KiSha SS: Moments <3 Part 20 (last pt) on pg 94

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Posted: 11 years ago
HI! Friends ๐Ÿ˜Š

Here I'm starting my SS on Kisha... I wrote a mini OS on their canteen scene on kisha my friend Sani told me to continue so I'm continuing that OS...
The title of SS is "MOMENTS" 


And the credit of title goes to my friend Tamanna ๐Ÿค—
The characters of this SS are same as in TBP... KiSha, RaHi, AmBy, HiMa n JJ...
The mini OS was:
KD: Kiya.. hm pehle hi ek 2sre se bht nafrat karte thay aur phr hum dost bane aur mai ek choti si MU ki wjh se tumhe nae khounga...
Kiya: OK to apne knees pe beth k naak ragar k kaho 
"KIYA GUJRAL I'm Sorry"
KD: Thek hai par kya tum us k baad mjhe maaf kar do gi?
Kiya: Han... 
KD: Fine, Par is k baad humare bech sirf MU nahi hogi... 
Par dosti bhi nahi hogi...
Kiya: What do u mean?
KD: Mai tmhe is k baad apna friend kabhi nahi banaunga..
Kiya: Whatever Keshav Desai...
  KD do kadam peche hate aur knees pe beth jaye...
KD: I'm sorry Kiya...
  Oh! Kiya Gujral I'm sorry...
  KD nose rub karne wala ho k Kiya rok de..
Kiya: KD No... Stop...
         Stand up KD...
   Then KD khara ho k wahan se chala jaye phr Kiya usay manaye... 
I know here Again I'm posting the mini OS but this OS is the start of my SS that's why I'm posting it here again... Hope its fine ๐Ÿ˜Š


 
Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 6
Part 3: Page 9
Part 4: Page 15
Part 5: Page 21
Part 6: Page 25
Part 7: page 29
Part 8: Page 34
Part 9: Page 38
Part 10: Page 41
Part 11: Page 45
Part 12: Page 55
Part 13: Page 60
Part 14: Page 64
Part 15: Page 68
Part 16: Page 73
Part 17: Page 77
Part 18: Page 81
Part 19: Page 88
Part 20: Page 94

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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 1:
KD went from the canteen and Kiya was still there n thinks that why KD was ready for that...
Then HiMa said to Kiya.
Juhi: OMG! Kiya, tum KD k sath aisa kaise kar sakti ho?
Kiya: Plzz Juhi. Stop it..
Samar: Mohtarma wo apki maafi k muntazir rahe aur ap ne aise berukhi ikhteyar ki...
Kiya was silent n shocked on KD's reaction.. Then Kiya moved from there..
All buddies were In the class KD was also there Kiya went to KD and tried to talk to him.
Kiya: KD mjhe tumse kuch pochna hai.
 KD Ignored her.
Kiya: KD plzz meri baat suno I want to know k tum ne wo sab q kia? Tum wo sab karne 
k ly mane q?
KD uski baat hi nahi sun raha phr teacher class mai ayi aur sab seats pe beth gaye.
HiMa n AmBy bhi Kiya ko dekh k shocked k achanak itna change kaise...
After the lecture Kiya again tried to talk KD.
Kiya: KD mjhe janna hai tumne wo q kiya?
KD phr se baat nahi sunta aur jane wala hota hai k kiya usay phr se rokti hai.
Kiya: KD mjhe bhi tumhara dost banne ka koi shauq nahi hai bus jo tumne kia uska 
reason janna chahti hoon.
KD: Jab dost nahi ho mjhse matlab nahi hai to janna q chahti ho?
KD went from there then Piddi said to Kiya.
Piddi: Acha hua tu yehi deserve karti thi..
Kiya: Piddi just shut up OK..
Bobbey: Kya shut up sahi to bol raha hai.
Kiya: KD ne mere sath itna galat kia aur tum loge sab us ka sath de rahe ho?
Samar: Mohtarma bura mat manyega par agr galti KD janab ne ki to thek to ap ne 
bhi nahi kia.
Juhi: OMG! Kiya mai nahi janti thi k tum KD ko itna hate karti ho.
Piddi: Aray mjhe to kabhi ye shmjh mai hi nae ayi Kabhi chup k KD bhai ko 
bachati hai, teacher's day ki party mai KD bhai ki fikar karti hai kehti hai 
Banga se Panga is not Changa aur un ki ek galti ki wjhse sari fikar gayib...
Kiya wo sab sunti rehti hai aur disheart ho jati hai aur wo jane wali hoti hai k 
Piddi usay phr se rokta hai..
Piddi: Ruk kareli ek aur sach sunti ja jo sab se zaruri hai.
Kiya stopped and turned.
Piddi: Ye jo tere aur KD bhai k bech hua na us ka sab se bara reason mai hoon.
All are in shocked.
Han "MAI" KD bhai ko bhai bolta raha unhe kitna bara dukh de dia, bhai maan k un 
ka sath dia par sab garbar hogai..
Bobbey: Abay Chu...hay kya bol raha hai?
Piddi: Sahi bol raha haan maine isay Kunal k sath dekha tha cafe mai, aur KD 
bhai ko bhai mante huay pohanch gaya unhe sach batane, mjhe laga k un ko buray 
logon se bacha raha hoon par meri wjhse aur phans gaye wo...
Kiya: Iska matlb ye sab kuch ek MU?
Piddi: Han Kiya wohi to tujhe kabse shmjha rahe thay...
Kiya kuch alag hi state ho mind mai thi she was right or wrong she can't understand. 
She went home n think all the moments with KD n called the camera,
" Oh! God. Ye maine kya kar dia KD ne galti ki jis k ly wo guilty bhi tha par 
maine...Par don't worry Keshav desai ab to mai tmhe mana k rahungi"
 Next day all the time Kiya tried to talk KD but its KD's turn to eat bhao he ignored 
Kiya again.. Chutti k tym ghar jane se pehle Kisha locker room mai gaye 
KD books rakhne aur kiya touch-up k ly. KD Locker room ki entrance ki side pe 
aur Kiya lockers ki side. KD k hath se books giri aur wo usay pick karne k ly 
jhuka aur Kiya k hath se mirror. At the same time dono jhuke peon aya ander 
dekha usay dono nahi dikhe aur wo gate lock kar k chala gaya.
Now Kisha locked in locker room, what will happen to them, when they'll come out?
 Janne k ly wait kijiya next part ka ting tong ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Hope u liked it..
Give ur comments.๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by kishathebest - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really sorry for the late comment 
Im writing for all the three updates!! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Just 4 words- I FRIKKING LOVE THIS!!!

Haaye my KiSha is just so perfect and hotness personified here!!
I'll try to read and comment on your next few updates!! Really waiting for them
Awesome kisha scenes and OMG you cleared the MU and also gave a jealous kiya!! i love you for that!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by lizzie_ROFL - 11 years ago
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I'm really sorry for being late. Really very sorry. 

Liked the update to the core. ๐Ÿ˜‰
Love it๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by keshiya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wah wah..amazing๐Ÿ˜Š
tu toh boht acha likhti hai..!!!
kiya kash tbp mei bhi janna chahti..khub bhao khati hai๐Ÿ˜›
samar ke muh se joh muntazir aur ikhtiyar nikalwai ho uska matlb bhi btao๐Ÿ˜†
Banga se panga is not changa๐Ÿ˜†
Locked up..ab kya hoga!!
ktd tu toh nahi sudhregi kya pta locked room mei tu bhi ho๐Ÿคฃ
update๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by priya00147 - 11 years ago
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woww really amazing story..
Loved the 1st part.
Cont soon
Thanx 4 the pmEdited by --Kinjal-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yay !! am glad you continued it...kiya is regretting now๐Ÿ˜ƒ
kd and kiya locked in locker room ๐Ÿ˜ณ
write the next part fast now...can't wait to read more !!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: diya90

yay !! am glad you continued it...kiya is regretting now๐Ÿ˜ƒ
kd and kiya locked in locker room ๐Ÿ˜ณ
write the next part fast now...can't wait to read more !!

Glad u liked it meri HPD ๐Ÿค—
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woow, good you continued! Happy to see kd giving bhav to kiya now ๐Ÿคฃ Kisha locked in locker room jaldi se update karna! :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome hai yaar and kisha in the lockre room ye toh aur bhi mazedar hai