FF: Jeena Hai Tere Liye ll Pt11-Pg32..28/7/13 - Page 2

Edited by uzmasable - 11 years ago

Loved it especially how you described jeevikas daily routine
Love how viren understood her without jeevika saying anything
Lol @ how manvi got irritated she coughed and felt weak hope
There's no cancer track evev if there is when virat is here not to fear
Loved the starting do continue soon and do pm me

Wonderful Start!!..

superb start cannot wait please please pm me when you update next thanks

Loved it

nice start 

hey it was beautiful start plz pm me xxx

yeh nice start plz continue soon and thanks for the pm do pm me when u update

superb start,  I can see this story taking the shape that should have happened in the show.  Please please include cancer track!

Great start👏 Jeevika's love for manvi was beautifully pictured which was now missing frm show... Continue soon n pm me