FF: After 07/12 *Mujhe Maaf Kardo* - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
i cant wait 4 2moreos episode
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
congrats on your 2nd FF.loved it.plz cont soon. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
Part 2

She faints in his arms

Jai: Bani???? Bani??

He tries to wake her up!

He picks her up

And takes her out

And next thing u know

He's at the hospital

She's in there with the doctors…

Everyone at home

Is all worried

They are thinking

Where is Jai and Bani?

Where did they leave all of a sudden?

Masi: Its been over 2 hours already!

Doc comes out

Jai is like what happened??

Jai: Is Bani okay???

Doc: Yes! There's nothing to worry about… She is pregnant!!!!!!!!!!!

Dun Dun Dun!!!!

Black and White on Jai's face

Jai: What?

Doc: Yes she is pregnant!

Doc smiles

And he walks off

Jai is thinking

About June 19th….

And what happened!!!!

He's like whoa!!

He goes into her room

She's lying there….

Her eyes are closed

Jai walks in slowly

And he's looking at her

He comes and sits down

He's about to put his hand on her head

But then

He stops it

Then

Bani opens her eyes

She looks..

Thinking where is she?

And then

She sees Jai right next to her

And she is shocked!!!

Jai: How are you feeling Bani?????

Bani doesn't know what has happened

She tries to get up

But Jai tells her…

Jai: Slowly

And has his hands on her shoulder

Bani gives him look

And he quickly lets go!

Jai: Bani…

Bani puts her hand up

Bani: Don't talk to me….

Jai was trying to tell her that she's pregnant

Bani: And please don't touch me!!!!

Jai is sad!!!!

Doc comes in

He smiles

Doc: So how are you feeling?? U must be happy!

Bani is like huh?

Doc: Ur husband didn't tell u..

Bani: tell me what….

Doc: OH..u shouldve told her….. Ur pregnant!

Dun Dun Dun!!!!!

Black and white on Bani's face!!

She looks at Jai

Jai is looking at her
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14
Part 3

Doc is smiling

And she leaves them alone

Bani is looking straight ahead

And she is shocked!!!

Jai is looking at her

Bani has the flashback from June 19th….

And she is stunned!!!

Afterwards

They both leave

They come home

Masi tells them

Where were they?

Everyone was getting so worried!!!

Jai: Is quiet

Masi: Why are you quiet?? Bahu…. Tell me where were you?

Jai: Masi…. Ur getting worried for no reason!!… nothing has happened! We just……

Masi: I don't want to hear anything! I want the truth!!!…..

Jai closes his eyes

Jai: We are at the hospital!!

Everyone is stunned!

Bani is giving him a look….

Masi: Why What happened????

Jai: Bani…

Masi: What happened to Bahu?? Bahu what happened??

Everyone is listening

Jai: She fainted!!…….

They are shocked!!!

Jai: There's nothing to worry about!! She was just a little stressed out!!! Everyhting is okay now!!!….

Masi: Munna u go and take her.. I will have Tony bring something for her!! Go!

Jai and Bani go to their room!

Masi tells Tony

To take food for Bani

Tony says okay!

They both go into the room

Both are quiet

They aren't saying anything!

Tony knocks on the door

Jai opens it…

And Tony puts it down

And he leaves!

Jai tells her to eat it

Bani says u don't have to worry about me

I can take care of myself!!!!!

She leaves
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
Part 4

And goes to the bathroom

Jai changes his clothes….

Bani eats a little bit

And then

She goes to sleep

Jai was standing by the window

And then

He goes to sleep

Both have their backs turned

Neither of them are sleeping!

Jai is sad!

Bani is mad!

Next Morning

Everyone is awake

Jai is getting ready!

Bani comes out of the bathroom

And they both look at each other!

They don't say anything!

Jai has a innocent face

Bani has a mean face!

And she walks off

Jai: Bani…..

Bani stops

She doesn't look at him……….

Bani: Please Mr. Walia…. Don't talk to me!!! I don't want to talk to u!!! nor do I have anything to say to you!!!! I will take care of myself!!! U don't have to worry about me!….

Just then Masi comes by the door…..
Bani: Me and my child will be just fine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Masi is shocked!!!!!!!!

Masi: Bahu????

Jai and Bani are stunned!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




The End!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
woww....u hav a lovely way of writing guli 😳 really luvd it 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#17
its wonderful...just like ur other FF...keep it up 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#18
congratz on ur new fan fic its awsome 😃 ....plz continue soon!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
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awsome...keep up the good work...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
ohhhhhhhhhhhhh that was good.. i luved the DUN DUN DUN 😆 😆 😆 .. omggg masi heard her.. i wonder wat's gonna happen nxt.. cont soon.. that was gr88 👏