YOU ARE MY HEARTBEAT(2):PG.155 NOTE - Page 67

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awww m luvin zaine more n more
N d word loser also sound romantic 2 me 4m virika mouth hehe
Update soon n don't b upset coz of some people
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Posted: 11 years ago
i came this forum everyday only for reading virika stories and yes this is my favorite one i just want to see a baby like zaaine in serial too.would love to see a good emotional bonding between viren and zaainne and i hope now jeevika will get more time for family
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Posted: 11 years ago
You bitch, no you idiot, no you duffer, no you stupid!! Whatever!

On century page? You really need a thrashing, Aly will postpone her updates too.

You write so awesome updates and ask your readers to crave and wait for more, arghh! Not fair you see! I mean and then you see i write awesome?

Aly needs to slap Karina. No, punch her ðŸ˜ƒ ðŸ˜¡

Viren just wraped his arms around Jeevika hugging her and getting comfortable. 
Okay this line, really! And the later conversation,. It melted my heart, just a simple line could. because it was so natural. i could really imagine the whole thing in front of me then!

j - "I don't know. Turn your romantic brain on. Someone got pissed at me last night, so now here's your opportunity"
My pooor Viren! Hehe, even if was pissed off, he has to think something romantic for them. ðŸ˜†

And when they both smiled at Zaaine for his puzzle. The proud parent smile. Your details are so mesmerizing kays!

You trapped me. Couldn't say no yourself, involved me then huh"
I know! Like Jeevika you are so smart. hehe. viren is the poor but the happiest soul in this story!!

And how she helped Zoya was such a gift back. Like you framed it really well. You have good horses that work in your mind. And, Zoya and Jeevika, both are made from the same fur it seems, both don't tell their husbands anything! Gosh!

And the soul sister part! ðŸ˜ƒ Viren your taunts are awesome man!

And zaaine will sleep in his room, aww baby zaaine!

He is such an understanding and much much mature than his age! Like i really adore him! Babies should be like Zaaine!

Are you pregnant? 
Omfg! I was really laughing out loud then! But how you portray her feelings after it! commendable! No words fit in for you! 

And Zaaine's questions! wonder how they both manages with that. like really. haha. how they even think how many ques he can put.
He is Viren's son after all!

Aly is loving Karina so much now! ðŸ˜³ 
please plate sooon!


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Posted: 11 years ago
awww love zaaaine hes sooo cute,
loool at viren r u pregnant, hppefully they can have kids when shes a bit free    
cajt wait for viren and jeevika yo have alone time...
xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awwiee...
Zainne's such a cutiepie...
and Viren so naughty...
Lol...
Loved everything...
I was literally imagining Zainne saying his sweety cutie words...
he's so adorable...
Love you... for such a long and awesome update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aaw zaine is such a cute kid he's so adorable love him
Viren is really a caring person well that's normal he cares for everyone 
Really hoped zoya was alright, soul sisters what thinking 
Jeevika no words for her she's always cute hope her backache goes
Thanks for the pm plz continue soon 
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Posted: 11 years ago
Finally! Finally you're back, and back with a bang!!
I really missed your updates..I was like waiting for your PM always!
Coming to the update..it beyond amazing!
Zaaine is a super cute baby who has super cute parents! :p
I love it when Viren talks to Jeevika with so much love and affection..it makes me go crazzzyyy!!
The update was fab! Can't wait too long to read more..continue ASAP
And when will you update We Found Love??
Waiting to read that too..
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update loved it specially virikas relationship
Beautiful update continue soon and do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
first, i would like to tell u that i mostly come on this website to read your stories, which i love reading always.. :)
i m always eager to read all your stories.. and i have read almost all your stories..
As far as considering on this story, this is one of my most favorite stories... when i read this story i actually imagine the scenes in my mind and believe me i m always waiting to read your story..
still now what ever u have updated i honestly don't know what to say.. :) u r just a perfect writer..

i know i have said more about u and not that much about your story but still i love your writing <3 please update the next part soon.. i will b waiting

one more last thing i wants to tell u is what ever going on in your life hope u'll get through it soon and everything will get well soon ..     
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Posted: 11 years ago
zaaine is absolutely cute totally love this story