you are only mine- mg ff pt 10/ pg 19/ 12.8.2013 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
stupid brij he is just asking for it now
hello there is no way in hell maan will leave him now
hope he tortures him properly
and i hope he rescues geet and soon please
man nice trap maan
and can ya please make the update little bit longer please
hope to see ya soon again

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO ALL

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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Interesting ...updt sooon...plezzz can u make the updt looong .. Cuz updt r reallyy short...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: sayu123


thank u doc..😃😃😃
u made my day..😛😛
haaye doc u commented...😲
still day dreaming


i know was late .. 

but couldn't make earlier than that ðŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
nice part 

me waiting for the next part 

wanna see .. what will happen now .. 

thnx for pm

cont soon.. 

wishing you the same dearie
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
part 11-

warning 16+: some mature content ahead and plz don't bash me.

past

brij was hanged up and down on a rod. he just got big shocked. for two minutens his scenes became numb. he couldn't understand anything. after like that shocked got over he started shouting " bachao, bachao"

maan was very happy after the his plan became successsful. he was seeing all the moves of brij from the cctv. his right hand shekhar was on the sight and updating about progress of plan to maan. after brij kindaping maan told shekhar that to take brij a sunny place and beat him by salt's water rod. 

as per orders brij was caught up and sarted beaten up by saulty water's rod. maan specifically mentiones about beet him on hands and very painfully bacause that filtch hands was abused his geet. after some like two hours brij's beaten was subside. again he was relased from ropes but maan's men dragged ruthlessly brij from hot soil which become hot due sunny's days. 

brij was kept a godown where he tied to iron rods half naked and contiunsley torching by electric wires. the rage of maan was going to peek seeing brij's tourture. maan was just recollecting how brij tourtched geet in last two days. 

maan made call to geet's home and..

sorry for short updates! and sorry being super duper late!

HAPPY MAKARSANKRANT RO ALL MY READERS!!!
Edited by sayu123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
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hello readers, 
i am sayu . well my exams in stating from mrch 20th and then my preprations are now started and have to submit some projjects and assinments . my prelim was finished on sat and now break of 1 week and then start my oreals and presentionts start. so, i will not able update my story regurly and will try to give some more up[dates before my eaxms start. hope u understand and wait for my updates.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
oyye not a cliffhanger dear
chalo koi nahin
wow now thats some method of torturing someone i havent seen before
will keep that in mind if someone asks me to torture or ounish the villain of their story
maan really knows how to take his revenge right
well this is geet we are talking about so this is bound to happen only
well best of luck for the exams and guess we will see you when ever you are free

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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
awesum updt ...loved it...loved the way maan tortured brij...cliffhanger???waiting eagerly fr nxt updt...continue soon...
and fr studies...all the best...will wait eagerly fr ur updts...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
superb.. i read all parts
 
add me in ur pm list..
 
update soon.. waiting waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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liked the part 

thanks for pm

cont soon