FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 75

Awsome update...
My fav writers working together 😃
Edited by Diakumar17 - 11 years ago

Just managed to read all.. It's been hot n spicy

Comment on chapter 3:

You say you are not good in writing humour. Yeah right.

"And right now the beauty of the window was more appealing to her eyes than the wonders of the Taj Mahal."

"You mind your… your body language!"

"How much do you want? 1000? 2000? 2500? 2700? 2750? Umm… 2765?"

Above are the points where I actually laughed out loud, for real. This is of course the howling like a banshee laughter, warna toh I was sniggering throughout. Rasgulla, you chupi rustam! Loved the update!

FYI, I would totally choose a scary human over a scary dog, dogs are freaking scary! 😆😆

🤣 hilarious n amazing update

Loved it loved it loved it!! Can't wait for the date now...

Loved chapter 4.. It was amazing.. Loved the last part..😳.. can't wait for the other part now...
Edited by shamzygirl - 11 years ago

Smile ?

You are right, I didnt, I literally have my stomach aching with all the laughter !

Gosh ! This one was just perfect, and believe me, somewhere in the beginning I got so lost, it seemed it was all playing in front of the screen rather than me reading something ! And I absolutely loved it !

So Khushi falls, and oh my, what a fall !
And I must say, Im so in love with the Payal here

"Looks like you don't have a choice, Khushi. All you can do is pray that Aranvji has quick reflexes",

Seems Arnav does have quicker reflexes, but probably Khushi has faster ones ?
Oh I loved the update, cant wait for the next one !

P-3~~~~APA,U R A TREMENDOUS WRITER 😛😛 ~~~I M SO EXCITED,,,THE STORY IS TOO INTRIGUING...

fab!!! Khushi all nervous was too cute! n the way she went from Arnav being raakshas to handsome 😆😆

Fun story!  Enjoying it very much...