*Reality drags me from my Dreams*

.Ami.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Just thought to write few lines about Sandy's state of mind. Whenever she recalled the her conversation with Bhabho -- dreams drags her back.

Exquisite reality drags me from my dreams
as I unfold my eyes so wide
terrific sunshine painting my window screen
No more incubi to make me cry

No more being pursued all over town,
as I keep running and attempting to blot out.
No more tears to make scowl,
from missing teeth as I open wide.

Exquisite reality drags me from my dreams
and I feel so happy cryptic inside
terrific sunshine erupting at my furrows
No more incubi to take me for a ride.

Just wondrous reality dragging me from dreams
and awaking up to you, at my side
You're the man, not of my dreams
but of my reality bristling with pride.

Aur haan, Me and Samah rocking the floor on tracks like:- Teri Ankhiyo ka vaar, Jaise Sher de Shringaar, Tera pyar pyar hukka(mukka) maar.. ooo, Fire Brigade mangva de toh -- Oh balma Oh balma, Po Po Po.. Come n Join us..🥳

Edited by ami_dabh - 11 years ago

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.Ami.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Following song fits to SurYa from upcoming Dabang2 movie. *Ahem Ahem* I am big fan of sallu..😳 ☺️

Saanson ne bandhi hai dor piya..
Tohrey liye hamra dhadke jiya..

Our breathes have bound the thread (of love)
My heart beats for you

Reh-rehke dil meraa tham sa gaya
Chhoo ke mujhe toone jab ye kahaa
Goriyaa main tere sang zindagi bitaunga
Rab se ye maine hai waada kiya

My heart seemed to stop again and again
When you touched and said to me
O girl, I will spend my life with you
I have promised this to God

Saanso ne baandhi hai dor piya
Tohre liye humra dhaddke jiyaa..

Batiyan tore nainaa humse joh na karte
Haye.. Ram kasam jeete jee mar jate
Arrey aise kaise o ji yoon hi tum mar jate
tum jo na hote ham kyoon duniyaa mein aate

If your eyes hadn't talked to me
God promise, I would have died as it is
How would you have died like that?
Why would I have come to this world, if you were not there..

Ke teri meri ek zindagi
hai sang tere preet lagi
Haan.. pal pal badhegee
Haan.. maine bhi ye rabb se waada kiya hoye..

You and me have one life
The love that is there between you and me
It will increase moment by moment
Yes, I have also promised this to the God

Sanson ne baandhi hai dor piyaa
Tore liye humra dhadke jiya..

Saat janam ke sathi..
Ham hain diyaa tum baati..
Raushan basera hai ghar tera-mera
Hamre chaand ko takne taare bhi nikle hain..
nazar na lage tujh ko baahon mein ghera
O chal hutt jaao ji..
Nazdeek aao jee..
Ham to jee haare jee.. [Yamak Alankaar here]
Haan maine bhi yeh rab se waada kiya hayye..

We are the companions of seven lives
I am lamp and you are the filament
Our home is a well-lit house
The stars have also come out to stare at my moon
I have taken you in my arms to save you from evil
You, move away..
Come near..
I've lost my heart..
I have also promised this to God

Saanso ne baandhi hai dore piya..
Tohre liye hamra dhaddke jiya..

Edited by ami_dabh - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

#3

Yo yo Ami puttaaar! 😎
How I love your poems man. Like I have a book with jokes in my head, you have a book with poems
Sallu bhaiya ki khaaair!

Btw, you mentioned me 😲 what an honor thank you, thank you Edited by Superman. - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Nice poem Ami Di on the current state of mind of Sandhya. It really depicts what is going on in the soul of Sandhya and wherein her dilemma lies. 👏 👏

Nice song to describe SurYa, quite appropriate. 👍🏼

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HalleNJ

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Posted: 11 years ago

#5

lovely poem Ami, really nice...

I have a special request, when you are free please write a poem for Suraj too...😭😭😭

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.Ami.

@.Ami.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#6

@Samah:- Sweetie my any thread is incomplete without you. We're Diya and Baati..😎.. So No thanks. It's my pleasure to have you besides me.

@Rocker Dada:- Thankoos!

@NiruBee:- Last time I wrote for Sooraj so this time Sandy's turn. I'll write the poem as soon as any scene inspire me.👍🏼

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Farhana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#7

Ustaad Amlu Ali Kha is back!
Ustaad'ji the reality is no matter how fast you run and how far you are from the poems, they would definitely drag you back! It's in your 'nas nas' now!😆

Beautiful poem Amlu!👏 And that song is lovely one!

And wait, you just talked about Dabanggg right!
Cool, now imagine Sandy as Salman in khakee wardi!
Then it would be ''Hurr...furrr...Dabang...dabang...''😆
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-SamiR-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#8

Haila! Inni deep and complex poem! goes well with Sandhya's character.

Those are some scary dreams! When dreams become nightmares ... then reality becomes exquisite! I loved the symmetry as well.

But I don't think I can join the party and start dancing after reading such a deep and dark poem

btw, what was the 4th stanza all about? Who are these other women? Is it still referring to SurYa? Is Suraj cheating? 😲 😕

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.Ami.

@.Ami.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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@Ferry:- Hurr..Furrr.. Hurr..Furr.. Dabang.. Yep, My sandy baby will be like Sallu only in inspector uniform.. No thanks for the compliment.

Tera pyar..Tera pyaar...Mukka maar.. 🥳

@SaMir Aunty:- Hai laa..😲 Oh old aunty you really read all my poems very carefully and also do in-depth analysis. Honestly, It was unnecessary stanza added by me.🤣 Just to check if my readers catch the blooper or not. 😎. Thanks a bunch for the compliment.👍🏼. Gonna remove the stanza since my purpose is served. 😃
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Farhana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Missing teeth?? Consult Shehjar bua immediately!😎

And I guess those other women are our senior gang!😉

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