OS| The Very First Time - Page 15

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Posted: 8 years ago
Sona Sona Sona. Itna achcha kyun likhti ho? Kaise likhti ho?

When he kissed Khushi again on the terrace, I felt as if he was kissing me and I could actually feel it (I am turning in to a besharam :-P )

His realization coupled with not shying away from it is what I think he felt even when he walked up the stairs to the terrace to meet her, the smile on his face intact.

Only FFs could give our hearts what it yearns for. *sigh*

P.S. Yes I am answering PMs now :-P
Posted: 8 years ago
How I loved reading this OS. Don't know how I missed reading it.
I just loved the banner. It goes so well with the story.
Loved the song too. Beautiful.
Wish there had been no terrace scene with Shyam and this scene had been part of the story line.
It was so well written. Loved how just holding hands means so much. 
They don't need grand gestures to show that they belong to each other.
There were no scenes of grand passion but that kiss on the cheek told its own story.
Needless to say I loved it.
Could you please PM me when you write something next. 
I don't want to miss out on reading something you write.
Posted: 8 years ago
the crazy ones are the idiots who messed up one of the best serials ever by introducing the forced marriage, non-existent pregnancy and kidnapping and worse, the mrs india garbage

you and your ilk are the sane ones and the ones keeping us sane

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