A Swaron OS ( Valentine series ) - Page 3

Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

liked d way u balanced all d characters..
rey break down n decides to protect sharon from swayam,
swaron confesses to each other after shivam slap scenario.. i liked part were u added d exta part in scene wen she says to shivam y she was close to him in d party to get her swayam back😊
sharon says she trusts swayam even after reys warng.. she in deep love with him..😳 on d other hand dont know wat swayam baba is upto..😕

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

awesome start... loved it

the way u describe the situation... perfect👏

very well written.. i guess rey will marry sharon bcoz of the situation.. may be

eagerly waiting for next part... hope all the MU will be cleared...

update soon

thnx for pm

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesome start👏

You started this os from the very fantastic scene of last valentine episode of d3

Rey was going through so much pain & feel like betrayed.

Rey hates all weakling now as for him they just used person for their personnel benefit

But on the other side poor Kriya is in so much pain for breaking the heart of that person who is reason of her heart beat.

And that historical Swaron scene in which that beep got a tight slap(mind blowing scene & brilliantly done by TanHa)

The way swayam picked sharon from waist like a barbie doll loved it

But line which you added their i so wished that they were there in the original scene too

that Sharon only wants 'Her' Swayam back that's why she was with that beep

i loved those line😊

So Sharon finally confessed her feeling and said i love u to swayam

Everything was going fine & rey also accepted their relationship for the sake of Sharon but still he was worried

Finally Swayam & sharon become one by breaking all the barrier

But what now why Swayam walked out from their relationship leaving Sharon all broken And don't tell me that you planned to kill Swayam by diagnosing him with incurable disease😆 you murderer 😉

Sharon is pregnant with swayam's child & told everything to Rey. rey to maar hi dalega swayam ko agar tumne nahi mara😆

Update soon

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harshana1

@harshana1

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Wow when are u updating!? it was so awesome pm me when u update :)

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Meera

@MirageSwaron

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Very intriguing the first part...kuch toh hidden hai - ek twist aur pls jaldi se update karna

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551186

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awesome part

conti soon

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Trushna

@swaronland

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

so sorry for late 😳 i was very busy so couldn't comment earlier. this one is awesome piece of work👏 loved that u started with last years valentine & included kriyaansh also. poor rey & 😭 feeling bad for both of them & so typical of rey protecting sharon😊 missing old sharey bonding in episodes

swaron together but what's with swayam leaving sharon😲 eagerly waiting for next part 😊 hope it will not end on sad note never the less thanks for such wonderful gift for valentine day

p.s. i'm very busy so can't comment on your work (ff & ss)

but trust me i will read them & also comment asap pls keep sending pms thanks😊

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Anu_TanHa

@Anu_TanHa

IF-Stunnerz

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Update please

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