Thread 2 - Sanam bewafa.part 25 - PG 140 20/7/13 - Page 74

Originally posted by: TVserialfreak

Nice update...thanks for PM...😃

Originally posted by: anuraya

awesome update yaar..specially kids naughtiness with ayesha luv it..atlast raya misunderstanding get cleared..rajat ka character kuch thik nahi hain..bt this part jst superbbb..pls cntinue soon..!!!

Originally posted by: luvsakshi

Awww molly those were fantastic updates ...Finally i got to read them ...

Hope you r doing  good. i was not expecting a comment from u.

Enjoyed till the end ...loved the flash back it entertaining as RAYAs younger age and their love fightings ...and Present track is soo different that a husband and wife fighting over their hidden feelings and love towards eachother ...

in my opinion  life gets complicated after kids. fun elements miss.  but haan few share a cute bonding with each other.  so i tried to write , i am glad u like it 

Ayesha is a such a leach ,Doesnt she knew priya is her didi and in next chapter she came to knew it .. she tried to kill priya in such a cheap way ,.. Anyway finally Ram comes to knew their dirty plan ... 

not a dirty  plan , was a dirty plot to spoil their lifes and was laid in past. he heard for the first time that  the tried to kill priya and kids ..

B/N ... are you trying to bring any health isuue of priya ...as oneline she said "He doesnt knew my health condition " hmmm eager to knew whats your plan .. 

let me be clear here if u  remember i told u priya will die in the end.  i dont know what health issue i can bring haan she is either dead or half dead  in the end. 

And when she was having stomach pain ... He soothened her pain ...woww i loved it soo much .. raging bulls caring nature you have written so beautifully ,, 

lol when was ram raging bull  in my ff. he was a kitten to priya. raging bull to ayesha alone. but not fully ..

COMing to kids they were really naughty ...and played with their dady and whom he should eat first ,soo many confusions in one dy he got to knew kids mischefness ...
Loved to see the twins naughty ness when RAYA were on romance ..
So finalyy their misunderstanding cleared and and waiting eagerly for their ongoing romance ..hmm that too after years and with the kids around them.. when they will get time ..
The last update was sensuouslyy sizzling update ..

thanku , i am so happy u  now liked the idea  of twins for raya. its cute  when kids  play out lot.  had many encounters with  kids so  penned few.. 

loved it totally ,superb updtes .. thanks for the Pms but i expected more parts as i knew u r super busy ..Didnt tell anything iam super happy with the updates .. 

apart from the sarcasm, thanku . to write more parts i was busy ..  its a wait .. leae it no one can understand .. any ways..  for PM's  people have to be in  my buddy list .

eagerly waiting for next update .. love you .. missed your stories .. And was read first your updates .. 

that was a big comment. i know i dont write so good.   thanks a lot 

What about other story .. you havent written it .. .plzzz continue that alsoo ...
Desperately waiting for another super duper update .. 

a new thread is been started for the other story , check it up .. 

hope u will read and comment too.

PS:  can u  please write  ur name under the comment  because i could not get whom i was replying to ? to girija ! or to neel..! 😕😕

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