Collab FF: IPK 2.0-Doing it right#3, Ch23, p144 - Page 88

From the start to the end you just didn't make this update about Arnav and Khushi. You've made it all about Arnav and Khushi and their desires, longing, double meanings, touch and love.

They like to corner each other don't they?

He wants to give her romance? Well you gave us plenty.

The Sheetal dialogue and Payal and Aakash's talk with ArHi about what they feel for each other and their SR completely cracked me up 😆

I absolutely loved the update. You captured their inherent attraction and talks of marriage hinting towards a possible future very well.

Both sisters sure know how to take charge and get what they want!  Is the cat and mouse game ending?  Are they ready to admit their feelings?  Or just giving into the passion.  Great update!

my smile was visible.  you are the master of acute observation

Once again an amazing update

An awesome update dear...😛
Paayal is eagerly waiting for her suhaagraat...😉
for Arnav and Khussi..."aag toh dono taraf hai baraabar lagi huyi.."

loved the update Asr flirting and teasing Khushi was just wicked cute and then their sibling conversation was totally nut and cute Payal is afraid Akash did not want her and arnav and Khushi one room hope they remember its payal and akash sr and not theirs loved the update beautifully done

Edited by dumas - 11 years ago

That was so intense and passionate!!

i loved that this update was mostly about arnav and khushi with a little bit of akash-payal. 

Arnav Khushi flirting..wow..

Originally posted by: nikita_88

Awesome update! 

I loved the siblings conversations and the way you flicked between the two...

Finally Khushi has been hired lol and you wrote out the kiss lol... 

I can't wait for the next part