Kriyaansh FF: Jo bheji thi dua ( PART 3 PG 3)

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Posted: 13 years ago
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    Whassup y'all! I'm new to this forum altogether and my name is Ananya better known as Anzy


    First of all, let me admit that I am a HUGE dance fanatic and D3 is a savior to me as I get to watch awesome actors and dance at the same place. My favourite couple is Kriyaansh and I'm using the present tense because I believe that someday they will get back together ( come what may ). This is my first post and being a imagination freak I'm starting with a story on my fav couple.I'm beginning it as a One Shot but if you all like it then I would like to continue as much as I can . I'll enjoy reading your comments and hope that you enjoy reading my story


    The story is set at a time when Rey is planning to make Taani his permanent girlfriend , pushing away his memories of Kriya. Unknown to him, there is a storm coming towards St.Louis and the lives of the Louisans. Will Rey manage to recognise the truth or will he ignore the red light?

    This is just an intro of the story. If you find it good, then please lemme know 😉

    Jo bheji thi dua...

    One, two, three, four...The rhythm passed on as they danced in sync with each other, both having similar but varied thoughts. With his last ounce of energy he made the final jump and landed in poise as the last beat faded away. He felt the hand on his shoulder and knew what was coming "Dude, its alright you know?" Swayam said to the slightly panting figure in front of him " Tujhe itne sehne ki zaroorat nahi hai. I know that today is a difficult day for you. We'll understand if you.." he stopped when he felt his hand pushed away . He saw him walking away towards the door and stopping "You know Swayam, main kuch nahi bear kar raha hoon. Ab toh maybe mujhe aadat si ho gayi hai. " he said before leaving the hall.

    As Kriya got down from the car , she sensed defeat. Defeat against her own thoughts. She knew that she was in for the pit if she met him. How would she ever look into his eyes? Thos eyes which made her feel fuzzy every time he gazed at her. It would be pure torture. Suddenly she snapped back to reality as her cousin took out her luggage. "Chalo yaar, dreamland se thoda bahar aao!" Neeti teased and gave a playful punch as she led her into the apartment. The second time at Mumbai. This time though, she was alone. Without the only family she had. Her mom. Smriti , who had left her daughter forever. Who had been the reason for this return to Mumbai. Who had been the reason for the seperation between her and him. Today, on her birthday, she would have to start a new life. A life where she must avoid her past.

    "Rey!", he heard the screech from behind as he walked to the parking lot. Taani ran upto him and held his hand, gasping for breath, "Rey, where were you?! Main toh tabse baat karna chahthi thi! Don't you remember, aapne aaj mujhe date par lejaane ka promise kiya tha? Chalo na please!" she pouted and fussed, not noticing the strained expression on Rey's face. "Not today Taani." he said ina controlled voice and got into his car before she could react. As the car sped away, Taani was left baffled. Little did she know that today, Rey would think of only her. The girl who stole his heart. The girl who broke his heart. Kriya Ghai


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awsum!!!...waise isska ek aur part hain na????...

Do pm me ven u update dis...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome...Update Soon & Plzzz PM Me 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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👏Owsum👏... !! 😃
Continue pls... :) and please pm me when you update !!
Thanx 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Interestin concept..!!
Bt y kriya has to overcome her past??
N lik rey is thinkin about kriya.. Omg thtz a news for today:p
Hmm.. Lookin forward to d story!!
Add me in for d pm's!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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pm me wen u update this next...superb...
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pls pm me wen u update next part...awesome...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you soo much guys for your support! I never thought that my first attempt would be appreciated so much. I'll continue as soon as possible.
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hey luv the concept do pm me ven u update...
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awesome

do pm me when u update

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