NEW FF: LEGAL SINS Part 10 - Page 136 - Page 78

Originally posted by: lovespell

I read the updates and the note as well. I knew that they will be good reason that you didn't disclose the night for a reason (as we know you gave us mature contents before in other ff's). We were well informed and warned about arnav's character from Aman and the way he is behaving since he saw khushi should be pretty clear that he no way was going to leave khushi. And aman gave the hint as well. Khushi is prepared to do the sacrifice for her own reasons. So why don't we just relax and go with the flow. Madhu has given us beautiful stories before and never disappointed us and this is just another beautiful story. Don't take too harsh on the heart or it will screww you. We should well aaware of these types after seeing the serial and reading lots of FF's which are much bolder and heart breaking than this. But atleast with madhu we know that ARHI will come around and will be inseperable in time. You might as well think I did not face any such behaviour in my life which is totally true, but I have my best friend who faced and still facing it and still forced evry night(TRUE and I mean it). I can't believe some men are PIGHEADED but they are😭 . My heart breaks every time I listen to her and I tell her why the hell she can't come out of the misery. SHe just says it is not that easy. So let's not go for HATE thing so soon as we know arnav will be falling head over heals soon to put our misery out.

Sorry if I hurt any one's feelings and it was not my intention

who says that Madhu will disappoint us? she never has...and she never will...

but it is the story in which behavior of a character compels you to hate/love/feel him/her... and that is what readers are doing...so what is wrong with it...whether reader has faced the pain, similar kind of behavior or not but if reader feel the pain of the character then I would say nothing wrong with it...it shows that reader is enjoying the story...

Also you can tell by seeing the comments, that the writer has done the justice to her story and it has created the impact on readers...what else writer want...I must say Madhu you doing very good job...

like others I also waiting to know how story unfolds...

I am very much curious to know that in every other fan fictions of Madhu, Arnav proved his love to Khushi and then consummated their marriage...here is other way around...in those FF those 3 letter words has the meaning, trust before becoming one...here will those word will have same the meaning...trust...

What will happened if Khushi get pregnant...how will Arnav react to that...

too many things going in mind regarding this story...waiting for update...one part of me wishing that Madhu updates all the parts in one go and kill the suspense but other part saying that then If she does so will not be able to enjoy the FF same way now...

As the story title.. Its happened on that night by forced... I dont know .. Whom to blame
Khushi already knew about him..even After knowing all the term n condition she got married to him n as contract she did whatever she had to... It was against of her morals n values but she did it with full of concern... Yes she was scared.. She wasnt comfortable even she was naive on all that stuff but she cooperated him on his desire to fulfilled... I have no idea what should i say but yes i also dont like this ruthless n heartless arnav... I found his concern for her but not that much as he should have as responsible husband.. How could he... He never learned how to love n respect people.. He learned that money can buy anything thats it..
He paid large amount of money for that afterall... If u paid for something then you will definatly expect some benifit from ur investment.. So he was the same.. There was no harm... Whatever he has done.. That was part of benifits of his business thats it.. It didnot matter for him now. It will be matter one day
When his heart starts to work.. When he will fall in love with his wife... Time will teach him everything

Well i m really scared at the moment... scared of his temper which never allowed his mind to work something good...she left home without informing anyone n Arnav's temper already on high level ...Devi maiya knows what will happen next
Hope she wont get hurt ... May be aman will help her to handle the situation or may be Arnav himself will help his wife ... Cant even guess anything... If i guess i will definatly gets surprise in next update for sure... Coz u know...

CVs n MADHU both r unpredictable .. So i my self consoled that calm down rossy calm down
Breath in ... Breath out .. You will gets more then u expected

At last, i would like to thanks MADHU for extra updat on weekend
Thank you so much for making my day.. Thank you so much

Have a very very happy weekend
Lots love

nice update.

Madhu

Please do not get offend by this comment. this purely my POV...I do not want to hurt anybody's feeling...Also please note that I am not comparing the character...I am comparing the situation which prevails at present...

Honestly when I read the update and a note the very first thing come to mind is that kind of relationship is shared between a wh**e and her customer...where they both do not love each other...customer has paid the price to spend a night with her and he is spending the night with her...this is the similar kind of situation where ASR paid Khushi to be his wife for six months and he is enjoying all the rights of husband...the only difference is that they are legally married therefore their sin legal sin...

this situation will change when Arnav will eventually falls for Khushi as usually a customer never falls for wh**e(he just uses her for the night he paid for and leave her)and I am waiting for that day...

I know some may see this as the situation in arrange marriage too but I do not agree...as In arrange marriage both families knows each other, bride and groom knows each other...here Arnav and Khushi does not know anything about each other...Arnav is lusting after Khushi whereas Khushi is helpless due to her father's illness...Khushi's family does not even know anything about her marriage or Arnav and his family...

I hope I did not hurt yours or anybody's feelings...if I have then I am truly sorry...

Love your note.

This was a great update, love the concept of this story. Can't imagine how her family will treat her on finding out about her shotgun wedding...and how ASR will treat her when he finds her!

Nice love ur note

Wondercwhar Khushi family will Di when they find out wonder what Arnav will do to her knowing that she went without informing him can't wait until you update today please update soon and pm me