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VirIka SS: A Broken Mirror..
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Part 1: I am sorry..



" Viren Ji! I am sorry... I am really sorry! " Jeevika said, looking at Viren's photograph..
Viren was not at home as he went to do his work late at night.

Tears rolled down her eyes as she packed her bag to leave the Vadhera Mansion. It was the last day of Jeevika, in the Vadhera Mansion. It was a dark night and everyone was asleep in the home. Jeevika Vadhera, -- The last day where she can use the name!

Jeevika went to Virat and Maanvi's room. She looked at the picture of her and Mannu and tears gushed out her eyes. It was the third time the sisters were getting separated. First in Jeevika's marriage, then in Maanvi's marriage, then NOW! The sisters who promised each other that they won't get separated had to get now as the situation was as such.

" I am sorry Mannu... I am sorry for leaving you! But, I have to go! I deserve the punishment for the mistake I have done! I am sorry Mannu.. " Jeevika whispered in silence as Maanvi was deep in sleep..

After visiting everyone, Jeevika came to the mandhir. Tears flowed from her eyes and they were as red as a chilli. She looked at the god!

" Please save my family from every obstacle. Please be with them all the time. Please.. And I am sorry for all the mistake I have done. Sorry... " Jeevika prayed for her family's well-being and went from there.

As she reached the main door, all the memories flashed through her mind.. --- Both happy and sad times! The first time she stepped into the Vadhera Mansion, the first time she cooked, the first laugh she had with the family, the first time Viren and Jeevika hugged, the first kiss they had and everything! Even the Karan! All his words flashed through her mind.

" Jeevika! I don't want to see your face! I am just annoyed to see you! I am just freaking annoyed Jeevika! Just don't come in front of me! " Viren's angry words echoed within her and she decided that she MUST leave then!

With great difficulty, she stepped out of the house and went towards the bus-station.
She tried hard to forget that fight with Viren but she couldn't.
The fight was haunting her as she boarded the bus, to Hrishikesh.

FLASHBACK STARTS!

Swamini Bua told Viren that Jeevika told her that Karan tried to do some misdeeds to her and the family. She told Viren everything that happened before she collapsed. Viren was infuriated with anger!

He stomped towards his room where Jeevika was folding her clothes. He locked the room so that no one can hear him. Jeevika saw Viren and went to him.

" Viren Ji, How is bua? " She asked.

But, Viren did not respond. Jeevika understood that something was wrong.

" Viren Ji, what happened? Why aren't you replying me? Tell me! What happened? "

Viren still kept silent.. He was irritated!!

" Viren Ji! I am your wife! I have the rights to know what's wrong! Please tell me! Tell me Viren Ji! "

At last, Viren broke his silence.

" What do you want to know, Jeevika? Don't you know what you have done? How many times I have told you not to tell that, but why did you do it? Why Jeevika? Why?? " Viren shouted at Jeevika.

Jeevika was astonished at Viren's behavior.

" What are you trying to say Viren Ji? I don't understand! "

" Oh! You don't?
How many times I told you not to say about Karan to bua?
But why did you tell?? Why Jeevika?? "

" I...I..I.. I told because..."

Just then, Jeevika paused. She didn't want to tell why she told the truth. Because, she knew Viren will be really hurt if he knows what Swamini bua condemned her about her parents and values that forced her to tell the truth.

" What I Jeevika? "

" I am just sorry Viren Ji. I am sorry! "

" Sorry?? Is that enough to heal what my Bua is going through now? What are you going to do for it? " Viren asked, angrily.

" I will try my best Viren Ji!I will try to change Bua. I know I have done a mistake by braking your trust on me. But.. I am just sorry! " Jeevika said.

" Stop it Jeevika! I am fed up! Listen Jeevika! I don't want to see your face! I am just annoyed to see you! I am just freaking annoyed Jeevika! Just don't come in front of me! Leave me alone! Just go away! "

" So, you want me to leave Viren Ji? "

" Hell Yes! " bellowed Viren, going out, banging his room door.

Jeevika's eyes became watery.

FLASHBACK ENDS!

These last words of Viren hurt Jeevika so much. She was deeply hurt by Viren's words. Tears started to flow from her eyes as she started to worry too much about Maanvi, her soul.
Questions ran in her mind.. " How can Mannu live without me? What will she go through? Who will take care of Viren Ji? What will Viren Ji do without me? "

She decided to get out of the bus when Viren's last few words flashed in her mind again.
Jeevika knew she has hurt Viren, Maanvi and her family. But she had no other choice but to leave her loved ones to keep her loved ones happy..

She sat in the bus, sad, worried and her face was watery, as the bus moved towards Hrishikesh.

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Thank you:)
Please forgive me for any mistakes that I have made.

Preetha..

If you want to read my another SS on VirIka, check this link:

As many people wanted me to continue this, I am going to make it a SS! 😃
Thank you for your support!

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Part 1:
I am sorry..

Note 1 (6th post) :
Buddy please..

Part 2:
The Depression

Note 2 (1st post) : No update for the week..




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little.angel56 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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here am unreserving my comment!!
Hello firstly,
And let me congratulate myself,
Me the first one to comment, balle balle
😎 🥳 [:D/] ⭐️
Enough of this ab,
Coming to the update, i loved it so much
Muahahhahahhaha
And the best thing was that you started it from the very point they'd left y'dayy!
Awesomely composed and wriiten
I told you you're good at writting. Her eyes were as red as chilli loved this metaphor!
Thanks for the pm love! 😛
Edited by little.angel56 - 12 years ago
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#UNRES#

Preetzzz! 🤗

What a beautiful beautiful update. 😃
Everything very very well described.

Loved every bit of it. 😳

You should definitely continue it. Loved it.

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Preetz wht an update.
It was awesome,brilliant,suprb n my list goes there on.
I lud it to the core.
Very well n written n beautifuly executed.
Edited by Virika-luv - 12 years ago
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awesome awesome..update d next part soon
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Originally posted by: rocksravya11

awesome awesome..update d next part soon


Its an OS dear.
I am not continuing this.
If many people want me to continue, I will, for sure:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you the two of you for your comments!
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LOveddd it.. :):):):):):)
good job preetha:)
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just an awesome one...
i known this is an os,then too i do want u to continue yar,...
plss do consider us🤪
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's beautiful ML! ❤️
I'm really glad to see that u r a terrific writer also!🤗
Edited by ...Jes... - 12 years ago

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