OS: Hum Saath Saath Hain - Part III - Pg 5 - 09/16 - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Xarina

What criticisims???!!!!   Another good OS from you.  I like the way you are narrating this.  Can't wait for part two to see what is going to happen.  Thanks Harini.


Thanks Xarina😃 Will try to complete this soon😛

Originally posted by: NazmaJ

You make me feel good and bad Harini!!


Good because your writing is amazing and I love reading anything you write!! I can't wait for part two!!

I love Gopi's strength and the support of all her loved ones - surely this is the way the CVs will take the current storyline!!

Now I feel bad because I am just so bad at updating my work!!!! I have three stories around here and they all need updates!! 



Originally posted by: NazmaJ

Fantastic update Harini!!!


I love that both Modi brothers were undercover!!
And romance is all around us!!!

All the characters were superb and Karodiya is getting exactly what he deserves!!!!

I can't wait to read the next part!!!!


Thank you so much Nazma😛  
I am remiss myself. I so wanted to finish this over the weekend and it is almost Wednesday.. Part III is not even ready😳 

You are updating Bandhan🤗 I will look forward to that😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Lekisira

Nice part...v could watch sumthn similar to this on mondays episode...


Originally posted by: Lekisira

nice part... loved gohem nd raji scenes... waiting for nxt part...


Thank you so much😛
I took the scenes out of the E24 segment and added a little of my own imagination😊
I am trying to redeem Rashi somehow or the other and anyway, she is not part of this KK at all. So she gets to go scott free😉

Originally posted by: swasthi

Great start Harini.


Love the confident Gopi and the family support once the persuading was done. How apt to quote a case from the scriptures too. 

Looking forward to the resolve.

@ Nazma, looking forward to the next update of Bandhan.


Thanks Swasthi😛
I am loving Gopi, Ahem, Koki, Baa and even Rashi this time.. Aww.. I am loving SNS😃
The quote was a lift from the episode. 😳 Thanks again.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Deepikz

Lovely os looking forward to the second part :)


Originally posted by: Deepikz

So glad i have a smart phone,the only place to get access to the net while at work, tuesday mornings go slowly glad i got a break and got to read this, love the gohem and raji bits, can't wait for the nxt update


Thank you Deepika😃
I am glad that you liked it. Will do the update soon.😊

Originally posted by: vibz88

Why such a small part 😡 😆?? This one was lovely:-) a positive rashi is something only in ff s now, onscreen its only blaming jigar about being impotent. Hmmm cant wait to read about gopi s mohini avatar.   Do update soon


Originally posted by: vibz88

Oh this os is so much fun with all the plotting and scheming i wish it was a ss. Update soon:-)


Thank you Vibz🤗
You see, if I can make Rashi positive, the CVs can make her positive quicker😛 So do not worry.. Rashi shows signs of changing..😛

BTW, I had this all planned out.. It is just taking time writing it and as I write, I change the plan and I have a loose end to tie. So you may just have to wait a bit more to read the end.. Sorry😳

It is going to be JiAhem's avatars rather than Gopi's😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nilani19

😊Very Nice OS Harini😊


Thank you Nilani😊

Originally posted by: sinak

Loved it the OS.

Please continue soon


Thank you. Will try to update the last part by tomorrow night😊

Originally posted by: dipsy80

My "Like" button is on vacation again 😡

but i loved your OS and eagerly waiting for the next part Harini! 👏...special thanks for the beautiful gohem moment in the beginning and arent we all waiting to see the strong and self assured Gopi...you portrayed that beautifully!


Thanks Dipsy😃
This is the Gopi I wanted to see. The confident yet innocent child who will stand for her rights in her own way with her husband and family around. The CVs have done justice😛

Originally posted by: ilike_tv

Very very good start, Harini 👏  I just hope That vacant head cvs get some ideas from this!!!!... Do continue plzzz.. waiting for the next part!!!


Thanks Ponny😛 
The CVs though are doing this better.. They are giving us Ahemji in disguise Hmm.. I cannot wait for the story to unfold😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Debalina_Paul

I wish The story would really move this way.. 


Aww.. The story is even better now😃
SNS CVs always take a unique route and that is what keeps me hooked to the serial😛

Originally posted by: gohem_fan1

lovely start... pls continue...


Thank you. Will finish the last part soon..

Originally posted by: ani_gr

Part I is great Harini... Looking forward to part II...😃


Thank you Gayathri😛 Last part to be updated tomorrow😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: kafa

Beautiful please continue


thank you. Will update tomorrow night.😛


Thanks Nilani😃

Originally posted by: RaJiforever

Great update !! Loved it.. do continue soon..!!👏


Thank you so much Tuhina😃
Will update tomorrow.😊

Originally posted by: gohem_fan1

nice Os... intresting... waiting for next part...


Thank you😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally caught up Harini 😃

It's been ages since I have read an SNS OS ...

It was fantastic.. wish i read it only after you have updated the ;last part.. now I cannot wait for the remaining plot to unveil

Loved Ahem and Jigar as undercover agents .. Rashi is good .. and so Kinjal had a plot in this as well,,,
i loved it harini👏⭐️

can u please update the part 3 by tomorrow night.. if u update on Monday - i will read only during the next weekend,...

phease phease ..jaldi update chahiye 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: munnihyderabad


Finally caught up Harini 😃

It's been ages since I have read an SNS OS ...

It was fantastic.. wish i read it only after you have updated the ;last part.. now I cannot wait for the remaining plot to unveil

Loved Ahem and Jigar as undercover agents .. Rashi is good .. and so Kinjal had a plot in this as well,,,
i loved it harini👏⭐️

can u please update the part 3 by tomorrow night.. if u update on Monday - i will read only during the next weekend,...

phease phease ..jaldi update chahiye 😳


Thanks Munni😛

Just returned from work.. Had a long day. Will surely update tomorrow. Sorry for the delay😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks Harini...we are waiting😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb second update.

You have put the cat amongst the pigeons. Looking forward to the next update and Ahem massaging Gopi's feet.