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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Love both parts. Sikandar kidnapped Riya. Its really interesting. Pls update soon. Btw My nick name is also Saba.Edited by Arieltabi - 11 years ago
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#12
Very interesting dear😊
So sikander has kidnapped Riya, poor Riya she's already hurt in her feet, and now poor Arjun who has to undergo again the pain he went through when Roshni was killed😭
Please update very soon😃
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wow it was a nice uncomplete short story👍🏼 plz plz update soon i dying to see it's next chapter plz update soon...😃
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guyz if u want me to write chapter 3 so plz leave comments so i can know that you are excited to read ch3...😊

and if i get more comments then i promise i'll write ch3 tomorrow...
Edited by saba.ali81 - 11 years ago
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Loved it plz pm me the next update :)
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very nice plzzz update soon
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nicely written.
keep writing..
please pm me of next update 😊
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OMMMGGG CANT WAIT FOR YOUR UPDATE !!!!!!

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plz do continue soon we are waiting for next chaprter😃😃.
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         CHAPTER THREE

rathore:arjun...arjun kya hua ??

shree :sir...ri thike to haina??

arjun:rathore wo...wo sss...sikandar ne riya ko kiddnape kar liya hai

rathore:what? oh my god

arjun: angrily say's ye sab kuch jo hua ya jo horaha hai sab...sab meri ghalti hai...

rathore:nahi rawte isme tumhari koi ghalti nahi hai tum fikar mat karo hum riya ko dhund lenge...plz plz arjun sumbhalo apne aap ko...

arjun:kaise sambhalun rathore kaise...jab...roshni mujhe chor kar gayi th toh...toh jaise taise kar ke mene apne aap ko sumbhal liya tha lekin...lekin ab kaise sumbhalun...mujh me itani burdahst ki hudd nahi rahi rathore nahi rahi... arjun tell his feeling's to rathore while crying...

Next day it was 1.30pm in ETF's office every one was sitting on their sites.suddenly a phone bell rang it was arjun's phone...but arjun did'nt know bcoz he was in flashback with riya

rathore:rawte but he didi'nt hear he say again rawte

arjun:han...

rathore :rawte tumhara phone...

arjun pick the phone and say hello...

it was sikandar:ayyy rawte agar apni mehbooba ko bachana chahta hai to aaj dupehar thike 03.00 baje iss pate pe aajana aur agar nahi aaya na to apni mehbooba ko bhi bhool jana...

arjun:lekin me kaise maanlu ke riya ko tumne hi kiddnap kiya hay...???

sikandar:angrily( rawte tujh yaqeen nahi..??)

arjun : nahi

sikandar: toh phir thike hai ye le apni mehbooa se baat kar...

(arjun know that sikandar was speaking truth but he did this all for hearing riya's voice so that it can give some energy to him...sikandar givethe phone on riya and say le apne sir se baat kar

riya :sir...

arjun :riya...riya kesi ho tum (he ask riya in in soft voice...

riya:sir i'm ok sir...

arjun happily get smile on his face and water in his eyes...

riya was suppose to say something but sikandar imidiatly snach the phone from riya and speakup ab to yaqeen aagaya na acp rawte...

arjun:dekh sikandar teri dushmani mujh se hai riya se nahi is liye usse kuch nahi hona chahiye...

sikandar:koch nahi hoga bass tu humein apne aap ke hawale kar de...

arjun:thike hai lekin riya mujhe sah salamat wapis chahiye

sikandar:mil jaye gi...the he cut the phone

rathore to arjun:kya kha sikandar ne rawte..???

arjun:aaj dupehar ko 03.00pm baje is pate pe bulaya hai...

rathore:to thike hai hum sab 03.00pm baje wahan jayen ge aur riya ko wapis layenge...

arjun : nahi rathore usne mujhe akele bulaya hai iss liye me akela hi jaunga...

rathore :rawte lekin iss se riya ko to khatra hai hi lekin iss se tumhari jaan ko bhi khatra hai...

arjun:mujhe apni jaan ki parwa nahi mujhe riya ko bachane ke liye akele hi jaana hoga...

rathore:rawte lekin...

arjun:please rathore baat ko samjho...then he leave from there.

rathore :shree chottu ye toh maanne se raha ab humein hi kuch karna hoga..

shree:shree lekin sir hum kya karen ge...

chottu:haan sir...arjun sir to hamari baat hi nahi sunrahe...??

rathore:waqt aane par sab pata chall jayega chottu...

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Now it was 03.00pm arjun reach at sikandar's address the two man's was standing there already and say arjun to come with them to sikandar...arjun go with them.it was an old sealed factory where was sikandar...

arjun reach to the factory.his saw riya sitting on a chair tie with a rope.arjun's eyes was happy watching riya...

sikandar's man put their guns near arjun's head..

arjun:sikandar dekh mene apna waada pura kiya ab teri baari hai riya ko chorr de...

sikandar:laugh and say tune kya samjha rawte?? itani aasani se nahi chorun ga

arjun: matlab???

sikandar:matlab ye ke ab tere saath saath teri mehbooba bhi jayegi upar sikandar tell arjun laughly.

arjun became angry and say sikandar in a loud voice.

sikandar:awaaz...neechi rawte..!

sikandar pick his gun to shot arjun...

arjun was standdig quietly and angrily...

sikandar's gun point was on arjun his finger was on on gun's button.suddenly rathore enter there and hit on sikandar's hand and the gun fell down from sikandar's hand...

then shree and chottu enter there with some police officers.they all start fighting together.arjun go to riya and open the rope.arjun there was an eyelock scene when the both juststare on eachother's eyes.suddenly a man from back shot arjun riya saw that he is going to shot arjun she quickly puch arjun a side the bullet was comming near to riya and hit her.arjun loudly say riya...

riya fell down on the floor.the floor hit her very hardly on her head and she get unconscious.

arjun :riya...riya aankhen kholo riya...

rathore : rawte riya ko hospital le kar jao forran...

arjun:pickup riya. then he take her to the car and put her on the seat and start the car...

                                
                                                       ~SABA~    
 
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Edited by saba.ali81 - 11 years ago