FF collaboration: IPK.2.0-Doing it right, ch6-p136 - Page 19

loved it, it so funny, gotas

amazing...awesome start

really arnie did ya just say that line
waise it sure is true though
he believes in bhagwaan what the how is that possible
man gotas on swim wear
gosh that has to be the funniest thing ever
man so much better than the show their first meet
but aage aage kya honewaala hai bhagwaan hi jaane
man i cant believe that this is happening
but am glad that it is
cheers for pm
hope to see what else is gonna happen next

nice one..do continue soon!!!!!!!!!😊

hey girls!! nice idea you have here.. i really am looking forward to seeing all these great writers get together and weave their magic!!😉

and maxine-- well what to say?? your writing delights me!! as always!!
and gotas on bikinis?? ROFL!!!🤪
and she doesnt even seem "OMG!! wat are these ppl wearing!!" way to go lol!!
and arnav?😲 i m shocked!! to say the least man!! what the heck did he mean by that comment??

for future-- the oiled hair khushi made me visualise a really greasy and ugly khushi so pls dont use that description anymore lol!!

the rest was awesome!!

What a beginning!!  Edited by Moontide - 11 years ago

I wanna see gota on swim suite :))). Great work

Wow...what a good start...gote wala bikinis...very creative...Awesome update and thanks for the PM

Nice start yar
fashion industry has to b wrk on it
gotte wala swimsuit... Want khushi has to b wear one too
aman is a jerk... Nd arnav is here luv him

Epic doesn't even begin to describe this 1st chapter, brilliant work :DD