FF: Jaane Doh Naa Th# 2 Ch 31 Pg 143 [Jun 10,'13] - Page 18

I was so waiting for this particular update.i wanted khushi to know arnav too suffered,though thats not an justification for what he had done.loved it to bits.

Superb part! Continue soon

Originally posted by: basket_101

Reserve :)

Bedtime for now, so will come back and comment tomorrow :D

Edited by basket_101 - 11 years ago

Ohhh, I loved the update!!!!!!!

Awesome update...very well written... Coninue soon...

that was such a superb n lovely update..

loved it so much..

ayesha worried abt khushi..

n what arnav said...touched yaar...

n khushi believed too..

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...

Earlier when Arnav wanted to woo her back, I did not want her to succumb to his charm.. because he was still acting like the pompous jerk that he used to be..

I liked that he knew she was awake haha I could totally visualize that in my head with him looking in the mirror at her.

And I'm loving the transition into this emotional side of Arnav which he's tried too long to hide, and Khushi's slow realization of his feelings.

Can't wait to see how things go down at Raizada Mansion, I'm guessing she'll realize more of what Arnav was like after she left him and what actually happened when Shyam left.

But as usual, TOTALLY LOVED THISSS TEEHEE :)

Love this ff and the way you are walking us though what makes Khushi & Arnav tick.
I must be the only one who is not so thrilled with the friendship between Arnav & Ayesha. What can I say- I just want all the emotions that make Arshi - the good, the bad, the ugly- to be owned exclusively by them. But that's my problem. Thanks for sharing your wonderful writing.

Omg, that was soo good! I just caught up on the last few updates and i am just speechless.

Most stories are predictable, because the reader understands what the character feels in the initial chapters and from that deduce their actions. But this is completely different. Every chapter something happens - we get a new perspective on what is going on. Up untill now, i hated arnav. His guts, his arrogance everything about his attitude. But in one chapter thats all changed. Now he is the one to be pitied, he is the poor one. And its all because of your writing. The way u convince us about each character is trully amazing.

Khushi on the other hand... She is one hell of a character. She has so many shades to her and the funny thing is i can relate to each one them. I get her hatred, i get her love. But to tell u the truth, i have no idea how she is going to react seeing her family. Is she going to forgive them? Is she going to be angry? Is she going to go back to her old self? All these questions and the best part is which ever way u take the story, i will be convinced.

Honestly Archi, take a bow!

You are such a good writer that its a pleasure reading your story. Continue soon!