RaYa OS- You Are Only Mine!

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Posted: 2012-09-22T07:05:18Z

RaYa OS- You Are Only Mine!

 

Well it's the confrontation I am looking forward between Ram and Priya without any other member present while they speak their hearts out and finally reunite!Big smile


So it being a weekend and no RaYa I thought of penning down an OS on them. Embarrassed

HugHope you all Enjoy!Hug


It was evening time after Ram was discharged from the hospital and after numerous begging's, had Ram given a chance to Priya to explain her.  She had fought very hard with her emotions for 5 years and now she was not going to fight destiny. She was his wife and she was going to claim him, her husband, her love, her Ram. She would do anything; fulfil his any condition so he could accept her back in his life. She would do anything in this world to get back Ram in her life.

 

Ram was standing in their room, facing the wall that held his and Priya's wedding picture.  It was a picture when he was filling her maang with the sindoor. He heard a knock on the door,


Priya: "Kya main andar aa sakti hoon?"


He turned around to see Priya standing at the door with a tear stricken face.  He gently nodded and that's when she entered the room, which was the witness to their love, their consummation and their relation.  It had been 5 years but still oddly the room looked the same to her. Only one thing was clear, it didn't shine with brightness.


Priya: "Main aapse baat karna chahti hoon Ram."


Ram: "Paanch saalon baad kya baat karna chahti ho tum Priya?"


With that he pinned her to the wall and looked deep into her eyes, boring into them, trying to figure out she wants to say,


Ram: "Paanch saal baad kya baat karna chahti ho? In paanch saalon main tumne ek baar bhi yeh jaani ki koshish bhi ki kya tumhara Ram zinda hain ya mar gaya…" but before he could say anything, he was silenced by her palms covering his mouth, her eyes pleading him to not say anything further.


She continued,


Priya: "Mujhe ek mauka to dijiye samjhaane ka apne aap ko."


Ram: "In paanch saalon main tumne ek baar bhi mujhe phone nahi kiya yeh batane ke liye ki main zinda hoon Ram aur hamari ek beti bhi hai."


Priya: "Maine bahut koshish ki lekin himmat nahi juta paayi."


Ram: "Mujhe batane ke liye tumhe himmat ki zaroorat padi? Kyun Priya? Kya tum sirf ek baar mujhe aakar bata nahi sakti ki tum zinda ho? Lekin nahi, tum nahi aati."


Priya: "Please Ram, ek mauka maang rahi hoon. Apni beti ke khatir, mujhe samjhane dijiye ki aisa maine kyun kiya?"


Ram: "Hamari beti ke khatir, jab main Dubai main roz Pihu se milta tha, tum tab nahi aake mujhe bata sakti ki Pihu hamari beti hai, lekin nahi, tumne aisa nahi kiya. Tumne wahi kiya jo tumhe sahi laga."


Priya: "Bas Ram. Ab main boloongi aur aap sirf sunenge. Samjhe aap?" With that she held him by his shoulders, not wanting to fall weak in front of him.


Priya: "Aap Dubai ki baat kar rahe hai na? Us party main, main aayi thi aapko sab kuch batane, lekin waha jab main aapse milne aayi thi tab hi Rajat Ayesha ko aapki biwi ke roop main waha bulaya. Main toot gayi thi Ram. Bikhar gayi thi yeh jaankar ki aapne shaadi karli. Main nahi sambhal payi aapne aap ko aur wapas chali gayi. Nahi ana chahti thi aapke saamne yeh jaante huye ki aap apni zindagi main aage badh chuke hai."


Ram: "Tumhe lagta hai ki main aage badh chuka ho? Tumne aisa soch bhi kaise liya ki main zindagi main aagae badh gaya hoon?"

 

He held her tightly by her shoulders and made her look at their first picture together,


Ram: "Wo dekho Priya, hamari tasveer, jab maine tumse vaada kiya tha ki main tumhari har ek wish poori karoonga. Yaad hai hum dono gaye the, tumhara ek pair Maharashtra main tha aur ej Gujarat main. Kitne khush the hum dono. Aajtak hamari yaadon ko sambhaal ke rakha aur tum kehti ho ki main aage badh gaya?"


He shifted and showed her the other pictures adorning the walls,


Ram: "Yeh dekho hamari shaadi ki tasveeren, aur wahan, hamari honeymoon ki aur wo to khaas kar tumhari, wo Vidya aur tumhara dance waali. Aur tum kehti ho ki main aage badha gaya?"


And with turning her, he showed her the interior of the room,


Ram: "Aur wo dekho Priya, jaise tumne hamara kamara sajaya tha, waise hi rakha hai, aur wo dekho, tumhari hair clip tumne mujhe di thi, jab tum apne papa ke ghar jaa rahi thi, aur wo hum dono ki photo frame."


While he showed her every corner of the room, which reminded her of her days with him, he everytime questioned her only one thing,


Ram: "Tumhe lagta hai ki main aage badh chukka hoon?"


She had tears while she saw that actually nothing had changed, except her. She had a misunderstanding.


Priya: "Lekin aapne shaadi to ki na?"


Ram: "Priya tumhe sach main lagta hai ki maine aapni zarooraton ko poora karne ke liye Ayesha se shaadi ki? Lekin tum to misunderstandings ki dukaan to ho na. Tumhe kaise misunderstanding nahi ho sakti?"


Priya: "To phir aapne shaadi kyun ki?"


Ram: "Tumhari izzat bachane ke liye."


Priya: "Yeh kya keh rahe hai?"


He looked away from her, and responded,


Ram: "Haan Priya, tumhare jaane ke baad Ayesha pregnant thi, Sid ne use dhoka diya tha. Aur phir uski izzat bachane ke liye maine use shaadi kar li. Bas aur kuch nahi. Aur tumhe laga ki maine…"


Priya: "Nahi Ram. Main to bas yeh jaana chahti thi ki aapne Ayesha shaadi kyun ki?"


Ram: "Ab jab jawaab mil gaya hai, tum wapas jaa sakti ho Priya. Jaao, wapas jaao apni beti ke saath Dubai aur jiyo apni zindagi."


Priya: "Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai? Itne saalon baad mujhe takdeer ne dobara mauka diya pne pyaar ko pane ka, use main jaane nahi denewaali. Main aapse pyaar karti hoon, aur aapke saath rehna chahti hoon."


Ram: "Par yeh to mumkin nahi hai Priya. Meri shaadi ho chuki hai." He said smiling teasingly. She had tested him enough, now it was his turn.


Priya: "Kya matlab hai aapka? Main aapki patni hoon, aur jab tak pehli patni zinda hai, aapki doosri shaadi bekaar hai. Aap sirf mere pati hai."


Ram: "Lekin tum to mar chuki ho na, aur Pooja ban kar reh rahi ho. Tum meri biwi nahi ho sakti. Jo apne pati ko marne ke haal main chodkar jaa sakti hai, wo mujhse kaise pyaar kar sakti hai?"


Priya: "Main aapki patni Priya hoon aur aap par sirf mera haq hai. Aapki har dhadkan main sirf main basti hoon, aapki har saans main main basti hoon. Aap sirf mere hai! Samjhe aap?"


She continued,


Priya: "Aur aapko kya lagta hai? Ki sirf aapne mujhe yaad kiya, aur mera jo haal tha uska kya Ram? Priya mar sakti hai lekin apne Ram ko kabhi khud se door nahi rakh sakti. Bahut koshish ki maine ki main aapko bhool jaoo; bahut koshish ki main aapke baare main na sochoon; par main haar gayi Ram. Priya apne Ram se ek pal bhi door nahi reh sakti. Yeh 5 saal kaise beetien hain sirf main jaanti hoon. Aapke bina zindagi ka koi astitva nahi Ram. Aapki Priya haar gayi; aapke saamne; aapke pyaar ne use hara diya."

 

With that she hugged him tight! He took her lips in a kiss and she responded with equal passion!

 

Finally Ram and Priya had come together after 5 years and they were happy!

 

The End!

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Posted: 2012-09-22T07:21:20Z
Clap.!! Clap.!! Clap.!! Mera bas chalta tho, i would hv given u national award... U r just awesome.. Every os of ur r so different yet so same.. Different as with new concept, new dialgoues and new emotions.. And same as each and every os r filled with same kind of passion and love we want see btw raya. Thanks for the pm.. Love u and ur works always.Edited by Pinkjali - 2012-09-22T07:22:59Z
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Posted: 2012-09-22T07:40:47Z
Wowww that was just fantastic.. Well done. Keep it up. Loved it.

Thanx for the PM
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Posted: 2012-09-22T07:53:01Z
hope we could see that also in new epi...but humare itni achi kismat kaha...!!!

although nice OSThumbs Up...well written Clap & thanks for the pm
Edited by isha01 - 2012-09-22T08:00:58Z
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Posted: 2012-09-22T07:57:34Z
nyc update...
luved it...
thenku for writin n pm...
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Posted: 2012-09-22T07:58:17Z
Woww! Amazing OS Mayu!!
Loved it! So want the same thing to happen in the show (but I know it's not gonna happenUnhappy)
Anyway! Its so beautifully written!
You're such a fab writer! Thanks a lot for the PM! Hug
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Posted: 2012-09-22T08:06:44Z
wow perfect dialogues for the confrontation koi isse bhejo cv's ko kuch tho seekhenge
awesome always everything was pepeperfect
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Posted: 2012-09-22T08:07:41Z
wow wow wowo!!! awsome update yaar!!!  wish she ws like that!!!

dunno!!!!! fabulous 1 yaar!!!
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