SS:Saans(The last breath) Chap9 Pg50 29th JAN - Page 3

Originally posted by: jenny1000

Whenever I read AriYa in a post, it leaves me a beautiful smile. I think we all can depend on our creativity in terms of writing/sigs and all, to show the world of AriYa.

Loved how you started it . I am curious now.. Please do continue ASAP.😃

Originally posted by: samiya.059

Shru wow kya concept hai aur kya likhne ka andaaz hai superb.loved it so much something related to poetry is just wow u know na poetry is my weakness
continue me waiting eagerly

Originally posted by: -Zana-

Lovely update. Very well written. Thankyou for the PM 🤗

Originally posted by: purecure

"Maa Tujhe Salaam...ooo Maa Tujhe Salaam"🤣

 

haan actually  yeh cadets ke liye hota hai usually but actually tere pe jaa raha hai is waqt...i jst mean hats-off dear...!!!👏

 

prologue itna achha hai to kahani obviously acchi hogi...!!👍🏼

 

haan...kitna obvious tha... wo teri hi poem thi...!!!😉

 

no ...bt poem was jst grt...!!!😊

 

great start ...!!! looking forward to read it more...

 

aasha hai mere comments ne aapki sahayata aur utsukta ki ho...!!!😆

(melodrama humme bhi karna aata hai🤣)

abh mai tujhe kya bolu sab kuch toh pehle hi bol chuki hu...

and yes is comment ne definitely meri bahut badi sahyaat ki hai aur utsukta badai hai

Originally posted by: Fiza28

wow my shru my anarkali kya baat hai i  loved it

it was beautiful sachi yaar i love ur shayri uff so talented

update soon 🤗

Originally posted by: nivanthi2

omg  i  love  that  lines  they  are   magical !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ❤️   continue  sooon  dear!

Originally posted by: tani23

LuVed d prologue ...

Deariee pls Continue "Fast"

waiting for Story