ArYa SS: A Father's Trial - PART 5 Up (PG 22) - Page 18

superb...really really nice. kat loved it...thanks for the pm

Hey Kat Di! 🤗 Finally you updated and finally I got to comment! 😆

Originally posted by: kdsubs1

@Naureen - thanks sweetie! Hope the wait and your multiple reminders was worth it. Yash as encounter-specialist 🤣 - wish i had thought of that - would have used it in the inquisition 😆. Its always a pleasure to write for you - you read my stories with as much emotion as i invest in them. Thank you!

Wait was really worthy Kat 😉
This encounter specialist instantly came in my mind as I read about him 😆
Thank yew soo soo soo much that yew acknowledge my comments so much although they aren't that good , just random 😆

Scindia Inquisition is over!

Just loved, LOVED the inquisition, Kat. And what an inquisition it is!! Am just thinking about having this for my daughter's friends when she grows up. 😆 However I could neither be strict nor put a straight face for doing such a thing. 😃

@Indu - i know, court-martial!! I was thinking the same as i set up the scene - so very filmy 😆😆. But i allow myself these filmy liberties in this story - its my relaxation-writing. Our Indian dads and brothers are so possessive na 😆 - god bless them! Thanks for reading lady!


@Naeema - thank you! Vikram's shoes - i hope not - would hate that myself. As for updates - let's see. This section was for Palak and am done with that. Perhaps i will write seperate sections for the other kids.


@Dona - thank you sweetie!


@Bhuvana - thank you! I am happy i could spread some amusement 😊.


@Sheen-Coolkiwi - thank you!

@Aanyakunat, Freya, Luv_lvndr - thank you! I am glad you enjoyed the story - it was a fun one for me to write, so am really happy that it provided some amusing moments for you too.


@Rasheeda - thank you dear. I am so glad you liked it.


@Vanny - thank you sweetie. Yes, these inquisitions are really serious things - and i have seen at least one in real-life. I expect i will be arranging some given i have 4 daughters!! 😆😆 You know i did think of bringing the viper in along with her RD, but couldn't really fit her into the whole mood of the tale - so her proxy RD had to suffice 😛.


@Taahir - thank you! I had fun imagining and writing it, so am glad some of that came through 😊.


@Morris - thank you! It was fun writing it - and perhaps more fun actually building up to it 😊. Hey - don't have your daughter curse me if you end up with an inquisition for her "followers" - though, to tell u the truth, i suspect my hubby and i will have a few for our daughters' 😆😆.

Oh Gosh! I was laughing my head off,during the inquisition!

The update was an absolute delight Kat!

Hiii dear!!!

M back.......how r u yaar??? missed ur FFs sooo much. Was out of town so couldn't read any of them...

anyway, back to the topic

awesome 1st chapter yaar
n u know what was d best part i liked...Pari's whistle...seriously.
sachi. mazaa aa gaya yaar.

M loving this father side of Mr. Yash. The possessive towards his daughter and her future and that inquisition was excellent man. Very gripping. Gr8 work by Vikram. Brave boy.

Actually, great work by you for giving a strong personality called Vikram.

Was imagining the onscreen Ansh and Palak as ur FF's characters. How they would be like when they grow.

And as usual all Yash and Aarti scenes were sweet and cute. Sweet couple.

Thanks for the pm dear otherwise how I would have read, pata nahi.

lots of love
vinu

PS: The best part of ur FF - U make me forget the on screen story also and make me glued to ur story

@Pearl - thank you love. I had fun writing it and am glad the section brought enjoyment to you and others.


@Vinu - welcome back my dear. Hope you had a good trip. I am so glad you liked it. I was in a dilemma about Vikram, but then decided to go with my first instinct. Its so nice to know that you all liked the way he turned out - and the whole situation too! Oh - very sweet of you, you give me more credit than i deserve.


@Princess - thank you. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.


@Naureen - i know you are waiting sweety, but for now, this story is done. I think there will be future installments of the teenage kids and definitely one about Pooja, but it will take some time.