pyaar ya dosti?(swaron&taarey ff)ch12uptd - Page 2

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                               chapter1: The party and  baby sitting

"wat de hell...bhai ney peri se f8 kiya?"😡shutd taani in angry..."i told him not 2 do so but he nver lstn 2 me...okay i'll cme and get him home &thanks 4r infrmng "

(she hang de phn)...
(dat n8 swayam went 2 a clg frnd's party wer sum one cmmntd abt taani ..hearng abt dem he became angry..ofcurse yaar possve indan bhai jo hey... so strtd f8ng wid dem...in de f8 he got injurd ...and fell 2 de grund ..sum one in de party cald taani 4rm swayam phn and infrmd her dat his bro got injurd whle f8 wid sum guys...)
she cald sharon who her best frnd...
sharon:hey drlng wat happn esi tme pe kyu call kiya?any prob?bolo dear..
taani(cryng):shar...bhai got injurd whle f8 in de party...mom aur dady bi out of twn hey...muje kuchi samaj me nahi arahahey..wat to do...😭

sharon:tannu clam dwn kuchi nahi hoga..jst chill...u bro will be okay..r u wid him rght now?

Taani:no shar..me ab tak vaha nahi gihe ..wo kisiney muje cal karakey bathayata'aur ab muje samaj me nahi araha hey ki how 2 get der..kyu ki ghar me ghadi nahi hey..kya tu aasakathi hey?

Sharon:no dear..tu janithi hey na me aapani chachi ghar me hu'chacha aur chachi out of statn gayehe hey so I have luk aftr der kids'.hey tu rey ko lejana..wo ghar per hi hey..he can help u..

Taani:rey ko ?nahi shar..me tumara bhai ko nahi lega sakithi..
Sharon:oh god but y taanu? U can take him 'jst cal him ask him once'
Taani:shar I said no..'I don't want to gve him any trble'
Sharon:oh god..tekey I will come'.but pehile tum meri chachi ghar awo rey ko lekey okay?me phn raki thi hu u jst cal him and okay?muje boha kam hey k cu dear..
Taani:per shar'(bfr she culd say sum thng sharon hangd de phn..)
Taani:oh god ab muje rey ko call karana hey'.karu ya na karu ..don't knw he wil pick my call or not'.
Okay taani thnk pstvely he will help u becse he is bhai's best frnd na?okay now call him tell him ..
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She dald rey no..here rey is in deep sleep 'he gets disturb by her call'see taani no ..pick s de call'
Rey(still sleepng):hello taanu... y r u distrbng me at dis tme?u don't have any othr wrk?y don't let me sleep?do I don't have dat rght also?🥱
Taani:oye ..hello sleepng beauti get up .. I need ur help man'get uppp..
Rey :wat hapnd?
Taani:wo bhai is injur..(she tell him all de stry&strts cryng)'ghar me ghadi nahi hey I don't knw how to get der now..pls meri help karana..pls rey'.
Rey:hey taanu.. I mean taani don't worry ..pls mati rona'i wil take u der.. 5 min me prkng area ajava' (both taayam&sharey famlies live in same aprmnt 'and r famly frnds)

Taani:thank u rey ..thank u so much'I'l be der in 5 mins'.
(both of dem hangd de call &got readycame dwn 2 parkng lot ..both sat in de car and rey strtd de car..)
Taani:rey shar ne hum dono ko tumari chachi ki ghar aney keli kaha hey..thn 4r der will go 4rm der..
Rey:okay..(rey notce dat taani is still cryng'.he held taani's hand wch is on her lap.. )hey chill kuchi nahi hoga humari bhai ko'
Taani:hope so'usi kuchi nahi ho'.
Soon dey rechd sharey's chachi's huse..
Sharon:hey rey tu eni bachonoko dhekalena..me aur taani .swayam ko leaney jathey hey'
Rey :no way sis..me eni rakashasho ka dayan nahi rakaney wala ..and u dis kids don't lyk me'
Sharon:arey rey ..dey r sleepng and so dey won't truble u ..u have 2 jst see dat dey don't get up'.dats it..
Taani:pls rey'.pls'
Rey :okay ..but come soon'
Taani:aur rey apana car ki keys mje dena pls..
Rey okay yelo'
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Sharaani lev 4rm der & rech de party plce'and sucssfl mangd 2 take swayam 2 de car'.
Taani:hey shar tum bhai ki frst aid karido ..me car strt karithi hu'
Sharon:okay dear..
She clndswayam's wunds'&put band aid on de wunds'.
Dey wer back 2 sharey's chachi's huse..sharaani went 2 door and rang de bell..wen de c rey dey both strtd laughng by cng de cndtn of rey...🤣der was food al ovr his body..&de kids wer runs all ovr de huse...
rey:i told u i can't handle dis rakashas..dey jst irrtd me..luk wat dey have done...
sharon :chill bro ..dere kids...dey don't ..k now am gng 2 cntrl dem...
sharon went 2 de kids and srtd talkng 2 dem ..mean while taani kept her keg on sum food stuff and was abt 2 fall ...she clse her eyes in defear of fallng.. .
but a pair of strng arms caught her...she opnd her eyes 2 c dat rey had savd her 4rm fallng...dey both shre an LLHH momnt...
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so de chaptr ends here...
precap:
rey:u have hurtd  me a lot taani ..a lot..(took de shrt 4rm her hand&left into de room bangng de door in angry)..
taani 2 herslf:i nevr want 2 hurt u rey...but wat cld i do i have no optns left...sry rey ...i luv rey&i will be luvng u always..

so hows dat? hope u all lykd it...aftr readng pls do cmmnt abt it ..i need al ur feed back guys...it take jst 2 mins..and do hit lyk if u have lykd it...and 4r pm's add me as ur buddy...

Edited by 123renudrlng - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Res/unres
great start, taani already loves rey!! Awww!!! Loved the llhh 
Thanks for the pm
Edited by miss_neha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it dear...really nice...and precap...taani loves rey...update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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veryyy nice yar likd it so much thanx fr th pm😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow! i love it already...
and Rey... ðŸ¤£ baccho ko bhi nahi sambhal sakta...😆

update soon...cant wait...the precap sounds so interesting ðŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concert...do pm me wen u update😊
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Very nice awesome fabulous outstanding mindblowing part
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Yay!! A new TR FF!! Awesome CS!! Isme.bhi suspence... Interesting!!