virat manvi viren jeevika fir bane viren manvi p24

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Posted: 11 years ago
hii guyzz first time...i hope u guyzzz like it

Ap sab soch rahe honge ke ye pagal he jo itna bakwas tittel likha hai..but isme kuch masale daar bi hoga.guyzz its total difrent story virmaan se start hoga viren manvi tak bi ayega. i hope ap sab ko pasan aye..this story s for karnia fan plsss commentss

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Part 3 pg 3
Part 4a 4b pg 4
part 5 pg 4
Part 6 pg 5

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    part 11 pg 13
    part 12 pg 15
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    part 14 pg 24Edited by shonaten - 10 years ago

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afreenkansal thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
Interesting concept
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
sure continue soon
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continue soon ...all d best 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 1

Virmaan marriage day...virat manvi ki shaadi ho jati hai aur bad me jeevika ghar chor kar chali jati hai..aur ghar ke sab log use dhunte hai..aur wo nahi milti...fir unhe pata chalta hai ke jeevika delhi jane vali train me gai hai...ghar vale sab use lene ke liye ja hi rahe hote ke news me dekhate hai ke delhi jane wali train ka accident ho gaya hai..aur bahot sare usme margai hai..jisme jeevika bhi nahi rehti...

After 4 month

Manvi ko pata chalta hai ke wo pregnant hai...wo ye news dene ke liye virat ko call karti hai...
M-hello virattt
v-manvi kya hua itna chila kar kyu naam le rahi ho...me behra nahi hu...sun sakta hu
m-ha ha muje pata hai ke tum behre nahi ho...par baat hi esi hai...agar me tumhe bataungi to tumbi khusi ke mare chila o gai.
V-acha esi kya baat hai...batao muje
m-virat pehle tum socho to sahi kya baat ho sakti hai..
V- manvi ab bata dona
m-thik haii...viratt wo mee wo me mein wo
v-manvi kya me mein kar rahi ho..batao na plsss yaar
m-virat tum papa bane wale ho aur me mama...
V-kya kaha tumne fir se kaho
m-yahi ke tum papa bane wale ho?
V-manviii wow me papa bane wala hu...omg thank u manvi..me abhi.ghar ata hu..
M-okk virat me tumhara wait kar rahi hu jaldi ana
v-bas 2 mint me aya jaan
m-ok fir hum ghar walo ko bhi ye news saath me denge
V-okk me a raha hu

virat news sune ke baad bahot khus ho jata hai..aur virat ghar ja kar manvi ko ek big hug karne ke liye aur uska chehra dekhne ke liye car bahot tezz chalata hai.aur tabi virat ki car ka accident ho jata hai...
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Posted: 11 years ago
continue soon
hope nothing happens to virat
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved it
Continue soon and do pm me!
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey...i loooved it soo much:)
pls dear continue soon...nd pls dont stop in middle:)...i wanna see how story ends up to viren and manvi...and how it goes:)
pls pm me if u can:):):)😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg now viren and maanvi will end up together
basically it will be virman only
viren+maanvi=virman
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 2

Virat ka accident ho jata hai..aur virat is dead
Ghar vale ye baat manvi ko batate hai..aur manvi ye news sun kar behosh ho jati hai..

Sb-viren doc ko call karo
van-manvi manvi ankhe kholo
dj-viren doc ko call kiya ke nahi
vi-ha dadaji kiya bus wo ate hi honge
Vi-manvi manvi
Tarun viren sab doc aye hai nice
vi-tarun unhe upar lekar au
Doc-hi viren vadhera apne call kiya tha
Vi-ha doc sab wo manvi behosh ho gai hai
Doc-ok ap sab zara bahar jaye muje kuch test karne hai
vi-dj-van-sb-ok doc
after 15 min doc bahar ate hai
dj-doc sab thik to hai
van-doc kya baat hai
vi-doc manvi thik hai
doc-ha wo thik hai esi koi baat nahi hai
vi-fir manvi behosh kese ho gai
doc-virenji gud news hai manvi pregnant hai
vi,van,sb,dj,chachi,chachu--kyaaa
doc-ha manvi ma banevali hai.isliye sayad thakan ki vaja se behosh ho gai,par mene unhe inyec kiya hai wo 1 hours me hosh me a jai gi..
Dj-ok doc
Doc-ok ab me chalta hu.koi bi baat ho ap muje call karna.aur ha pragnancy ki halat me inhe jitna ho sake khus rakhie ga..
Van-ok doc

sab log nice hall me..
Van-ye kya ho gaya..jab manvi hosh me ayegi to hum use kya kahenge..
Vi-ma jo sach hai wo to manvi ko batana hi hoga..

After 1 hours manvi hosh me ati hai aur uske next me vanshika ma hoti hai.manvi use hug karke rone lagti hai
m-ma ye kya hi gaya..ma ye nahi ho sakta mera dil kehta hai virat abhi bi yahi hai..
Van-manvi beta sambhalo apne ap ko aur ab tumhe apne sath apne bache ka bhi khayal rakhna hai.aur agar virat yaha hota aur tumhe is tarah rota hua dekhta to use kya acha lagta.
M-ma lekin
van-manvi virat ke liye khus raho.aur virat ke bache ke liye..
M-ha maa me ab nahi roungi

Manvi ghar valo ke samne khus rehti thi par wo andar se tutgai thi.wo haar pal virat ko yaad karti thi...

After 1 month

Van-sb-dj-chachu-chachi-sab hall me beth kar bate kar rahe hote hai..

Van-bauji manvi hamare samne khus rehti hai par hum sab jante hai ke wo andar se tut gai hai..
Sb-ha wo ti hai wo haar pal virat ko yaad karti hai..hame manvi ko is sab se bahar nikal na hoga..varna manvi ke sath bache ko kuch hona jai..
Dj-sb bita tum sahi keh rahi ho.hame manvi ki zindagi me vapes khushya lani hogi..
Van-ha bauji par kese
dj-van bita mere dimag me ek khyal a ya hai kyu na hum manvi ki shadi kara de..
Sb-bauji he to sahi hai par kya manvi dubara shaadi karegi..aur kon karega use shaadi.
Van-aur bauji wo dushra jo koi manvi se shaadi karega kya wo uske bache ko khus rakh payega.kya use utna hi pyaar dega jitna agar virat hota wo use karta
chacha,chachi-ha bauji van aunty sahi keh rahi hai
dj- ha ye sab muje bi pata hai,meri puri baat dhyaan se suno.me bi nahi chahta ke manvi is ghar se jai aur nahi hamara hone vala pota..hamne manvi ki dushri shaadi viren se karne ki sochi hai
sb,van,-kya viren se
dj-ha viren se..jeevika ke baad viren ka bhi esa hi halat hai..isliye hamne fesla kiya hai ke hum manvi ki shadi viren se karayenge.jise na manvi is ghar se jayegi aur ye bi ke viren manvi ke bache ko utna hi pyaar karega jitna use virat karta..
Van,sb-par bauji kya viren aur manvi ye shaadi ke liye manege
dj-zarur manege aur nahi mane to hum unhe manai ge..wo apni baki zindagi ese to nahi ji sakte na..

Agle din

ghar vale unka fesla viren aur manvi ko batate hai..aur manvi aur viren iske liye mana karte hai..dj viren aur manvi se kehte hai ke agar wo dono ek dushre se shaadi nahi karna chahte.to koi baat nahi par unhe kisi ke sath to shaadi karni hi hogi...ye hai hum sab ka fesla hai..

Next day viren ne sab baat par sochne ke baad manvi se milne gaya..

V-manvi tum nr kya socha hai
m-mene is ke bare me kuch nahi socha
v-manvi me tumse shaadi karne ke liye tayar hu
m-kyaaa ap esa nahi karenge
v-manvi agar me na karunga to bi dadaji hamari shaadi kisi aur se karayenge.manvi mene bahot socha aur sirf yahi baat mere dimag me ati hai.manvi agar humne kisi aur se shadi ki to hamare sath sath unki bi zindagi barbaad hogi..kyu ke tum bi janti ho aur me bi ke hum kisi aur ko ab pyaar nahi kar payenge..dushro ki zindagi barbaad karne se to acha hai..ke hum khud ye fesle ko apnaye..ham dono ek dushre ka haal jante hai..hum ghar walo ke liye itna to kar sakte hai.aur manvi virat ke bache ko kisi aur ka naam mile ise to acha hai ke hum shaadi karle.tum socho fir batana..

Manvi is ke bare me pura din sochti hai..aur fir use vireb ki baate sahi lagti hai aur wo viren ko jakar ha karti hai shaadi ke liye...aur dushre din ye baat viren aur manvi ghar walo ko batate hai.aur 2 din baad unki shaadi ho jati hai..ghar wale Viren aur manvi ko ek naye kamre me rehne ko kehte hai.take wo waha apne naye din ki shuru vaat kare jaha jeevika aur virat ki yade na ho...ghar wale viren aur manvi ko naye room me le jate hai.aur ab night time..




Guyzzz sorry for my bad hindi..ab age kya hoga raat ko...