WELCOME- STORY CONTEST 8 - Page 16

I am trying to finish mine. It's 🤢 Chee...please don't think of me as a soap story writer. I can give the writers of BALH and that Mona wala serial...(what's it? Some other 1970s hit song...forgot the name) a  run for their money. Edited by visrom - 11 years ago

I am totally confused now. It's full of loopholes. I am winding up in half an hour. And you all can laugh at the rubbish I am writing.

I don't like what I have written...personally. If I were writing I wouldn't write on such a theme, that's why. And some of the dialogues are so soapish. 🤢 anyway...I will send it to Suhaani by evening. Pakka. I hope Bhav does it too. She had promised...

Originally posted by: visrom

I don't like what I have written...personally. If I were writing I wouldn't write on such a theme, that's why. And some of the dialogues are so soapish. 🤢 anyway...I will send it to Suhaani by evening. Pakka. I hope Bhav does it too. She had promised...

I'll probably start reading after my last two exams.

Edited by gadhadada - 11 years ago

DEdited by astonish - 11 years ago

Please take a note- reviews open on 20th in the entry thread.