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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys me vapas aa gaya pakane,

Update toh de raha hu par Pata nahi kaisa hai jo bhi hai Bear it''.

Recape:

prem n gang kria n rey ko vapas milvane ki planning kar rahe hai'.. isliye prem smriti ko manane ki koshish kar raha hai''..

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Prem: plz aunty maan jayiye na'

Smriti: par''(cut by prem)

Prem; aunty ab me aur kuch nahi kehna chahta agar aap kria ki khushi nahi chahti toh me kuch nahi kar sakta. (n vaha se jaane ki acting karta hai)

Smriti: ruko. Par beta kria''..

Prem: uski chinta aap mat karo usey ham batayenge hi nahi ki ham rey ki sagaai me jaa rahe hai' vo sab ham dekh lenge aap bas ye batayiye ki aap hamare saath hai na??

Smriti: haan beta, me apni khoyi hui kriya ko vapas lana chahti hu'.

Prem: thank u aunty''.

Prem: aunty ab me chalta hu, me aapko phone karke aage kya karna hai wo bataunga' bye aunty n tc n plz ab tention mat lena ab jo bhi hoga sirf acha hi hoga'.trust me'..

Smriti: thank u beta'..

Prem smile karte hue waha se nikal gaya'..

At college's canteen'..

Arpit: ye prem kaha reh gaya''

Kisha: ha yaar bohot time ho gaya, ab tak toh aa jana chahiye tha'..

Karan: kahi aunty ne naa kar di hogi toh''.

Priya: tu na kabhi nahi sudhrega, negativity ki dukaan''

Arsha: calm down guys, dekho wo aa raha hai'

Prem: '.

Arpit: kaha tha, itni der kyu lagadi??

Karan: bolta kyu nahi hai, pata hai hame kitni tention ho rahi hai'.

Kisha: ha ab bol bhi kya hua??

Arsha: chill guys usey bolne doge toh vo bolega na'.

Prem: thanks arsha'

Priya: wo sab thik hai tum ye batao aunty ne kya kaha??

Prem(in mind): thoda maza liya jaaye'..(he smirk)

Arsha: kaha kho gaye' aunty ne kya kaha??

Prem: wo aunty wo '.(jaan bujke aadha bol k ruk gaya n sad face banaya)

Karan: dekha mene bola tha ki wo nahi maanegi'

Priya: karan''(angry tone)

Arpit: uspey kyu gussa ho rahi ho bechara sahi toh bol raha hai'.

Kisha: kya tum dono chup nahi reh saktey'..(angry tone)

Mean time Prem is having fun n smirking n arsha observe prem, she get at him.

Arsha(smirk): guys aunty maan gayi hai'..

Karan: kya?? Par prem ne toh''(looking at him n he smiling now laughing)

Karan: tuje toh me chodunga nahi'.(ran after him)

Arpit: agar tune choda toh me tuje nahi chodunga''(he also ran)

Girls r having fun n laughing on boys behaviour'..

After few min. kria come there n prem bang with her n both lost their balance, prem bang with floor n kria bang with arsha backwards n arsha also lost her balance n she is on prem n her lips on his cheek''''

Kria: u both r all right??

Prem: haan kria, ham thik hai'

Arsha: m sorry, tumhe lagi toh nahi prem??

Prem: nahi me thik hu'.even m sorry meri vajah se ham gir gaye'.

Karan: ab khade hona ka irada hai ya aise hi lete rehna hai''.

They both feel awkward n fir khade ho gaye'.

Mean time kisha n priya giggling'

Prem: what???

Kisha: tumhare cheek pe lipstic ka nishaan'''..(all laughed on it)

Prem ne jaldi se rumal nikal k apna cheek saaf kar diya'' mean time arsha blushing hard''..

Prem: wo kria tumhe prof. bula rahe the unhe tumse kuch kaam tha..

Kria: ok, me jaake aati hu.

Kisha: tumne usey kyu bhej diya??

Arsha: taki kria yaha se jaaye n ham aage ka plan discuss kar sake, right?

Prem: yaa. Ab aunty ne toh haan bol diya hai, aagey kya karna hai ye sochte hai..

Priya: ye pyaar ki definition kya hogi??

Karan: ham yaha kria ka problem solve karne baithe hai tere faltu sawalo ka jawab dene nahi'

Priya: tumhe baad me dekhlungi, negativity ki dukaan.

Arpit: me batata hu..

Kisha: pehle khud toh samaj lo fir dusro ko batana'

Arsha: prem tumhare liye pyaar ki dafinition kya hai??

Prem: definition ka toh pata nahi par ye bata sakta hu ki pyaar kaisa hona chahiye''

pyaar Aisa Karo Ki Dhadkan Me Bas Jaaye,

Saans Bhi Lo To Khushbu Usi Ki Aaye,

Pyaar Ka Nasha Aankhon Pe Chaa Jaaye,

Baat Kuch Bhi Na Ho Par Naam Usi Ka Aaye' jaise kria karti hai rey se'..

They all r in LLHH karan n priya, arpit n kisha, arsha in her thought n prem in his thought''

After few min. arsha's phone rang'.(ye hamesha galat time pe hi bajta hai)

Arsha: bhai ka call hai..

Prem: speaker pe dal n arpit tu door k paas khada reh n kria aaye toh ishara kariyo'

Arsha pick the call n put in speaker..

Arsha: what a pleasant surprise.

Rey: kyu surprise tu hi de sakti hai.

Arsha: nahi bhai, aur batao aaj muje kaise yaad kiya??

Rey: tujse ye puchne k liye k tu kab tak aa rahi hai yaha?

Arsha: wo me bhai'.(she is confused what to say)

Prem(whispered): sagaai k do din pehle..

Arsha: bhai me do din pehle aa jaungi.

Rey: thik hai. M waiting for u.

Prem(whispered): ussey pucho kya tumhare dost tumhare saath aa sakte hai??

Arsha: bhai kya mere dosto ko bhi'

Rey: ya tumhare dosto ko bhi saath la sakti ho.

Arsha: thanks bhai, love u.

Rey: love u too..(arpit bhaag k aaya kria aa gayi)

Prem give him I'll kill u wala look'.. arsha ne speaker off kar diya.

Rey(shocked): kriya??

Arsha(hesitantly): kriya nahi bhai priya.

Rey: wo muje laga..

Arsha: kya laga bhai??

Rey: kuch nahi, bye n jaldi aana'

Arsha: bye.(she cut d call)

Arsha: bach gaye'..phew.

Mean time kria waha aa gayi'..

Kria: bach gaye??

Arsha: wo' wo..

Prem: arey kria wo chodo, arsha ko tumhe kuch batana hai..

Kria: haan bolo.

Arsha: wo mere bhai ne tum logo ko uski sagaai k liye invite kiya hai'.

Kria: tumne kabhi apne bhai k bare me bataya nahi.

Arsha: wo actually kabhi aisi baat hi nahi hui.

Kria: ok. Koi baat nahi. Tum log chale jaana.

Prem: kyu tum nahi aa rahi.

Kria: nahi. Ek toh mera man nahi hai n ma bhi nahi manegi.

Arsha: aunty ko toh ham mana lenge par agar aunty maan gayi toh tumhe hamare saath aana hi padega.

Kria: thik hai. Koshish kar lo. Par muje pata hai naahi ma manegi aur naahi me aaungi.

Arsha: wo toh pata chal hi jayega. Prem zara aunty ko call toh karna.(wink)

Prem: ok mam.(with a smirk)

Prem called smriti'

Prem: hello aunty. Me prem.

Smriti: haan bolo beta.

Prem: aunty ham sab friends arsha k bhai ki sagaai me jaane wale hai kya kria bhi hamare saath chal sakti hai, wo yahi hamare saath hai me phone speaker pe rakhta hu.

Smriti: haan kyu nahi, muje koi problem nahi hai beta.

Kria in shock''.(jor ka jatka dheere se laga)

Kria: but maa..

Smriti: koi baat nahi beta tum jao.

Prem ne speaker off kar diya'

Prem: thank u aunty.

Smriti: thank u beta. Waha uska khyal rakhna.

Prem: aap bhi hamare saath kyu nahi chalti.

Smriti: me par me waha..

Prem: aunty issey hame situation ko sambhalne me help milegi.

Smriti: thik hai. Jaana kab hai hame?

Prem: 11th feb.

Smriti: thik hai beta.

Prem: me rakhta hu.

Smriti: ohk beta.(he cut the call)

Arsha: toh ab tum aa rahi ho'

Kria: thik hai, kaha aur kitne baje?

Prem: 11th feb ko ham yaha se Mumbai k liye niklenge.

Kria: mumbai??

Arsha: haan mera bhai vahi toh rehta hai..

Kria mumbai ka naam sunkar fir se purani baato me kho gayi n waha se chali gayi''.

Prem: bas kria ab tumhare dukhi hone ka waqt khatam ho gaya'.

Arsha: hmm''

Karan: yaar muje nahi lagta wo rey k dil me abhi bhi kria hogi.

Priya: pehli baar muje iski baat sahi lag rahi hai.

Arpit: haan yaar jis tarah kria usey chod kar aayi hai muje bhi nahi lagta.

Prem:

Gulab to toot kar bikhar jaata hai,

Par khusbu hawa me barkarar rehti hai,

Jaane wale to chod ke chale jaate hain,

Par ehsaas to dilon me barkarar rehte hain'

Arsha: matlab??

Prem: pehla pyaar mitaye nahi mitta, me yakeen k saath keh sakta hu ki rey aaj bhi kria se pyaar karta hai, inki kahaani ka jo hissa rey ko nahi pata wo usey batane ki der hai''.

Karan: ye pyaar kya chiz hai muje ab tak samj me nahi aaya?? Kitna confusion hai??

Prem:

Tanhaiyon me muskurana ishq hai,

Ek baat ko sab se chupana ishq hai,

Yun to neend nahi aati hamein raat bhar,

Magar sote sote jagna aur jagte jagte sona ishq hai..

Mere dost ye ishq har dard ki dawa hai,

Jaise jannat ki hawa hai, Har umr me jawa hai,

Koi bhi nahi bach paya iss ishq se,

Samaj k bhi koi isey samaj na paya aisa ye ishq hai''.

Karan: saale tune kya ishq pe P.H.D kari hai''

Prem: haan ki hai tuje jalan ho rahi hai.

Arpit(whisperd): zyada mat bol varna tera raaz khol denge.

Prem: thik hai thik hai ab suno hame rey ko sab kuch batana hai par anjaan banke,

Arsha: hmm, par kaise??

They all r confused k rey ko kaise batayenge''

After two days they r In mumbai:

Sab rey ke farm house pe ruke the, abhi tak rey ya kisi ne bhi kria ko nahi dekha tha'

Puri gang rey ki sagai ki taiyariyo me busy hai.

Rey kahi khoya hua hai.

Swayam: kya hua rey?? Kya soch raha hai tu??

Rey(stil in his thoughts): baatcutter.

Swayam(shoked): kya?? baatcutter??

Rey(back in his sense): nahi me wo..

Sharon: kya hua??

Swayam: nahi wo kuch bhi toh nahi.

Rey: tumhe kuch kaam tha kya??

Sharon: haan wo swayam muje tumhari help chahiye thi.

Swayam: haan thik hai me aata hu, muje rey se kuch imp baat karni hai.

Sharon: thik hai, jaldi aana.(wo waha se chali jaati hai)

Swayam: tune abhi abhi kria ka naam liya. Aaj aise achanak kria kaise yaad aagai.

Rey: tu paagal ho gaya hai kya?? Me kyu usey yaad karunga wo toh me ( n usne jo phone pe suna tha wo usko bataya)

Swayam: strange.

Rey: hmm'.

Swayam: chal koi baat nahi chhod..

Rey: me toh chod dunga but Siran tuje nahi chodegi.

Swayam: siren'..(both laugh n swayam left from there)

Rey in rehearsal hall in his thoughts'''

Song playing in ipod'''.

(muje dance discribe karna nahi aata... mene try kari hai baaki khud imagine kar lena thank u)

Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe na faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Kria enter in R.H'''.

rey takes kria's Right Hand with his Left Hand. rey places his Right Hand on the kria's back. kria places her Left hand on rey's shoulder. Rey and kria look into each others Eyes.

Ho...
Kaise bataaun tujhe ki dil mera kya keh raha
Rahe naa faasle ye jo hai apne darmiyaan

Tere qareeb main ho sakoon
De de tu apni razaa
Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe

Rey Step forward with his Left Foot, kria Step back with her Right Foot, rey Rock back onto his Right Foot, kria Rock forward onto her Left Foot''.


Ho ho...

Tujh se mohabbat hui
Hai meri hai bas ye khata
Tujh se main door rahoon
Yeh mujh ko gawaara kahaan
Main tere saath mein hi rahoon
Chhodo ye saara jahaan

rey Step back with his Left Foot, kria Step forward with her Right Foot, they hold the beat n rey step back with his right foot n kria forward with her left foot'.


Paas bithaaun ye zulf sanwaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish
Ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe woh ho ho...

Ho ho...

Rey twirl kria twice n Rey Rock forward onto his Left Foot, kria rock back with her right foot''

Ho ho wo ho... Ho ho wo...
Teri adaaon mein doob loon
Doob loon main tujhi mein
Ho jaaun tere itne qareeb
Ki main dikhoon ab tujhi mein

Paas bithaoon ye zulf sawaaroon
Aur baahon mein le loon tujhe main
Hai dil ki ye khwaahish ki sun le guzaarish
Aur de de tu khud ko mujhe
Ho ho...

Rey slowly twirl her n again kria rock forward with his left foot n rey rock back with his right foot, kriya step back onto her right foot n rey step forward onto his left foot. Again rey slowly twirl her two times n caught her in his arms''. They sher LLHH'.

Rey:

Wada hai humari ye mohabbat ki dastan khas rahegi,
Aapki surat humesha dil ke pas rahegi,
Nahi bhulenge hum aapko or aapke pyar ko,
Jab tak dil me dhadkan aur ye saanse rahegi'

Swayam n sharon waha aaye''.

Swayam: ahem-ahem'.

Sharon: earth calling''.

Rey n kria back on earth'.

Rey: tum log yaha?? Me wo'.(usne kria ki taraf dekha n he was in shock) (shock toh lagega hi na waha kria nahi taani thi)

Rey: taani??

Taani(blushing): hmm..(usey laga rey ne jo bhi kaha ussey kaha)

Rey: kuch nahi muje kuch imp kaam yaad aagaya me abhi aata hu.

Taan((still blushing): bhai muje bhi kaam hai'.(they both left from R.H.)

Sharon: poor rey n taani''.(they hi-fied n sher LLHH)

But ye hamare mob dev kaise seh sakte hai wo turant baj uthe'''.

They both feel awkward'

Swayam attend the call n after they all r busy with their work''..

Rey in his room'..

Rey in his mind: ye muje kya ho gaya tha?? Muje taani ki jagah kria dikhayi de rahi thi?? Aur me kya bol raha tha?? Oh god''.

Rey ' 1: kyuki tu abhi bhi ussey pyaar karta hai..

Rey(shocked): tum kaun ho??

Rey ' 1: tumhara dil'

Rey: what??

Rey ' 1: why don't u accept k tum abhi bhi sirf kria se hi pyaar karte ho??

Rey: nahi me taani se pyaar karta hu.

Rey ' 1: kamse kam khud se toh jooth mat bolo?

Rey: thik hai me kria se pyaar karta hu but issey kya fark padta hai, fark issey padta hai ki taani mujse pyaar karti hai wo uss kria ki tarah muje use nahi kar rahi.

Rey ' 1: ye tum bhi jaante ho aur me bhi ki wo tumhe toh kya kisiko bhi use nahi kar sakti. Jo khud se pehle dusro k bare me dusro ki feelings k bare me sochti ho wo kisiko use nahi kar sakti.

Rey: what ever, the fact is ki me kria se nahi taani se pyaar karta hu n iss 14th ko meri uske saath sagaai hone waali hai.

Rey ' 1: me ye kabhi accept nahi karunga n ek din tumhe ye manna hi padega ki kria ne tumhe dhoka nahi diya n tum aaj bhi sirf ussisey pyar karte ho'.. me ye karke hi rahunga'.

Rey: what ever''.

Swayam enter in his room..

Swayam: kya what ever rey'.

Rey turn to swayam: wo kuch bhi toh nahi tum yaha??

Swayam: haan wo tumhari sagaai ka outfit reddy ho gaya hai me usey pic karne jaa raha hu, tumhe aur kuch chahiye toh bata do me lete aaunga'

Rey: tum rehne do me jaata hu waise bhi muje kuch ajeeb lag raha hai'

Swayam: is everything ok??

Rey: yaa'.. sab thik hai. Me jaata hu'

Swayam: thik hai jaldi aana.

Rey shop me se apni outfit leke aa raha tha he is in his own thoughts n he hit a girl accidently'..


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i know bohot bore kiya na... thik hai m ready for jute, chappal, tamatar... sorry...
next wala last...😊

precape:

arsha on call...
arsha: hey, kaha ho tum??
caller: hospital...
arsha: what???😲


Edited by .....pujan..... - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Yeah me first...dinka chika...balle balle... Cuming to d update... Bhai apne firse kriyansh ko nhi milaya 😭 ye cheating hai n itni shero shairi vo bi pyar pe kya baat hai bhai merko bhabhi toh nhi de rhe 😳 😆 update was awsm..ekdum mast vali arsha n prem best hai n baki kriya ki gang pagal 😆 negativity ki dukaan haha..aaj kal RLB bi achi mom ban gyi hai..i hope arsha apni feelings prem ko btaye n vo couple ban jaye and i love d whole update exept d 'Tani's' part 😡 hope rey bi aab apne dil ki baat sunle n kriya ka rey ki car ke sath acident hone vala hai..hope rey usse apni baton se zyada hurt na kare n muje plz monday tak iski update dena..i love it n meri frnds bi dey r nt on IF bt reading along wid me..toh update dena plz
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s

Yeah me first...dinka chika...balle balle... Cuming to d update... Bhai apne firse kriyansh ko nhi milaya 😭 ye cheating hai n itni shero shairi vo bi pyar pe kya baat hai bhai merko bhabhi toh nhi de rhe 😳 😆 update was awsm..ekdum mast vali arsha n prem best hai n baki kriya ki gang pagal 😆 negativity ki dukaan haha..aaj kal RLB bi achi mom ban gyi hai..i hope arsha apni feelings prem ko btaye n vo couple ban jaye and i love d whole update exept d 'Tani's' part 😡 hope rey bi aab apne dil ki baat sunle n kriya ka rey ki car ke sath acident hone vala hai..hope rey usse apni baton se zyada hurt na kare n muje plz monday tak iski update dena..i love it n meri frnds bi dey r nt on IF bt reading along wid me..toh update dena plz



yeee... dika chika...balle balle...😆 ye story hi unko milwane k liye likhi hai.. just wait n watch...😛 ya RLB sudhar gayi hai...😆 ab ye toh next update me hi pata chalega ki rey kya kya karta hai...😆 monday 😲 itni jaldi...ohk i'll try ma best...😊 thank u...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ...pujan...



yeee... dika chika...balle balle...😆 ye story hi unko milwane k liye likhi hai.. just wait n watch...😛 ya RLB sudhar gayi hai...😆 ab ye toh next update me hi pata chalega ki rey kya kya karta hai...😆 monday 😲 itni jaldi...ohk i'll try ma best...😊 thank u...😛

phle btao apki side se meri babhi hai kya?
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Riyaluvka2s

phle btao apki side se meri babhi hai kya?



yup...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hila..congo bhai..muje abi tak btaya kyu nhi..kya naam hai unka..puri history do unki..scrap krna jb aap ol aaoge
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
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bhai i'll unres but abhi main kuj edit bna rhi hoo
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Awesome update :-) love how Reyaansh is still thinking of Kriya all the time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing👍🏼👏
do cont soon...
thnks 4 d pm..😃

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