Awww... Its such an amazinggg update...!!!
Luvd every bit of it...
so sweetly u hav written how jeevika doesnt let go of viren in d morning..
Awww mini Viren..
i love how u hav portrayed jeevika to b no damsel in distress..
Loved this bit...its so romantic...
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v - "I'm not going to let you go till you answer what I had asked you"
j - "Fine! Your looking super hot shirtless. Happy now?"
v - "Very! Now I can go shower peacefully thinking how much my wifey loves me and thinks how hot I am"
j - "Whatever floats your boat. Or actually whatever makes you ego go higher Viren" she said laughing and going outside with Zaaine.
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v - "He never gives me a smile, its only you. He gives me vommit"
j - "Very funny" she said getting back in a good mood.
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Plz plz do continue this story...its one of my fav one too.. Its definately an masterpiece.. :)
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