SS: Dard e ISHQ part 2 updated

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you so much for your patience level...

I told you that i will write an OS about Revenge track...
i gave you options to choose...


link
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3437988

as the present track goes different ways..madhu as RK's hair stylist..
this is my thought...

OS: Dard e ISHQ





It's almost midnight,but RK could not close his eyes...

"Tomorrow...
only 6 hours...after that!!!


Rishav Kundra will have to deal with Madhubbala Shamsher Malik...

It's not possible ...
How dare you to face me again???
my sherni biwi-"
stated RK...

"I insulted her so much,but how?how did she gain the courage to work with me?
I have to bear her now everyday...
that's unbearable..."

RK saw his face to mirror...

"you have to be strong RK...you should face her...you have to break down her completely..."



Madhu woke up early morning and went to mandir to take blessing from God...

It's not only a new morning..she is going to start a new life...
toughest life till now...
and this life she choose by herself...

No one forced her...
No one request her...
She made this decision to build a new madhu...

"God,give me enough potential...no one can, not even myself can hurt my heart"

"I know
RK will try to hurt me..he will try his best to hurt me so that i can't proceed my life...
but i want to increase my control level...
he can not be winner always...
woh apne apko bhagwan mante hain..
lekin asli bahgwan to aap ho...
please be with me till my death...
"

and she returned back home...

She reached set at sharp 9.30 am...
She directly went to RK's vanity...

RK was trying not think about madhu...
Suddenly his eyes froze seeing her...
yes...how long he missed to see
this beautiful eyes...
this pink cheek...
this red nose...
this soft petal lips...

Whatever RK persisted
for so long...not to think madhu for a single moment
-he just forgot everything...

Madhu initiated:"Good Morning Sir..."

RK got back into reality...

:"Good morning ex-biwi..

are not you late?"

Madhu:"no sir,it's 9.40,
i reached set at sharp 9.30 and was talking to director..."

RK:"are you director' hair dresser?
no...
biwi..abhi se yeh haal!!!"

Madhu:"excuse me,i am not your biwi...
and for your kind information,i was understanding about next shoot..
i know that i am your hair dresser... "

RK:"i always write my own scene...
and this scene is how ..."

just the director came to vanity

:"sir,set is ready,ab sirf aap ki anne ki derr hain,i told her how will be your dress up...
as your lover betrayed you,you will cry like mad..
i mean i want craziness in your hair.."

RK roared:"bittuji...bittuji"

Director:"sorry sir, is there anything wrong?i was saying"

RK:"today i will not act any rona-dhone scene..i am hero...
this cry
emotion
madness
does not suit with me...
this will be played by heroine only...
and mujhe dhoka...
koi de nehi sakta.."

director:"sorry,but script par.."

RK:"change your script...otherwise"

Director:"okay okay...
i will change...
but this will take time..so kya pack up hai aaj?"

RK:"RK ki dialogues chori!!!!!

no one can say ''PACK UP"except me...aj to mujhe romance kar ne
kya mood hai

koi dhang kya ROMANTIC SCENE ...
not mushy mushy simple hugs and kisses..
it should be passionate and...
you understand ne?"

Director:"okay,give me 1 hour,i will arrange everything"

RK pointing at madhu

:"Madhubala Shamsher Malik...your task is to make me a sexy HOT actor...waise i am dangerously handsome and dashing dude...
but meri heroine ki sath HOT intense scene hai so make my hair dashing"


Precap:

RK  taking heroine in his arms

:"tumhari kadam se kadam mila kar
tumhari ankho se ankhe dal kar
tumhari dil churane wala meri siwa koi nehi hai MADHU"

/
to mingle with your foot steps properly
to eye on your eyes properly
to steal your hearts from you

no one is here except me MADHU
/


HOW'S THIS?

this is my heartiest request for all readers not to be conjoos with my OS..
please dil khol kar comment dena...


Please share your views here
πŸ˜ƒ


Link of part 2:
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/76512896


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Posted: 11 years ago
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I can't believe it...I was just planning an OS with that name...!!!πŸ˜†

Man...you were quicker..!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†Meri title "Hadap" lee..lolz..🀣

Very nice OS...!!continue soon..!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ

P.S - Precap looks really good..RK committing a major blunder...!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
Edited by dilnasheen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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NICE OS DEAR... CONTINUE SOON...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilnasheen

I can't believe it...i was just planning an OS with that name...!!!πŸ˜†


Man...you were quicker..!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†Meri title "Hadap" lee..lolz..🀣

Very nice OS...!!continue soon..!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ



Thank you so much for commenting first..
and i am woman...

title ko chodo,content kya same tha?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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fabulous.av good start do continue.plz add me to ur pm list and do pm me whenever u update
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: arpita20



Thank you so much for commenting first..
and i am woman...

title ko chodo,content kya same tha?


No I meant "man" in general slang..πŸ˜ƒ

Planning matlab just a title and couple of scenes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†and it wasn't the same..In the sets only, but different emotions and situations...!!!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow nice OS...
very interesting!!!! plzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilnasheen


No I meant "man" in general slang..πŸ˜ƒ

Planning matlab just a title and couple of scenes...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†and it wasn't the same..In the sets only, but different emotions and situations...!!!πŸ˜‰



you can share your ideas...
if possible i will merge with it...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
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u started it, yipee!!
ok chalo coming to the OS, hey yaar it would be a SS na.

liked it a lot.
RK behaving like a top level kameena, no offence but i really want to use this word.
"i want to destroy her, i want to destroy her", but u can't do it easily, madhu is surely a strong one.

precap sounds too interesting!!

thanx 4 writing it, will wait 4 next part..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: adeeba21

u started it, yipee!!

ok chalo coming to the OS, hey yaar it would be a SS na.

liked it a lot.
RK behaving like a top level kameena, no offence but i really want to use this word.
"i want to destroy her, i want to destroy her", but u can't do it easily, madhu is surely a strong one.

precap sounds too interesting!!

thanx 4 writing it, will wait 4 next part..




yaa..it should be SS...
okay i will update it later...
thnx for sharing your views about itπŸ˜›