wow brilliant update dear π and congratulations Morefor the new treadπ€
Thanks KS...π€
wow brilliant update dear π and congratulations Morefor the new treadπ€
Originally posted by: IsYaRoCHeR
Brilliant update, Indu! πππ Congratulations for the new thread! π€βοΈ
It's just a wonderful part.. The story is beautifully and clearly written... Finally, all the love they have been longing for each other have been showered.. The Kiss.. βΊοΈ!! Waiting for the next part.. Hope Mishti will tell everything.. πUpdate ASAP! This time I read without your PM! π But, I will still need it,,! Good job, buddy! π€
Originally posted by: sheema_rajoo
Indu first congrats on the second thread..
I really don't know what to say anymore.
You have made me cry yet again but this time you made me break down in tears. I'm just too overwhelmed reading this, more than I've ever been in my entire life..
Just when I thought how Sparsh could get any better than this, you again proved me wrong and knocked me off my feet.
The romance element and the bond between Yash and Aarti in this update was so heavenly that you've created this pang in me.
I've always loved my single life but now I'm feeling miserable being single thanks to this spectacular updates. You've created this how I wish...feeling in me..
Indu I'll say it again, not many people have this talent to move someone with their work. You did not only move me and made me feel so much in ways I never thought I would and could but you have also created this new perspective on how strong a bond can be. The romance was pure bliss to read.. I felt so much more passion and romance via this compared to x-rated scenes π³..This is beyond brilliant..
All the hugs and jhappis I can offer virtually will not be enough to express my happiness and feelings reading your Sparsh. You're beyond a fantastic writer Indu but for whatever it means, here is a pyaar bhari hug and jhappi for youπ€. If I ever meet you in person, don't be surprised if I cry my eyes out and just cling onto you for a while.. That's how overwhelmed I am with your work..
Loved it to the core..
Originally posted by: cynthiagem
The update is always never enough. I always get so engrossed in the story that I can stay up all night to finish it just like a novel that I find interesting. Looking forward to the next. Thank you Indu!
Indu I think Ji comes automatically for you for the work you doFirst of all congrats for your new Thread..
From kids innocence to Aarti maturity to handle it
Yash seeing all emotions n coming to claim what was his n n always be truly symbolizes in a piece of cake
Then Mishti feeling the guilt n emotions for babuji n again not caring for herself is truly called a selfless soul n her soulmate is her yash who don't need her to say a single word n yet feel her each n a very true emotions
Then comes AARYA moment where Mishti surrenders with great difficult n after coming up from turmoil of emotions to the place she belongs to' in his YASHJI embrace or I shud say "SPARSH" of each other to reach the warmness to thr soul that completes a human'.. awww that whole sequence hats off to GC n KS actors emotions I can literally imagine on them'n now the truth which she kept under her hearth is coming in one good sentence ""It's not about you and me any more'.it never was. I won't insult her sacrifice.""
Hats off ji all i can say i will read agn to register each n every beautiful word coming from your Kalam( computer keys i mean J)
Yipeee i am jumping around hey congrats on the second thread !!!!!
so beautiful loved it palak mishti and ansh convo was awesome , their emotional bonding and the passionate tax of "mishya" βΊοΈβΊοΈ yash pain and mishti trying her best to stay away from him touched my heart very painful indeed but their closeness made me smile, blush, and revisited some of the beautiful moments of my life.Awesome Pal continue waiting for the next update. Thanks for the PM. I read it early in the morning itself but i was so lost emotionally i was unable to comment yaar. Thanks for the wonderful update dear greedy for more.π INDU my friend well ππΌ done *hugs* π€
Originally posted by: miti16295
congrats for new threadamazing updateπLoved the way Mishti answered Palakwaiting for the next
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