omg such an intense beautiful story...
Abhiya reunited and that epilogue was loved it
Originally posted by: ..juhi..
wow...awesome ending...Piya was a princess herself...soo cool...
Originally posted by: -ChitraRocking-
fabulous update dear absolutely amazing story ending loved everything abhay was truly awesome piya is damn lucky to have him !!🤗
Originally posted by: .Rhythm.
res :)
-------------------------------------------------EDITED----------------------------------------------------It was an awesome story Ani. Loved it totally.The way u hav described the bonding between Haseena and Abhay is really gud.Everything was solved between Abhay and his father. Loved there convo. Abhay teased his Father.Thanks! Glad to know that you loved it.😊Piya and Abhay had exchanged rings matching each other's eye color.Abhay found a good way to convince Vishesh and Mishri.Mewar's planning is explained really well. For a moment I felt like I was reading the town planning from harappan civilization. 👏Really? THANK U baby! 😃Abhay looked like the prince of Piya's dreams, mounted on a white horse. I guess Abhay wore a white tunic purposely, so that Piya wud imagine herself to be in her dreamland , and wud go with him easily, back to the palace.😉 😆Maybe.😆Abhay knew Piya's weak point and easily persuaded her to go the palace with him.Abhay's lie made Piya fume with anger. How cud he lie to her so easily?After all no Rajput lies in front of Lord Shiva. 😉Poor Abhay . Piya didn't see that it was Abhay who was hurt.Abhay finally voiced out his feelings for Piya.You didn't miss it this time also, right? U mentioned the thread's name in ur story. U r really gud at this dear.I love doing that. And great to see you noticing it every time.😊Abhay kept his words abt changing things. This was surprising that Piya was a princess.Abhay made everything perfect. He matched himself with Piya and mish to Sid.They even made the painting together.The ending part was perfect. Piya and Sid became best frnds.Abhay's son loved to paint his nose more than the canvas.Yeshh😆The Last Line was totally lovely and perfect.Loved the story.Continue writing this type of the work. 😊The last line was my fav too. Thank you for reading Nishu. Always love your comments.😃
Originally posted by: cuteariya
fantastic amazing update
wow abhay's dad came to talk to him 😃
first time after his mom death abhay felt his dad pain 😭
abhay just forgave his dad after his true confession 😃Yeah. A true confession does have the power to heal wounds. Isn't it? 😊yippee abhay went to find pia 😃
Vishesh wanted to go find pia but abhay didn't let him he was jealous of Vishesh 😆What can be done? Abhay had no idea what vishesh and Piya actually were. So, yeah.😆pia was so surprised to see abhay there 😲
loll abhay had to trick pia to bring her back 😉
pia was mad at abhay for lying her abt mishri
finally abhay confess his feeling to pia 😃
uff but pia refused abhay bcoz according to her abhay have to get married with mishri
OMG abhay found the truth that pia is mishri & vishesh sister 😲
wow abhay convince pia that mishri & Siddharth r in love
yippee abhiya got married & became king & queen 🥳
loll abhay & mishri still were jealous with each other bcoz both wanted to be pia's favorite 🤣
poor Siddharth had to guard pia's canvas color & all stuff bcoz it was danger from abhay & mishri 🤣
awe abhiya got son prabat is just like his parents so cute 😃
it was lovely to read dear 🤗
hope to get more from u 😃Glad to know that you loved it dear. Thank you for reading.😃
Originally posted by: mahi4ever
Fantabulous👏 everything abt dis part is heart melting . Hope u write some more of dis kind😆
Originally posted by: ILoveToRead.
It is indescribable the way you write... incredibly pleasant I would say :)Thanks! 😃Amazing update! Do write more dear :)Eagerly waiting to read more from you 😳Thanks for pm indu di 😃
Originally posted by: bestpasstime
It is wonderfull anita i loved it
Colours of love awww...Its amazingly written😊
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