SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN - Page 34

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: funkylicious



Page 44 lol muahhaha mujhe yaad h :P


aur bhi hai😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is an awesome SS... Love Saans.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_Arnie

This is an awesome SS... Love Saans.

 
Ohh thank you my new reader😆 But seriously I'm truely touched😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesomeee SS...👍🏼
plzz update soon im dying to read more...
and where iz riya???????
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Posted: 11 years ago
jaldi upload karo na plzzz..
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Posted: 11 years ago
sis ur just fantabulous writer...

hats off to u...👏

this ss is really mindblowing...😊

about ur poems they r outstanding...👏

u r a perfect poetess...

update asap...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
 
res ki baachi kab unres karegi tu😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Love_Arnie

Resss
*edited*
It may be the last update of the year 2012, but it was the latest and shock of the year for me in 2013, to digest Roshini's entry with baby in her tummy.
My breath halted, lemme inhale some oxygen...
Abhi has connection with Rhea, is it??
.. Hmmm... So so confusing!! Uff!
Everybody took their entries.. But where's Rhea...?? Is she gonna enter or not??(btw, Chhotu naii aya)
Fantastic poetry!!
continue soon please..!!

 
I'm heartily sorry for not being able to update it when u were online😔
hope you can read it😳😉
 
Thanks for the lovely comment😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Kash humTum Bhi Ajnabi Hote
Jis Tarah Or Log Hote Hain
Be-taaruf Se La-taaluq Se
Na Tasaadum Na Bandishain Hoti
Dil Main Chahat Na Khwahishain
Hoti
Na Wafaon Ke Silsile Hote
Na Mohabbat Ke Fasle Hote
Phir Na Hoti Shikayatain Tum Se
Youn Na Milti Aziatain Tum Se
Be-qarari Na Be-kali Hoti
Youn Shikista Na Zindagi Hoti
Choor Hota Na Aina Dil Ka
Koi Lamha Na Hota Mushkil Ka
Hum Na Milte Teri Nigaon Se
Na Youn Do Char Hote Aahon Se
Kar Ke Tujh Se Wafa Mila Kya Hai?
Too Ne Ghum K Siwa Dia Kya Hai?
Mujh Ko Un Lamhon Ki Yaad Jo
Ayee Hai
Mar Dala Teri Judayee Nai
Awesome shru just loved loved it.
Update was just fab
loved arjun roshni n rathore convo.
Finally there is smth abt saans
Is abhi n ria related somehow
Sorry dear meine aapko bht tang kia update k liye
u r d best
love u so much

 
Mashallah kya khub h ye poem😳 thank you sammy ji
I'm sooo happy that ur still hooked to this madly😆
 
But is bar aapne tang nahi kiya mujhe acha nahi laga😆
Love u🤗 and thnk u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
@sana, payal,rashi, shruti and Leki
😳 thank you so much for the lovely comments dear...
 
I'm sooo happy that you guys are still liking it and all...
 
updating soon...