Adi aur pankhuri ki vyatha - POEM

Hi PKDHians 😊
This d first time I m posting my poem in this forum. I regularly post my poems n shayaries in kuch toh log kahenge forum 😃
I wrote a poem on last night episode 😊
Hope u all will like it :)
Plz share ur views about this :)

Here it is ...


Adi aur pankhuri ki vyatha



Hai pankhuri pareshan ,
Lage jaise Pukare koi,
Aadi ko yaad Kare harpal,
Hoke bebas aur lachar..

Hai udhar aadi Kabhi yahi haal,
Hai ulja sa ,
Bebas sa,
Yaad kare aapni pankhuri ko ,
Par mane na aapne Dil ki baat,

Dono ki vyatha hai ek,
He Ek Dono ki taklifein,
Par Ek hi ko hai pyar ka ehsas,
Duja ab tak na Jane aapne dil ki baat,

Ishwar ne joda Dono ka Rasta ,
Payal ki chankar ne cheda jaise ,
Dono ke dilon ka koi tar,
Janke Bhi kyun Chupaye aapne aapse ,
Dono ki vyatha dur hogi tab,
Jab milegi pyar ki manzil Dono ko...




Pic credit : f.s.m.
Thanks 😊 ❤️

Aww.. Its so nice Poem.. Lovely..! Nice 2 c many wr8rs here 😃

Originally posted by: Silsha

Aww.. Its so nice Poem.. Lovely..! Nice 2 c many wr8rs here 😃

Thank u so much 😊
Glad u liked it 😃

Wow what a talent you are...please continue with such wonderful poems...

Superb Bhavita ...kya baat hai 👏

Originally posted by: shesherkobita

Wow what a talent you are...please continue with such wonderful poems...

Welcome to the forum...

Thank u so much for appriciation 😳
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Originally posted by: debaparna77

Superb Bhavita ...kya baat hai👏

Thank u sweetheart 😳
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Originally posted by: debaleena_tunai

Nice poem Bhavi...😃

Thank u 😳

Originally posted by: f.s.m

This is Aweosme⭐️

Thank u so much 😳
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Cutie awesome poem...miss u..👍🏼