...Incomplete Life to A Complete One...

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Posted: 11 years ago
Here I go with My Another OS...on our SwaRon... Do read it...tell me how did you find it !! Hope you all will like it...!!! Bear me with my mistakes...๐Ÿ˜ณ 
     ...Incomplete Life To A Complete One...

Boy- Momm'.aap iitne saalon se tadap tadap kar jee rahi ho'.ab paani sir ke upar aa gaya hai'
Boy's Mom- Hey..champ'.chalo..khana khane..fast'
Boy- AAp kyon nhi milti unse.??? Vo bhi hame miss karte honge...
Boy's Mom- ( ignoring his talks )- Neeche chalo na beta'it's too late' ( was going towards his child )
Boy- Mom..meri baat ka jawab dijiye'Kya aap un logo ko miss nhi karti hain ???
Boy's mom- ( no response n turned to go alone only downstairs )
Boy- ( Before she could go..he held with her shoulders ) MAA'..boliye'na'
Boy's Mom- ( Still no response..n eyes closed )
Boy- AAp unse pyaar nhi karti kya ab ???
Boy's Mom- ( almost shouted ) Aisa nhi hai'..mein unse ab bhi utna hi pyaar karti hun'mmein unhe bohot miss karti hun..unke paas jaana chahti hun' ( litrally sat down on the floor ) , mein ab bhi tumhare DADDY se utna hi pyaar karti hun'jitna pehle'miss him'. 

Boy made her sit on the bed'..


On the other side'.
Male- Hey..jaldi aao'.shona..khana lag gaya hai'
Female- ( hugged him ) Chalo'.mujhe bhi bohot bhuk lag rahi hai'
Male- ( kissed her forehead )
They walked down'.sat on the dining chair'to have their dinner'
Male- Aaj khane mein kya hai'????
Ramu Kaka- Aaj INDIAN BIYAANI aur apka favourite CHOCO CAKE banaya hai'.
The both (sitting) were shocked !!!
Female- Indian Biryaani !!!! Aa..aaj'ye , kaise ??? ( Tears were out to flow from her eyes )
Male- Kaka'vo..ye sab , matlab Indian biryaani aur Choco cake specially ab nahi banta'. ( He then saw Her'sad )
Ramu Kaka- Par..ye to Sabse pasandida item haina ??
Male- ( Ignored his talks ) AAp kab aaye ?
Ramu Kaka- Vo..mein itne saalo baad aaya hun kal..bohot yaad aati hai aap SAB ki'
Female- Vo'mujhe..bhuk nahi hai'me..mein chal...ti hun'.
She ran upstairs'. He also stood up'.
Ramu Kaka- yaha..aur koi nahi hai ??
He stood still for a second and then..
Male- Mein apse baad mein baat karta hun'kaka'.
He went upstairs'where she went'.
He saw her inside her room,leaning on to   the window'.and sobbing'.
He firmly kept his hand on her shoulders'.
Male- Hey'kya ho gaya'.don't cry'
Female- ( wiped her tears'.turned facing him ) Kuch nhhi DADDY'bas aisehi'.
Daddy- Acha''.don't lie' Missing your bhai..and muma na ??
Girl- (Nodded in yes ) Mujhe un dono ke paas jaana hai..daddy'..
Daddy- Baby'you know the conditions na'
Girl- ( Hugged him tightly and then started to cry') Daddy' mein to apne dukh mein ye bhi bhul gayi ki aap bhi unko kitna miss karte ho'
Daddy- ( Hugged her'.and stroked her hairs..) Hmm..SWARNA'.I really do'.
Tears were flowing from his eyes also'.
Daddy- ( In mind ) Miss you SHARON and CHAMP'..
Swarna- Daddy'I Love them and miss them very much'.


On the different side'..
Boy made her sit on the bed'.
Boy- Maa'.please don't cry'.aap kyon nahi chalti unke paas'ham sab khush rahenge'
Boy's Mom- You know the circumstances'.na beta'.
Boy- Ye sab kab tak chalega , mom'.Mujhe bhi apne Dad aur Sissy'se milna chahta hun aur Mein aapko aise nhi dekh sakta hun' aap apni beti se nahi milna chahti kya ??
Boy's mom- TANMAY'beta...Mein bhi unse milna chahti hun'.but ( started crying..)
They both hugged each other'.
Boy's Mom- ( In mind ) Miss you SWAYAM and ANGEL'.
Boy- Momm'.I Love them and miss my Daddy'and Swarna'very much'..

Here in Swarna's Home'.

Daddy- Hey..chalo bas'ab' kal to kuch special hai..a big surprise'
Swarna- Daddy'surpise !!!!! Acha'my 18th birthday'.
Daddy- Yup'angel..now go'..
Swarna went to her room'and her Daddy Downstairs'to meet Ramu Kaka'

Downstairs..in the hall'.
Ramu Kaka- SWAYAM'baba'Sharon aur hamara Tanmay nahi dikh raha hai'.ye dono kaha hai'aur Swarna ko kya ho gaya hai'???
Swayam- Kaka'.bohot kuch ho gaya'.baat ye thi ki jab Swarna 1 saal ki hui thi'to ham sab uski party ke lie hotel jaa rahe the aura aate aate achanak se Sharon ki mom ko chakkar aane lage'. Hamne unhe hospital me admit karwaya'thode dino tak vo thik thi' par fir heart attack ke kaaran'unki'death ho gayi' aur is wajah se Sharon ke Dad'(jo ki Swaron ke rishte ko pehle se hi pasand nahi karte the'unhone tab accept kia jab Tanmay hua kyoki he was a boy')'ko is baat ka sadma pohocha, unhe laga ki ye sab Swarna ke birthday par hua to vo responsible hai'aur fir unhone Swarna ko alag kar dia..Sharon ko dhamki di ki use mujhse alag rehna hona..and Swarna se bhi..nahi to kuch bhi ho sakta hai'''
Ramu Kaka- Vo aisa kaise kar sakte'unhe Swarna se itni nafrat kyon hai'.mujhe samajh nahi aa raha'.
Swayam- Kuch nahi kar sakte hum'ab to Sharon ka ghar se nikalna bhi nahi hota'Dad use nahi jaane dete kahin'yeh sab kab thik hoga'!!
Meri Sharon'mera Beta'.. ( Tears dropped from his eyes..n he kept his palms..on his face..)
Ramu Kaka- Bohot bura hua'.
Swayam- Acha..mein sone jaata hun..kal Swarna ka birthday hai'aap yaad se use wish kar dijiega'.
Ramu kaka- Haan beta'..

Now it was 12 night Sharp'..
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU'..
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO DEAR SWARNA''
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU''"

Swarna woke up''.from her sleep'..and immediately hugged Swayam !!
Swayam- Happy birthday..Angel'..
Swarna- Thank you, Daddy'.you are the best'.
Swayam- Ye'Gift'but you will open it in the morning'
Swarna- Hmm..okk'acha abhi chale'verandah mein'
Swayam- Hmm'something is waiting for you'.
Swarna- Lets go'
They both reached the verandah'.and saw a beautiful gift'kept there'
Swarna- Giftt'Daddy'wo raha gift..MAA ka gift !!!
Swayam- Hmm..open it fast'
She opened it and
Swayam- Kaisa hai'??
Swarna- Awesome hai''dekho..Maa ne har saal ki tarah is baar bhi gift bheja..aur bhai ka envelope kaha gaya ??
Swayam- Ye dekho..ye raha''
She opened the envelope , found a diamond studded chain..and an invitation card'!!
Swarna- Daddyy'.is baar bhi vahi ..party'but hamesha ki tarah..Mom aur bhai nahi rahenge' ( Little sad )
Swayam- Hey..angel..buut see the love na'they always want you to be happy..on your birthday..and is baar bhi ek party'just for you' For them, you will go na..??
Swarna- Yess Daddy'..aur jo Mom ne mujhe gift me dress di hai..mein vahi pehnungi'
Swayam- Acha..ab to so jao'
They went off to sleep'.

Morning Time'' Sharon's Home'..
Sharon- Tanmay'kaha ho ?? ( shouting from room )
Tanmay came running to her'.
Tanmay- Yaa'mom'..
Sharon- Ye lo tiffin'.and kha lena , bhulna mat''
Tanmay- Yaa'mom'.. aur meine Swarna ko gift bhej diya'.
Sharon- Thank you'.( kissed him on his forehead )
Tanmay- Byee'
Sharon bid him bye..and took her baby's photo and..kissed it'
Sharon- Happy birthday Angel'.God bless you 'miss you'.

 
Swayam's Mansion'.
Swarna woke up , took a Photo , kissed it'.
Swarna- Thank you Mom..and Bhai for the gift'.Love you , miss you'.
And then kept it aside'.
At Evening'PARTY'HALL'.
Swarna was looking gorgeous in the red dress'.
She was smiling but her smile was not from her heart , it was fake'.
She was missing THEM''Swayam was also looking best'.in his attire'
After some time'.
Swarna announced..something'
Hello everyone present'..Thank you all for your wishes'. I just want to speak some lines for My Lovely Mother..Bhai..and Daddy'.
A sweet song for My Mom'Mom..Love you !!!

 

" Maa mujhe apni aanchal me chupa le..
Gale se lagaa le'
Ke yaad teri aati hai' MAA'..

Meine tujhe na hi suna..na hi dekha hai'
Bas tasvir me hi tujhko mehsus kia hai'
Teri yaad mujhe tadpaati hai' MAA'..

Maa ki kami mujhe mehsus hui thi jab'
School ke function me mujhe chidhate the sab'
Mujhe teri yaad bohot aati hai.. MAA'..

Papa ka pyaar pure jahaan se pyaara hai'
Roz unki aakhon mein ek dard dikhta hai..
Unko bhi teri bohot yaad aati hai' MAA'.

Kabhi na paya meine mere bhaiya ka pyaar'
Hun mein bohot unse milne ko bekaraar'
Jaldi se aa na unki bhi yaad aati hai'. MAA'.  ( sobbing in between..)

Papa ke aansun mujhse dekhe nahi jaate'
Vo bhi apne bete se milne ko tadap jaate'
Yaad unki harpal sataati hai.. MAA'.

Maa tu mujhe khaana to khila de'
Ek pyaari si mujhko lori to sunaa de'
Teri yaad mujhe rulaa ti hai' MAA'.

Tu mere paas aaja na MAA'
Meri ye pukaar sun le na MAA'
Teri awaaz sunne ke lie taras gayi hun MAA'
Aake mere maathe pe apna haath fer de na MAA'
Ghar ko firse Khushiyon se vgar to de na MAA'


Maa tu mujhe apne seene se laga le'
Mere maathe ko chum le'
Bhai se mile le'
Papa ko pyaar se Gale to laga le'.
Tere bina to ye ghar sunaa hai'."

She was literally crying on the stage'sat down'on it'.

Ab gale lag jaa na mere..mein yahi hun..tere paas...''. A sweet angelic voice'.was heard among all the people'. All the people got side to see who she was'

Swayam turned to see that person'..
Swarna also looked up to see who was SHE''.
 She was none other than their SHARON'.. standing open arms'..infront of her'.
Swarna- MAAA'' and rushed in her arms , Sharon also hugged her as tightly as she could'. Tears of happiness were flowing from both Mother and Daughter'..
Swayam saw his Champ'. Tanmay ran towards him and hugged him'.
Swayam reciprocate the same'..


Swayam- Missed you my Champ'.
Tanmay- Missed you too daddy'.. and they broke the hug'..
Swarna- Maa'.aap yaha ho..mujhe yakeen nahi ho raha'..
Sharon cupped her face and kissed her on her forehead, her cheeks'..
Swarna also kissed her mom on  her cheeks'
Swayam's eyes were full og tears''Tears of happiness'. Tanmay and Swayam one more time shared a side hug'

 
Sharon then turned towards Swayam and had a sweet smile and then both hugged each other..for much time'.Swayam kissed Sharon on her forehead'. Both were emotional'.He stroked her hairs'.


and then Swarna hugged her Bhai'. She was crying badly'.and said-
Swarna- Missed you bhai'..love you !!!
Tanmay- Love you too sis'.
They broke the hug'.Same with SwaRon'.
The party went Awesome'


At Night'
In SwaRon's Room'..
Sharon was seeing the beauty of the room'filled with their pictures'.
Swarna entered the room with Tanmay'.
Sharon sat on the bed'..
Swaron laid her head on Sharon's Lap'.Tanmay went to Swayam'..
Sharon- Beta'sorry..jo mamma ne kia'
Swarna- Maa'ab koi sorry nahi'ab aap aa gayi ho na'aur bhai bhi'sab thik ho jaega'.
Sharon- Haan'sab thik ho jaega'.
Swarna- AAj'ka birthday'mera best birthday rahega'.
Sharon- Hmm'aur Daddy..( cut between by Swarna..)
Swarna- Haan..Daddy ne mera itna zyada khyaal rakha hai'aur mujhe apke haath ki biryaani khana hai'n choco cake bhi'meine itne saalo mein kabhi nhi khaya'kyoki Daddy ne btaya tha vo aapke favourite the aur aap bohot acha bnati hai'aap nahi thi to fir meine use nahi khaya'..
Sharon- Aww'baby'mein kal hi bna dungi'. ( Stroking her hairs..)
Swayam and Tanmay came inside'
Swayam was pleased with their bonding'.he sat beside Sharon'
Tanmay- Daddy'aap dono ke bina hum kaise rahen hai ye hame hi pata hai..missed you all lot'
Sharon- Swayam'..missed you both'
Swarna was sleeping on her mother's lap'.
Tanmay- Maa'mein Swarna ko kamre mein le jaata hun'aur fir mein bhi so jaata hun'kal office jana hai'.
SwaRon- Ohhkk'

He went off with Swarna'.

Now SwaRon were alone in the room'
Swayam held her by shoulders'
Swayam- Sharon'tumhe pata bhi nahi hoga meine tumko kitna zyada miss kia'' Tumhare bina har pal kaise kata hai..mein bta nahi sakta'
Sharon- Swayu'ab dekho mein aa gayi hun na'.ab sab thik hai.
Swayam- Lekin , tumhare DAD'
Sharon- vo ek lambi kahaani hai'bas ye samajh lo unhe unki galti ka ehsaas ho gaya '
Swayam- Sharon, I love you'.
Sharon- I love you too'.Pata hai'.tum jab chhod ke chale gaye tab meine Tanmay ko saambhala akele'kuch pareshaniyaa bhi aayi but tumhe bata hi nahi paayi'. Swayam , mujhe bohot dukh ho raha tha'.mein tumhe kabhi chhod ke jaana nahi chahti hun'..swayam tum mujhe kabhi chhod ke mat jaana'.
Swayam- Promise karta hun Sharon, kuch bhi ho jaye mein apni family ko kabhi kuch nahi hone dunga'.aur aaj se saaari baatho ko bhul jao and we will start our New life'.dekho ab hame hamare Angel aur Champ ki Shaadi bhi to karwaana hai'
Sharon- Haan'vo to hai'( Laughed lightly )
Swayam- Siren !!! Pata hai tum abhi bhi utni hi pyaari lagti ho jitni pehle'
Sharon- ( blushed ) Tum bhi na'.
Swayam- Aaye..hayee..meri Shar'..
Sharon blushed more..and then hugged him , he did the same'
Swayam- Acha..ab sone ka samay ho gaya hai'
Sharon- Hmm'lets go'.
Swayam- Are nahi'pehle hamesha ki tarah'meri GOOD NIGHT KISS'.to de do'
Sharon- ( glared at him ) Pagal ho gaye ho kya !!!
Swayam- Yup'abhi bhi..hun'..tumahre lie'.I want it nahi to mein nahi sounga'
Sharon blushed and then they kissed each other'..had a short sweet kiss as they always had'.
Swayam- Thank you converting'.
                       My INCOMPLETE LIFE TO A COMPLETE ONE'.!!!!  
'and then slept cuddled into each other..felling each other's warmth'.under the blanket !!! And hoping for A BEST FUTURE AHEAD'!!!


Phewww !!! Hope this was a good reading for you all...Love you all...
Do hit like and comment...they encourage me to write more...and please try to give a big comment !!! Do tell how was the poem..self made !!!

Love ,
Sakshi...โค๏ธ



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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Swthrt...๐Ÿค—

I know m extremely late to edit my comment here...i read it the day u updated it...its so. beautiful ...it moved me into tears..this is by far ur best work...loved the concept of separation..and the song...its beyond awesome..amazing...

The beginning when u showed SWARON longing for each other ...and with their kids ...my heart ached for swaron ..n both the kids...tanmay n swarna..who spend their childhood without love of both the parents...the pain was visible...they are mature to understand their parents love n pain as well..

The song was so beautiful..the reason being its on mother..the replica of god on earth...loved these lines

Maa tu mujhe khaana to khila de'
Ek pyaari si mujhko lori to sunaa de'
Teri yaad mujhe rulaa ti hai' MAA'.


Loved the reunion..the sweet cute moments SWARON shared ...

   My INCOMPLETE LIFE TO A COMPLETE ONE'.!!!!  
'and then slept cuddled into each other..felling each other's warmth'.under the blanket !!! And hoping for A BEST FUTURE AHEAD'!!!

Loved the OS..so beautiful...they truly make each other complete ..

Luv
Deep
Edited by deep_Tanha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey dats a very Swt OS i loved d Song dat u used 4 Swarna...
and i loved SwaRon at d last Swayams still being naughty awww how cute...
Thanx 4 d pm and keep writing more
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Posted: 11 years ago
Thats like my guru apology accepted..:p
Coming to os
I know it was indeed a long one but I found it short
When I start reading this os I thought swayam left sharon coz of some other girl hehe but wo to swarna nikli lol
It was a lil emotional os.Loved the ending naughty swayam..:p
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Loved itEdited by sadiyaswaron - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
sweet os.. loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved d update.. awesome..
loved each everythin of d update..
it was superb.. coz of sharon's dad they were separated for yrs...
poor swaron n kids..
both ove each other n even miss them like old days..
loved d bondin of mother - son n father - daughter n sis - bro...
even now swayam s in his old naughty state..
loved d endin..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome os!!
Da song was too emotional!!
Beautifully penned as always!!!
Luvd it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey my sweet 16...
Just simply awesome os dear...
N what song!!!!! yaar...loved it. ๐Ÿ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
how did u manage yaar to b ahead always...? heh ehehe
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Posted: 11 years ago
nyc sakshi ...good wrk...
 
heart touching poem...describing pain of separation...desire to meet the worlds best gift  ..ange l..our mom...
 
 
keep going ...super liked