Punjabi patakha lage, toh baat yeh hua ke Priya jab taiyyar hoke final touch de rahi thi, tabhi Ram kamre me aaya aur Priya ko dekh ke dekhta hi reh gaya, ek gordy salwar suit me Priya balon paranda bandhe huye with matching jewellery me aur saath saath maang me sindoor bhar ke koi patakha se kam nahi lag rahi thi, Ram ke toh hosh hi udd gaye, uski aankhen khuli ke khuli hi reh gaya, bade mushkil se control kiya usne. Udhaar Neha ne bhi bada chatakdar salwar suit pehna tha, sirf parande nahi bandhe, lekin lag woh bhi kuch kam nahi rahi thi, toh Vikram se control nahi hua, aur woh kass ke Neha ko pakad ke ek kiss karne jaa hi raha toh tabhi achanak door pe knock hua aur Neha haste huye boli, better luck next time Mr. Shergill aur woh chali gayi.


Everyone were ready and they go to the marriage hall.


Yahan inn sab gents ke toh ware nyare ho gaye, ab jab sab gents beythe hain toh baatein bhi kuch alag hi honge, toh wahi sab chal raha tha, toh kuch der baad sab kitchen me aaye aur sochne lage ki josh me aake bol toh diya ke woh log manage kar lenge par ab kya kare, ek ko bhi khana banana toh ata nahi, bas sirf Vikram ko thodi bohot ati hain, toh sabne socha ke dekhte hain kya hota hain.


If someone peep into the kitchen then one can see what hilarious scene was going on in that place.


Ram Kapoor, head honcho of Kapoor Industries cutting the veggies, Vikram is trying to make paste of ginger and garlic, Rishabh try to fry something, Roshan trying to make dough of wheat and Sohan trying to cut the onions but due to tears can't do it.


But finally they prepared their dinner. All were enjoying their time with each other. They finish off their dinner when ladies come back.


Dadi – kaisa raha tum logon ka bachelors' party, teasing everyone


Everyone said they had gala time. In response they asked about their marriage and they said they enjoyed.


Ab raat kafi ho gayi thi aur bacchen bhi thak gaye the toh everyone come to their respective rooms.


Vikram ko mauka mil gaya Neha ke saath romance karne ka aur iss baar Neha ne bhi nahi roka usse aur yeh dono start ho gaye, udhaar Ram kamre me ata hain toh dekhta hain Priya is trying to open her jewellery but it got struck in the dori of her kameez and woh kaafi ulajh gaya hain, so Ram asked her if he can help her or not? Priya at first was bit hesitant but later she said ok, now Ram came to her back and touched her necklace, Priya ko ek ajeeb sa feeling mehsoos hota hain, woh apni aankhen band kar leti hain, par Ram ko bilkul hesitation na ho rahi hain, usse pata nahi kyun achha lag raha hain. After some time Ram manged to open the hook of the necklace and said ho gaya, Priya who was still standing there with closed eyes got back to the senses and said thanks to him. She can still feel the touch of Ram on her neck and shoulder. She was blushing from inside by thinking this.


Priya took her night dress and goes to the washroom. She comes back after some time and see that Ram is checking his phone, silently she kept the salwar suit on the chair of dressing table and turned towards Ram and said,


Priya – Mr. Kapoor, mujhe aap se kuch baat karni thi.


Ram – keeping his phone on bed side table and look upon her, haan bolo.


Priya – mujhe lagta hain ke hume sabko kuch gifts dena chahiye, specially bachhon ko, itni jaldi me hum log yahan aaye toh kisi ke liye kuch khareed hi nahi paaye, aur Shree ko bhi pehli baar dekha toh uske liye bhi kuch lena chahiye.


Ram who was listening to her thought yeh sab ke liye itna kaise soch leti hain, yeh baat toh mere mann me aya hi nahi.


Ram – theek hain, ek kaam karo tum khareed lo, jo bhi tumhe theek lage.


Priya – kya aap mere saath chalenge khareeddari karne ke liye?


Ram – mujhe yeh sab nahi ata Priya, tum chali jana, ek kaam karo Neha yah Rishabh ke saath chali jana.


Priya ko achha nahi laga yeh sunn ke, she was expecting that Ram will agree to go with her. She didn't say anything and just said ok to him.


any kinds of comments are welcome, but do comment, I really wanna know whether u r liking this Amritsar portion or not, or whether I am dragging it or not, so feel free to comment, if u all like this then plz hit the "LIKE" button. Next update on Sunday, till then enjoy reading and keep commenting. 

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Posted: 11 years ago

gud update

priya and ram enjoing
with every one in amritar
 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very sweet and natural family atmosphere.You wove the jaane anjaane feelings of Ram and Priya nicely into it.
thanks for PM.