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read all the parts today only dear, very nice story, me little confused with maan's dream. please update soon

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: suba2011

Nice 😊

Originally posted by: jssood

great story

pm me when ever u give updates

love the way aranav treat geet

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update
so arnav kidnapped geet n burn their house
is maan n don r same??!!!
thanx for the pm..

Originally posted by: fatizkmy

awesome update 👏
part 4 was confusing
but after reading part 5&6
just loved it

looking froward for next update

Originally posted by: spvd

part 5
nice part...
who is that lady with Maan?

Originally posted by: Sparkling-eyes5

interesting

thanx 4 all of ur comments

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
nice...
so Arnav killed Brij and Veena by burning the house?
poor Geet...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: lehr

lovely update dear.

Originally posted by: zariya123

confusion solved but i think maan is don n arnav will work for maan as he want to take revenge from brij n veena right

Originally posted by: mansi.tripathi

Awesome double update

loved it

arnav gettig to noe truth

arnav and geet leaving their house

continue soon

Originally posted by: dolly10

Awesome

Originally posted by: Shafik05

nice update

Originally posted by: girlz-rule

@fiano: Awesum n fantastic!!!!😊

Originally posted by: preethia

interesting ff

first i was confused well after reading the last part its clear

waiting for next

thanxx 4 comment 

Teaser

No one wants to stay with him in his hell

She came mistakenly to his hell

No one can hide from his devilish glare...

And here She is hidden in his Hell

'Bro came to know everything' Vicky said and ran hand through his hair in frustration

'hey devi mayyia ab kya huga' khushi prayed 'bhai will kill us' she put her both palms on her mouth 'vicky plz do something'

'Will shut ur mouth 4 a second' Vicky growl 'let me think' he said roaming here and there

After few minute 'I got a idea...hide her somewhere'

 'Vicky ur r out of ur mind' khushi snarled 'this not time 4 PJ'let me remind you u she is not a toy that u r going hide her in some corner of the house'

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'Search the full house... 1 corner shouldn't left' Maan shouted to the guards     

'oh god..hey devi mayyia' Vicky and khushi both said in unison 'plz bacha lena'

p.s-Next update will be not until end of Jan or Feb. I am busy with my exam so plz bear with me .

Edited by fiano - 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sanam1234u

nice...

 

Originally posted by: dona86

awesome update

new confusion abt maan's dream!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: fatizkmy

Maan knows geet through dream

  nice update

 

Originally posted by: zariya123

awesome but i am not getting anything
is maan devil don?
n how she got maried to him
not getting, everything  is scattered

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

just caught with this ff...

continue soon...

pm the next update...