Virika in canada new story lAST PART

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sara arif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

OH my gosh! this is amazing kiran <3 but i cant help requesting u ! can u please continue it right now! pleaseee eee <3 love u 👏

Edited by ktloversera - 12 years ago

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areeba

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

lol awesome i read it after long time thanks kiran love it DARLING ;) its damn sexyy ahh do continue soon and plz make sure maanvi ko heart attack aajaye :P😆😳

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vishwa patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

superb update!!!😊😊

excited for virika's first date!!!❤️

please continue soon and PM me!!!

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Nimishrr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

As usual, fantastic 😃 ! Update soon.. next part virika's first official date.. Yess!! going to be interesting for sure ❤️

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Puneet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

I loved this part, please continue soon!

could you add me to your pm list please??

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Nishtha Relan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#226

amazing, just loved it... you r genious... pls continue soon cant wait to read the next part...

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Alina Tacker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#227

Recap: Virika planned their first date in the hotel room . Viren is really excited.
Part 20 (Manishajii sirf tumhare liye )
Viren was so excited how jeevika gonna look , cuz he knew it that she is gonna really prepare herself, cuz it;s our first official date .
Viren to himself: beta tu bhi tayar hoja , aisa na ho apni date pe khudi late .
He started to get ready. AFter wearing his clothes, he was in front of the mirror doing his hair and himming the song
Aaj rat janu mainu pyar kar le
Duniya ne sari rule break kar le
O saade naal poore tere shadi kar le
Aaja lip lock karle o..
Virat just passed by
Virat: acha to yahan janab lip lock ke bare mein soch rahe hain
viren : virat , tu kab aya
virat: jab ap gane ga rahe te
viren: wo to aise hi , mu par char gaya
virat: acha to app ja kahan rahe hain ?
viren: baharr
virat: wo to mujhko bhi pata hai , lekin kahan bahaar , and kab tak wapas ao ge
viren: yaar tu teek hai , mama ke jaise behave kyun kar raha hai
virat: kahan ja rahe ho batao na
viren: DATE pe bass
virat": kiske saath
viren: manvi ke sath , he just joked
virat: bhai aapka to uski behen ke saath chakar tha na
viren: ab manvi ke saath hai, she is too cool
virat: wow bhai , apto ladkian aise badalrahe ho , jaise mein apne kapre change karta hoon
viren just explose laughing
viren: virat do u know u and manvi are really funny , u guys should make a good pair ?
virat: yuck this ded futiya
viren show him big eyes
virat: oh ya sorry , how could i say something about my bro gf
viren: do u really think im dating her
virat: i dont know , u should know who u are dating
viren: yaar i was joking im still with jeevika
virat: acha to jeevika ke sath date pe
viren: haanji , kaisa lagraha hoon
virat: bilkul vadhera style !
viren smiled.
Vira: acha to date kahan par hai ? restorant
viren: no
virat: to phir
viren: hotel room
virat: what ? dont u guys it;s too much , pehle saath rehna , phir dating in the room
viren in his mind : virat tumhe kya pata ke sab kuch ho chuka hai , ab kya charmana
virat: kuch kaha apne
viren: nahin to
viren: ok im going now , not wanna be late
Viren look cute and simple

Viren reached the room and decorated it with roses and baloons ! and he hide up in the room . Jeevika messaeged him : Im in the lawn where are u ?
viren messaged back: im on the way go to the room
Jeevika: okay jaldi ao , hamesha late
Jeevika takes the keys and enter the room the late was closed the reach open it and close the door
Jeevika was looking really cute :

Viren was hiding behind the door . When he saw her , he was amazed by her unconditonal beauty ,
viren to himself: how can someone be so cute and beautiful wo bhi naturaly ? beta bohat lucky hai to jeevika ko pa ke
Jeevika was really happy to see the arrangement done by viren , she rememeber last night , and she just blushed slightly viren just go in her back and put his hand on her eyes.
jEEVIKA: kaun hai
viren touch her waist with the other hand
jeevika: acha to tum ho mr late
viren remove the hand and turn her
Viren: zara tumne dek to loon jee bar ke
Virika was lost in each other eyes , solid eyelock viren said : i miss u
jeevika: me to yaar
He brings her more closer that he could feel her heartbeat
viren: why don;t ur hearbeat increase when ur near me ?
jeevika: because ur my heartbeat lol kuch zyada filmy to nahi ho gaya
jeevika: lets eat something im hungry
viren: ya and he makes her more closer
jeevika: to phir chodo na
viren: bhook nahin lagi
jeevika: haan but lets order food
viren: i want a strawberry flavour
jeevika: u want a cake of strawberry or a smoothie ?
viren: yaar no i want to ...
jeevika just understood what viren wanted but she faked that she didnt know cuz she wanted to know how would he make her understand
Jeevika: just moved away from him
viren: yaar u never understand something
jeevika: then make me understand
She was trying to control to not laugh
vIREN Wwas so desperate for a kiss
Jeevika go near the phone and say acha to u want strawberry milkshake right ?
viren
viren: ya
jeevika: ill order a lasagna with exta cheese and pepsi and ur strawberry milkshake , im damm hungry
SHE sit on the bed and takes the phone viren come near and grab her hand and close the phone and removed the wire ,
jEEVIKA: what ? kya kar rahe ho ?
viren: i wanna spend time wid u
and he sit near her
and he was getting closer
Jeevika stand up and try to go away viren grab her finger and he pull her and she fall on the bed
viren comes on her top ,
Viren: Finally mere pass to ayi miss choudry
jeevika: yaar tum samaj kyun nahin rahe ho im hungry
viren: hum bhook mita te hain
Jeevika: kaise ?
viren: demo dikaoon
Jeevika just blushed
Viren come closer to her , and kiss her neck
jEEVIKA: vii r en
viren: chup kar jao , and feel the moment
Viren again kissed her neck , and someone knock in the door
viren was so disturbed he didnt wanted to break the romance so he pull out the blanket and put it on both of them
jEEVIKA: WHAT ARE u doing ?
viren: loving my lady any problem
jeevika: im feeling suffocated with the blanket
and viren screamed : come in
the waiter come in and see both of them in the blanket and said sorry sir , if u need something do tell us
and he closed the door
Viren removed the blanket and start kissing her neck again and again
he moves from the top of her and make her change her position and started kisiing her back and he opened the zip of her dress and touch her back JEEVIKA JUST turned back , viren came back on the top of her and
said : there u go my treat for the last moment my strawberry
and he started approching his lips to hers , he wanted him to crave a little more so she just moved her head ,
Viren came more closer and put his lips on hers , and he started kissing it
he kissed them , and as usual jeevika loved viren kissess she always become the tigress and she comes on the top of him and kissed him too they kissed for a long time , both of them was enjoying the moment and finally they broke the kiss , Jeevika put her head on viren chest

PRECAP: JEEVIKA FAINT !

Edited by Virman12 - 12 years ago