YUMMY MISTAKE...!!! (Gift for ADI Sir BD @ 144) - Page 111

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet

I just completed the 1st part.. Im giving my reviews part by part..

Kaha se aata hai yar itna dard tere stories mein??? As the story was nearing the end.. i could feel the lump in my throat... You are awesome GD and ur stories most often make me calm and cry..

The emotional pain that is inflicted on both Daya and Abhi was heart wrenching... Nobody can write sotories with such pain if they haven't experienced it..😭

The way the case was taken.. The way Daya penetrates his eyes to Abhijeet and the way he turned and asked ," Tum mujhe phansi par chada doge" was so painful...😭

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet

Read the second part as well..

At this moment, my heart is beating at a faster pace...

ITNA DARD..?? daya's aur abhijeet's pain...OMG..!! This is soo painful GD..!!

Daya expresses his pain but Abhijeet's controlling of his pain is heart wrenching yaar... 😭 I almost cried reading it... You are an amazing writer..!!👏

I really have no words... The letter, abhi's reaction to RAHUL,... His tears in front of Misha and VIVEK's shivering hands... I was seeing it all in front of me...

The imagination that Daya is there and the hugging of the drenched  paper was soo emotional..

Thanks GD...

Will soon give my reviews about the last part...

Originally posted by: Raaz_sweet

Kya likh diya yaar..

Awesome! Fantastic! Mindblowing.! Superb!!👏

Im dubstruck with the story... The meeting in the beach was just awesome and the hugging part outside the bureau was sooo sooo sooo touching...

The way abhi brought daya into the case and the moreover the way you portrayed each one's emotions was just out of the world...

Kaise kar rahe ho yaar yeh sab??

I just love the story... each part was too long... !

But the story was too strong to make us cry.. 

Hats off GD..!!👏 aise stories likhte raho...!!

Originally posted by: gadhadada

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<font color="#6600ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Ohhh... DEVIL DEVA...😳</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I really feeling increase in My Blood Volume...😉</font>

<font color="#6600ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I really cant get as I Personally did not like Second part, I think too much Rona Dhona on that and U all like that One Mostly...😲😲</font>

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<font color="#6600ff" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Thank You so very much DEVIL DEVA...😳</font>