OS "gali mein aaj chand nikla"UPDATE ON PG15 - Page 11

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veena23 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: vironikajain

O my god it was damn good read last 2 parts in 1 go nd i was like tumne aisa kyun kiya itna acha kaise likha.
I m always a silent reader nd i have always liked ur post but after reading this i cant stop myself to comment on this.
Once again tumne aisa kyun kiya ๐Ÿ˜†
Plz pm me next time if u can nd thank u so much for this


yes i always found u on my post dear...i am really glad that u like my post...its really my plsr..aur bolne ka ye scene h ki main itna bolti hu ki logo pe asr ho jata h to atlast wo bol hi dete h...kidding..๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

please veena aise beech mein story mat rok 

kitna romantic scene tha
wait nahi ho raha
update soon and thank u sooo much for the PM



sooorrryyy...bt kya karu mera ek scene itna lamba ho gya ki rokna pada...thank u dear๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hbuy

mindblowwinggg...plz plz cont...dont stop here...cant wait...



awww...thank u sooo much๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: snehalparab

ram...oh badi jaldi khyal aa gya mujhe nhi chhod k jane k liye..priya...tumne aisa kyun kiya???

priya chaku dikhate hue...mr.kapooor agr ek aur bar apne ye dialogue mara na tooo...
bechare ramji nashe mein kya kiya inhe kya pata chale aaye lekin unhe kya pata priya bhi kabhi kapoor thi toh gussa aur dhamki to banti hai boss ...really nice update enjoyed a lot the sweet nok jhok wala love and priya ne ab tak vrat nahi toda aur RAM ko handle kiya puri raat chakkar to aana hi tha๐Ÿ˜† ...
 
 
 


hahaha...kapoors ka asar h boss๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: gupta90

please update the next part soon, waiting waiting๐Ÿ˜Š



bas bas m whi kar rhi hu...๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Siacutie

sorry for late di

or akhir kar ram hi priya ka vrat khole ga wow ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
jaldi se next part bhi post kr di jiye๐Ÿ˜‰


hehehe...main tumse bhi late lateef hu jan...dekho aaj pura hua h  jake...
veena23 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
sooorrryyy for late...pr der aayenge tabhi to durust aayenge...ab shuruat itni solid kar di thi to ant bhi behtar hona chahiye na...actully mujhe pehli baar mere os pe itna solid responce mila & really i am vry glad...ekdm dil se pihu wala happy ho gyi m...aur iski do wajah thi ek to ki ye sabko pasand aaya dusre aise topic k sath jo ki mujhe bilkul suit nhi karta h...hahaha..mera aur romance ka dur dur ka rishta nhi h...๐Ÿ˜›...mere se comedy kra lo tregdy kra lo rona dhona kra lo lecture dilwa lo...sab bht asan h..lekin ek romantic OS likhna baap re pyar karne se bhi mushkil h shayad๐Ÿ˜‰...ufff phir se lecture...jyada nhi dungi daro mat...bas ye bta rhi hu...ki thoda sa aur behtar bnane ki koshis ki h..hope u all like it...



ram...take this & dnt creat the scene...pta h mujhe tumne abhi tak apna fast nhi toda h...

priya..achhha??? par aapke liye to wo sab natak tha na

ram...ha natak h...aur is natakko itna khinchne ki koi jarurat nhi h...jab 5 salo se nhi kar rhi thi to ab aisa kya ho gya jo abhi tak nhi toda ...main to tab bhi tha aur ab bhi hu...phir aaj kya jatana chahti ho...

priya...pehli baat to ki main kuchh jatananhi chahti hu kyunki janti hu aap karenge to whi jo apko sahi lagega...aur dusri bat 5 salo tak main kya kiya ye aapko kaise pta..aap kya jante h mere 5 salo k bare me wahi na joapne dekha aur jo mne btaya...apko kaise pta ki m krti thi ya nhi...

ram...agar karti hoti to pihu dekhne ki jid kyun krti...

priya...oh mr.kapoor pihu sirf 5 sal ki h usko kitni samajh hogi ki m fast kr rhi hu ki kya kar rhi hu...hadh krte h aap...sirf apne logic ko sahi man k har bat k faisle pe pahonch jate h...aur m kyun aapko samjha rhi hu...apko manna to h nhi apne man liya ki mne 5 sal fast nhi kiya to bas ab yhi bat sach h qki ram kapoor ko ye sach lagta h...pta h mr.kapoor aap bol rhe the na ki mujhe apke nam se problm h ..ha h problm ...qki main na to is nam k bina rh sakti hu kyunki jis insan ka ye nam h main usse bht pyar krti hu...aur nahi m is nam k sath rh sakti qki us insan ko is nam se itna pyar ho gya h ki aur sabse pyar krna bhul gya h...main kuchh nhi kh rhi hu to iska ye mtlb nhi h mr.kapoor ki mujhe dard nhi hota takleef nhi hoti...hoti h mr.kapoor bht takleef hoti h...jab aap baar baar ek hi bat bolte h to mere man ka guit mere liye bojh hojata h ki mne apke aur pihu k sath itna glt kiya..to takleef hoti h...jab aap meri glti k peechhe chhupe hue jazbat nhi samjhte h to takleef hoti h mr.kapoor...jb aap mere samne dusro ko importance dete h to takleef hoti h mr.kapoor...jb aap mere samne aayesha ko hath lagate hain to takleef hoti h mr.kapoor bht takleef hoti h...lekin m sab bas isliye sahti hu ki theek h shayad yhi meri galati ki saja h...lekin kitni saja mr.kapoor...aapne to mere jazbat mere pyar mere ehsas aur yha tak ki meri shraddhha ko bhi natak ka naam de diya...mujhe apse ye ummeed nhi thi mr.kapoor...aaj to takleefki had ho gyi...

priya jane lagti h...to ram uska hath pakad leta h...

ram...tum aise bole k nhi ja sakti

priya...matlb??

ram...matlb itna bola h to pyas lag gyi hogi na..pani to pee lo

priya...mr.kapoor this is...ridiculs...chhodiye mera hath

ram...ok ok i am sorry...

ram priya ko pani pilata h phir bolta h...

ram... i am sorry m janta hu ki main gusse me ovr ho jata hu..but tum ek bat nhi keh sakti ki m pyar krna bhul gya hu agr bhul jata to achha hota km se km nafrat krne me asani hoti ...lekin nhi bhula shayad isiliye kitni bhi nafrat karne ki koshis krta hu phir bhi pyar bhari pad jata h ...shayad isiliye na chahte hue bhi kisi na kisi bahane yha aa jata hu...na chahte hue bhitumse milne ko tumhe dekhne ko tumhe chhune ko betab rhta hu...na chahte hue bhi tumhari ek ghalti ko nazar andaz nhi kr pa rha hu kyunki...wo glti us insan ne ki h jisse main bht pyar krta hu ...aur mere liye hamesha yhi ek sach rha h ki wo glti nhi kr sakta...shayad isiliye nhi maaf kr pa rha hu...lekin m chahe kitna bhi kahu ek sach kabhi nhi badal sakta ki main tumse pyar krta hu aur tumhare aage hamesha har jata hu...

priya ekdm khamosh hoke ram ki bate sunti rhti h aur roti jati h...phir ram k pas aati h aur kehti h...

priya...main bhi ram apse bht bht bht pyar krti hu aur nhi jee sakti aapke bina...bas ek bar maaf kr dijiye phir kabhi aisi glti nhi karungi...please ek bar maaf kar dijiye..main sab theek kar dungi ap aur pihu dono ko aapke sare hasin pal dungi jo aap share nhi kar paye...aaj k baad aap dono ekdusre k har pal me shamil honge..bas ek bar maaf kr dijiye...

ram...sshhh ssshh...bas rona band karo janti ho na main tumhara rona handle nhi kar sakta hu...humdono milke sab sahi kar lenge..aur jahan tak maaf krne ki baat h to main us bat ko bhulne kipuri koshis karunga pr thoda time to dena padega...

priya...bilkul aap jitna chahe time le lijiye bas mujhse naraz mat rahiye main apki narazgi nhi sah sakti...

ram...ok theek h nhi naraz hounga lekin ek shart par...

priya...kya???

ram...ki ab jomain tumhe btane wala hu wo sun k tum naraz nhi hongi...

priya...matlb???


ram...matlb ye ki ...

priya...kya???

ram...kal rat ko...

priya...kya kal rat ko???


ram...kal rat ko mne drink ...nhi kiya tha

priya...shit...shit...shit...

ram...are suno to...

priya...no dnt talk to me...i dnt want to litsen u

ram...are abhi tumne kaha tha naraz nhi hogi...meri bat to suno...mtlb kiya thalekin bht thoda sa utni me mujhe chadti nhi h...u know that...

priya...i dnt believ it...shit mr.kapoor...aap...shit..i hate u...i...hate u...apko sab pta chala jo rat ko ho rha tha...o goooddd...i hate u

priya jane lagti h to ram pakad k use gale laga leta h...aur kehta h

ram...but i love u...

dono ek dusre ko dekhne lagte h priya sharma jati h..aur ram besharm ho jata h...aur ram k sath sath hum sabhi besharam hone wale h...

ram...tum keh rhi thi na ki rat ko kuchh nhi hua..lagta h mujhe nhi tumhe nasha ho gya tha isiliye tum sab bhul gyi...ab phir se yad dilana padega yar...par ab dialogue nhi marunga sirf performance dunga...

priya ankhe jhuka k muskurane lagti h...aur ram use kiss krta h ...

priya...koi aa jayega

ram...kaun aayega??

priya...pihu

ram..wo to school me h

priya...neha

ram...wo to apne ghar pe h

priya...natasha

ram...wo to office me hogi

ram bta rha h sab kuchh pr uska cnsntration kewal priya pr h...he kisses on her lips desprtly finally priya havnt any choice...& she lost ...aur phir whi jo aplog dekhna chahte h...


raya vm

ye lamhe ye pal hum barso yad karenge

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detailpage&v=D_EUZSklIX0#t=222s[/YOUTUBE]


another link for vm on fb

https://www.facebook.com/photo.php?v=330188767089346

ufff...kya kya kara dete ho aaplog...thank u all for tolrating me...hope u all like it...if u like please hit like & commnt as both gud or bad...aur han ye video jarur dekhna ..this is one of my fvrt song i always want make it on raya pr situation nhi milti thi...ab jake mili h...

with love 
veena
Edited by veena23 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
My god di aapne toh solid jhatka diya...!!
ram was acting all night๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
i couldnt have imagined that even in my dreams...
wow...
cool vm...song fits in perfectly


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Posted: 11 years ago
aye haye ram acting kar raha tha hehe , maza bohat maza aya thank you di
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update i cant imagine ram was doing acting whole night nd this much naughty nd this song is one my favourite also now u cant say that ki romance is not ur cup of tea bcoz u wrote this very well as always nd about ur talking habbit i know that after reading ur so many post infact i also talks a lot but i m very very lazy ๐Ÿ˜•   Edited by vironikajain - 11 years ago