OS: An Outsider - Page 4

abavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nuzasr

Very nice!!!!

THe best and the most sane story line...⭐️

Well done!!!

Hope this really happens!!!

Thanks so much for calling this Sane 😃

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abavi

@abavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sunshine99
Good plot Vi...👏

thanks koel!😃

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abavi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rushshri
nicely written

Thanks Rushshri, 😃 How do I call you?

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kaira101

@kaira101

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Posted: 11 years ago

man this is so good

the cv's need to read this

loved it

thanx for the pm

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RJXX

@RJXX

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great Job Vi!!

Nice way to leave the Arshi story untainted

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

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Posted: 11 years ago

oh wow loved it...would be great if it moved like this

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PhoenixRadar

@PhoenixRadar

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 11 years ago

Lovely OS!👏

You brought out the truth the way you interpreted it and described it beautifully. Sheetal may never accept Dhruv for what he did to her, but she can at least let Aarav meet his father. Yet somewhere I side Sheetal's decision, though she never said here, with the way you described her apprehension, that she would never be letting Aarav meet him.

If she doesn't trust him, then Khushi shouldn't persuade her either. But what does Khushi know of Dhruv's real self!😳

Annie

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