OS| The Very First Time - Page 11

One request... Please go bat shit crazy more often! ;)


I've read this OS twice. I just adore it, it's simply perfect <3


His confession and her teasing ^_^


Just brilliant! Oh and Shyam wasn't in it making all the more better :D

i think it is a writers complex.

This was absolutely phenomenal. So utterly beautifuL! ❤️

And the vm in the end is the perfect end to it, it seems to me.😊

that was b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l..
aahhh always wondered what if!! the man named shyam manoher jha was not there in that eventful day n also imagined it in my head..
so this story was really a treat to read and you penned it down just amazingly..
loved the part where khushi laughed out loud upon hearing those words..that was so khushi!
thank you for choosing the concept give it a shape to cherish in my IPK deprived world..

P.S. loved the banner.. that was simple yet so exquisite!!

Very nicely written and it made me remember all their moments which I loved.

dt was tooo cute n lovely..:)

i bet most of us thought n imagined sumthin lyk dis in Payash's weddin part..whr he said..baat krni h tmse..

aisa xpct kia tha maine..bt Shyam ruined..:/

 

lol

wow..:)

lovely.

If only... Thats all I can say.

Beautifully written.

Sona Sona Sona. Itna achcha kyun likhti ho? Kaise likhti ho?

When he kissed Khushi again on the terrace, I felt as if he was kissing me and I could actually feel it (I am turning in to a besharam :-P )


His realization coupled with not shying away from it is what I think he felt even when he walked up the stairs to the terrace to meet her, the smile on his face intact.


Only FFs could give our hearts what it yearns for. *sigh*


P.S. Yes I am answering PMs now :-P

How I loved reading this OS. Don't know how I missed reading it.

the crazy ones are the idiots who messed up one of the best serials ever by introducing the forced marriage, non-existent pregnancy and kidnapping and worse, the mrs india garbage