*GoodBye_AshNi*Epilogue*p114*Jaane Kya Baat Hui - Page 17

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Posted: 11 years ago
achiever,just read full chap,it was beyond the boundries,loved the way Ashu is thinking about Nidhi's health and her career both,his care for Nidhi.Col Verma and Ashutosh came more closure to each other.Ashutosh remembered his baba at this movments.Your DB is so sweet.Nidhi sleeped in Ashu's room,wow.Ashutosh understand Nidhi's each and every feeling and demand when she need what.Chocolate for chocolaty girl,and sweetheart and luv words are really sweet for them.Nidhi rememered her mother and was missing her mother badly,ashu realised that too.so Anji had a atom bomb with her,waiting for another blast.very fab chap,will waiting for the next chap,thanks dear for the fab chap
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Posted: 11 years ago
manisha di... when are you giving us the next update ???? πŸ˜ƒ
we are desperately waiting ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

achiever,just read full chap,it was beyond the boundries,loved the way Ashu is thinking about Nidhi's health and her career both,his care for Nidhi.Col Verma and Ashutosh came more closure to each other.Ashutosh remembered his baba at this movments.Your DB is so sweet.Nidhi sleeped in Ashu's room,wow.Ashutosh understand Nidhi's each and every feeling and demand when she need what.Chocolate for chocolaty girl,and sweetheart and luv words are really sweet for them.Nidhi rememered her mother and was missing her mother badly,ashu realised that too.so Anji had a atom bomb with her,waiting for another blast.very fab chap,will waiting for the next chap,thanks dear for the fab chap

yup.. i luv his concern for Nidhi.. he is very touchy on tht subject.. if i cud say!πŸ˜†
CV and Ashu's bond is strengthening.. the rivalry is at least gone.. CV has accepted tht he cannot winover Ashu in department of charm!πŸ˜† His daughter is totally totally in love with this man!πŸ˜†
yup.. ashu understands her so well.. and not jst Ashu.. Nidhi too understands him well.. its kind of thing tht u develop wen u get soo close to a person.. its a natural thing..😳 tho it takes a longer period to develop such thing in real life.. bt the timeline in my story runs too fast!πŸ˜†
oh.. poor girl she misses her mother!
and Angie and her news.. lets c wat it brings..😳'
thnx so much for commenting.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ZedZee92

manisha di... when are you giving us the next update ???? πŸ˜ƒ

we are desperately waiting ...

well jst written a few paras.. i think its still too short!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
@ achiever i just love your re comment for my comments,thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: alkaparmart

@ achiever i just love your re comment for my comments,thanks dear

oh.. thnx sweets... :))
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Posted: 11 years ago
sooo done with the chapter.. bt got stuck in the end.. ran into a road block.. a dead end.. πŸ€”
Edited by achiever - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
eagerly waiting for the next update...plz...plzzz...fast...!
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Posted: 11 years ago
k i mite have something intrsting to put in at the end.. 😳 bt guess will have to wait till tomorrow for an update..
thnk u soo much guys waiting.. i was jst stuck up in middle of nowhere.. or at least it seemed!πŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi, Mnisha
Sorry bout the late comments.😳
But u know the reason.

As always a riveting chap from. Beginning to end.πŸ‘

And super hot and sizzling too😳
But that is a part of the charm of ur
FF. the passion between the two.😳
You show a clear difference between
Lust and love.πŸ‘ That's hard to do.
The love between the two is awesome.
Their caring for each other, the concern
Shows clearly.πŸ˜ƒ
I loved how Ashutosh is already imagining her with a baby😳
Then the scenes in the bedroom.πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
Things are heating up between the two.
Ashutosh is getting very I patient.πŸ˜‰
But, he is in trouble. Nidhi looks mad.πŸ˜†

Plz update soon.πŸ˜ƒ
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