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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Malvika_rajeev

So, Nidhi is pregnant...and Mallika has given up her claim on Ashutosh. Kya baat hai...what a proud woman.

Ab aage kya?


she is indeed a proud woman, Doc...what follows is Nidhi's display of immense courage and strength...you know only too well that I love Ashu more...but when it comes to this FF, Nidhi is my pride and joy!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyotinayana

When you are left with nothing in a relationship , a dignified exit is a better alternative mallika is classy enough to know this great update as usual thanks


Thank you, Dr Jyoti 😳

Mallika sure is classy...she did resort to underhand tactics to start with...but that brought her face to face with an Ashutosh she no longer recognised...and once she realized that the relationship was past its sell by date, she preferred to make a dignified exit!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sujata withdrawal symptoms have set in !!! No ashu fix over the weekend for addicts like us! !!! Yeh body update mangey !!!!!!!!!
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Sujatha, fabulous chapter.

Mallika has agreed to the divorce. Better to end a dead relationship then to prolong it. Wow, Nidhi is pregnant.

Cliffhanger! Interesting... how will Nidhi react to seeing Mallika in Ashu's arms?

Waiting... please continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry again for the late response Sujatha
What do i say? no words come to me to describe ur writing...so i would simply what i like in ur chapter and y?

"Yes Sir...what Mallika wants, Mallika gets!"

These words sum up Mallika perfectly. And, yet as i read further, these words seemed an irony - i mean, mallika failed miserably to get fav. underdog (Sorry no offense to Ashu fans, but this kind of sums ashmal marriage) and of course he house of cards, which got blown away by a storm called Nidhi. So, in the end, mallika didnot get what she wanted

"Anjie, I need to protect my interests...only If my interests are at stake...when I know my interests are his priority even more than his own, why should I look out for myself'?"

Wow, this is Nidhi - this kinda love is not found atleast not today. such blind trust.
"I know you came into her life before I did...so thank you, Anji...for loving and protecting my Nidhi all these years...you are welcome to continue...but believe me, you will have me for company!"

"Well, she was my Nidhi before she became yours!"

"I accepted that you are my senior on this, didn't I'!"

Nidhi cut into their friendly bickering.

"Hello...I am not some object for you to be fighting over...I am a living, breathing person with a mind of my own'!"

Both of them looked at her with wide eyes.

"Really?"

She punched Ashutosh on the shoulder and put her tongue out at Anjie.

Loved loved just loved this exchange between the 3. the dynamics of anji - ashu relation are so different here - first the slap, then the distrust and now, the palpable insecurity over his visit to Mallu's family. and yet, u can see a mutual respect and love between them.

Nidhi turned beetroot red at that.

"Haye haye' Jeejaji, I must give it to you...you have actually made my sherni friend to blush!"

"You mean you've never seen her blush before?"

"You mean she has blushed before...when was this...please tell!"

"You see the day we got married in Agra..that night at the hotel...she sent me in to have a shower...and then when I came out...mmm!"

Nidhi stopped the flow of words with her hand.

"Ashutosh...will you please stop it! I am sure Anjie does not need any further details!"

Anjie rolled her eyes.

"What do you mean, Nidhi...of course I do...Jeejaji, please continue..what happened after you came out of the shower?"

"Both of you are equally shameless!"

Oh they are discussing nidhi's blushes, so cute Sujata

Jeevan Se Bhari Teri Aankhen
Majboor Kare Jeene Ke Liye
Saagar Bhi Taraste Rahte Hain
Tere Roop Ka Ras Peene Ke Liye

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dzItbnbSCQ

Hamari pasand kitni milti hai Sujata - this is one of my all time fav. too. and 'Jalte hain jiske liye makes me go absolutely nuts -- kya lyrics, kya une kya melodies, and of couse kya soulful yet romantic voice hai
loved the armaan ashu convo too - armaan is so mindful of nidhi's depth of feelings for ashu and the immrense risk she took.
U had earlier given an outline of story. i hope it is not nearing the end... pl. continue this ff for a long time.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jyotinayana

Sujata withdrawal symptoms have set in !!! No ashu fix over the weekend for addicts like us! !!! Yeh body update mangey !!!!!!!!!


Dr Jyoti, yeh kuch zyada nahi hogaya 😆...the update was only yesterday...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SSA777

Sujatha, fabulous chapter.


Mallika has agreed to the divorce. Better to end a dead relationship then to prolong it. Wow, Nidhi is pregnant.

Cliffhanger! Interesting... how will Nidhi react to seeing Mallika in Ashu's arms?

Waiting... please continue soon.


Thank you Sha 😳

However confident you are in a relationship, you are still liable to feel pain, aren't you?
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sujatha.rao


Thank you Sha 😳

However confident you are in a relationship, you are still liable to feel pain, aren't you?


How true.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sshirley

Sorry again for the late response Sujatha
What do i say? no words come to me to describe ur writing...so i would simply what i like in ur chapter and y?

"Yes Sir...what Mallika wants, Mallika gets!"

These words sum up Mallika perfectly. And, yet as i read further, these words seemed an irony - i mean, mallika failed miserably to get fav. underdog (Sorry no offense to Ashu fans, but this kind of sums ashmal marriage) and of course he house of cards, which got blown away by a storm called Nidhi. So, in the end, mallika didnot get what she wanted


But you must appreciate Mallika's class...she has now made it seem that she does not want Ashutosh...by being the one to initiate the divorce, she has rejected Ashutosh...so, in a twisted sense, she has got what she wanted!

"Anjie, I need to protect my interests...only If my interests are at stake...when I know my interests are his priority even more than his own, why should I look out for myself'?"

Wow, this is Nidhi - this kinda love is not found atleast not today. such blind trust.
"I know you came into her life before I did...so thank you, Anji...for loving and protecting my Nidhi all these years...you are welcome to continue...but believe me, you will have me for company!"

"Well, she was my Nidhi before she became yours!"

"I accepted that you are my senior on this, didn't I'!"

Nidhi cut into their friendly bickering.

"Hello...I am not some object for you to be fighting over...I am a living, breathing person with a mind of my own'!"

Both of them looked at her with wide eyes.

"Really?"

She punched Ashutosh on the shoulder and put her tongue out at Anjie.

Loved loved just loved this exchange between the 3. the dynamics of anji - ashu relation are so different here - first the slap, then the distrust and now, the palpable insecurity over his visit to Mallu's family. and yet, u can see a mutual respect and love between them.

enjoyed writing this part

Nidhi turned beetroot red at that.

"Haye haye' Jeejaji, I must give it to you...you have actually made my sherni friend to blush!"

"You mean you've never seen her blush before?"

"You mean she has blushed before...when was this...please tell!"

"You see the day we got married in Agra..that night at the hotel...she sent me in to have a shower...and then when I came out...mmm!"

Nidhi stopped the flow of words with her hand.

"Ashutosh...will you please stop it! I am sure Anjie does not need any further details!"

Anjie rolled her eyes.

"What do you mean, Nidhi...of course I do...Jeejaji, please continue..what happened after you came out of the shower?"

"Both of you are equally shameless!"

Oh they are discussing nidhi's blushes, so cute Sujata

Yeah, my attempt at cute and sweet...instead of my usual serious stuff...

Jeevan Se Bhari Teri Aankhen
Majboor Kare Jeene Ke Liye
Saagar Bhi Taraste Rahte Hain
Tere Roop Ka Ras Peene Ke Liye

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-dzItbnbSCQ

Hamari pasand kitni milti hai Sujata - this is one of my all time fav. too. and 'Jalte hain jiske liye makes me go absolutely nuts -- kya lyrics, kya une kya melodies, and of couse kya soulful yet romantic voice hai

Yes, I am a sucker for old songs...reason why I probably like Dr Dubey 😆

loved the armaan ashu convo too - armaan is so mindful of nidhi's depth of feelings for ashu and the immrense risk she took.
U had earlier given an outline of story. i hope it is not nearing the end... pl. continue this ff for a long time.

Sigh..yes, it is drawing to a close...how do I stretch a story beyond limits?

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