FF - RaYa - Second Chance overview on pg 149 - Page 12

.sangs123.

@.sangs123.

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome update dear
plz cont soon

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Ananya

@anuraya

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Posted: 11 years ago

nyc update..waiting for roka nd priyas reaction when she see ring..update soon

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sandhya

@lovelysakshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

very nice update. ths time u write in hindi I like it very much

comments bhi hindi mein dungi

ring part bahut achha tha. abb ye surprise honga Priya ko jab uuse Ram woh ring pehnayega jo usne pehni thi.

Ram apni behen ki liye itna exite ho raha hai,par apne liye nahi. Ram apne baare mein bhi thoda soch liya karo

rishab-soumya ka part achha tha.

aap sab part ek saat le ja rahe ho. ram-priya,natasha-karthik aur rishab-soumya.

jaldi se aage ka update do.

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vironikajain

@vironikajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very nice update yar raya ka kuch nhi ho sakta 😆
Continue soon nd thanx for pm

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nazianisar

@NAZIANISAR1

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Posted: 11 years ago

REALLY NICE UPDATE...,WAITING FOR NEXT PART...CONTINUE SOON...!!!

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Mani

@Mani-RK

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Posted: 11 years ago

This was typical Raya

hardly think about themselves

i loved the shopping scene

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shreya

@Ramdeewani

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Posted: 11 years ago

hey thanks for PM

very nice update took bit long time to read the update as it was in hindi no issues though

Update asap

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Anjali

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Posted: 11 years ago

U know what ..? This is what i called a fantastic and full packed update.. Not only raya tum baki sab characters ko equal importance deti ho... The whole ring selections wala scene was really very gud.. Saare couples romance ke river main dube hai jara kuch drops humare raya pe bhi chirko... Ur own way for the story is just rocking... Can i pls know ur gud name..? Thanks for the pm, continue soon...

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cloud121

@cloud121

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice update...continue soon !!!

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jineejiggs

@jineejiggs

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Pinkjali
U know what ..? This is what i called a fantastic and full packed update.. Not only raya tum baki sab characters ko equal importance deti ho... The whole ring selections wala scene was really very gud.. Saare couples romance ke river main dube hai jara kuch drops humare raya pe bhi chirko... Ur own way for the story is just rocking... Can i pls know ur gud name..? Thanks for the pm, continue soon...

thanks for ur encouraging comment, I really need it, as far as RaYa are concerned toh inn logon ka boond se kuch nahin honewala, for them ocean is suitable, but still some masti and fun is coming in the way, so wait till that...btw my real name is Ujjaini, what's urs?

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