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panck

@panck

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow what a follow up.

She even beat the Kanjeevaram thread work….ROFL and maybe he could help her get more than the Rs 60,000 she was promised.

And now she is going try to jump out of the window…

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BlueMystique

@BlueMystique

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

I am horribly terribly absolutely pathetically late! I know!

You have not only lived up to the previous update but set the bar for saiyu a little higher, she will go even above that though, I am sure. I am the one who's screwed! lol

I loved the way the grab and pull scene was brought back. My first ever scene I watched was that, when he pulls her to him and breaks the pearls, which in turn made me curse him to whatever high hell I could think of and vow to never see the show with such abhorrent character in it. But then I saw the diwali scene and fell into the trap. #Sigh

Anyway, I loved Khushi's mini MU with Arnav, and I await how Arnav's major MU is handled by saiyu!

Loved it Meera! As if there ever was any doubt!
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khusiarnav

@khusiarnav

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

Meeraaa awesome update... i know m late!!! its final week so...

Anyways its getting better... in every way!!! loved it loved it!! great job... 👏👏

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LIKEDMG

@LIKEDMG

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

@Max...Gota in Swimsuit...😆

@Meera..I love ur works...

@Juhi..thanks for the link...

Waiting for next part...

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Fau Zi

@lazylad8-FauZi

IF-Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Hahaha!!!!!!! Very funny and interesting indeed!!!

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subiscs

@subiscs

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

This s just fab:) loved it:) waiting to see what next ...

@@ Rasgulla -- thnx for the pm 😊

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Take_That

@Take_That

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

Fab update!

"Kya kaha aapne?Are you saying I'm fat?"—Only Khushi can say this when she is in the arms of a stranger!

And a misunderstanding paves its way in the very first meeting!

Would love to read where the next writer will take it!

Again, its exciting to read different chapters by different writers!

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Crazy4IPK

@Crazy4IPK

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

i'm already fall in love with the story.

Gota work on swim wear, not bad!

Khushi is one hilarious character. I loved it how she think of Arnav as an alien.

Though Arnav was really rude with Khushi, but he actually got attracted to her.

So happy that Khushi could find the way to flee.

Can't wait to read more.

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Anu

@Carpe_diem

IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome...Loved it😊...Dialogues are crisp and realistic...i can actually imagine them talking...

funny and cute in parts...romantic also...

The description of how he is actually feeling looking at her...when he is projecting something else was very well written...

Wonderful story in the making😊

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ReginaPhalange-

@ReginaPhalange-

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

The world better not end before Khushi's (not so) sweet escape! 🤔

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