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AISI HOTI HAI DOSTI.!(NON-INVESTIGATIVE STORY)

 

Duo is on their way home from an investigation spot.

 

DAYA: Agar kisine kisiko andar aate hue nahi dekha toh who laash andar aayi kaise?

ABHIJEET: Wahi toh main bhi sochh raha hu DAYA. Aisa kaise ho sakta hai? Kuchh toh zarur gadbad hai...

 

By this time, they reach home.

 

ABHI: Jaldi fresh hokar aa jao, khana kha lete hai

DAYA: Khane ke liye main late nahi karunga boss (and winks)

ABHI shakes his head as though saying "Hey Bhagwan"

 

DAYA freshens up and ABHIJEET to is ready and he serves the dinner as usual.

 

DAYA: Kya yaar...

ABHI: (Perplexed) Kya huaa..

DAYA: Sirf itna daaloge.. Aur chahiye mujhe..

ABHI: Hey Bhagwaan..!! and hits his head..

DAYA: Hee hee hee...

ABHI: Tu kabhi sudhrega nahi DAYA

DAYA: Achha chalo.. Ek baat poochu..?

ABHI: Bolo na..

DAYA: Kal mera birthday hai na, isliye kyun na hum chhuti le lete?

ABHI: ACP sir hume maar dalenge.

DAYA: Aree yaar.. Kuch nahi kahenge...

ABHI: Tuje kaise pata ki woh kuch nahi kahenge..?

DAYA: Bass aise he..

ABHI: Nahi DAYA, investigations chal raha hai.. Kaam pe dhyan dena parega..Birthday toh baad mein bhi celebrate kar sakte hai na..

DAYA: Investigations mein hum thoda late jaa sakte hai na..?

ABHI: (Annoyed a bit) DAYA, birthday toh tumhara kal hai, aaj nahi.. Jaakar so jao.. Baaki sab kal dekhte hai

DAYA: (Angrily)Tum nahi aaoge na.. Mujhe pata tha.. Mere bare mein tum sochte he nahi ho. Warna aisa nahi bologe.

ABHI: (Angrily)Haan toh isme itni badi baat kya hai.. Kaam mujhe sabse zyada important hai DAYA

DAYA: (Angrily) Ek dost se zyada bhi important hai tumhe??

ABHI: (shouting) Aisa he samajh lo..and  moves away from the place. He washes his plate alone and bangs his bedroom door behind him

DAYA: Itna gussa aayega inhe.. Main bhi nahi baat karunga isse

 

So DAYA too completes the chores and moves to sleep. He anticipates ABHIJEET to forget his anger and come and wish him but he is disappointed.

 

ABHIJEET wakes up early the next day. Seeing DAYA still sleeping, he prepares breakfast for himself and leaves the house after scribbling a note to DAYA.

 

By the time DAYA wakes up it is around 8.30. He goes to ABHIJEET's room to find it empty. Seeing this he gets even angrier.

 

DAYA: Yeh soch kya rakha hai apne bare main. Mujhe wish bhi nahi karega.

 

Just then his phone rings, with anticipation to be ABHIJEET, he takes his phone to find the name "PURVI" on the screen.

 

DAYA: Hello..! Haan PURVI bolo..

PURVI: Happy Birthday DAYA sir..!

DAYA: Oh.. Haan.. Thank you PURVI.. J

PURVI: Toh special kya hia sir aaj?

DAYA: Bass, aise hee..

 

Just as he is answering the question, he sees ABHIJEET's note lying on the table.

DAYA: PURVI, main tumse bureau main miltha hu.. Abhi kuchh kaam hai.. Bye..

PURVI: Ok sir.. Bye

 

He picks up the paper and gasps at what he sees. In it was written,

 

" Main kuch kaam ke liye bahar jaa raha hu. Jaldi aa jaunga. Mujhe phone mat karna"-ABHIJEET

 

DAYA: Arey.. Ab yeh kya? Kal thak toh aisi koi baat nahi hui.. Jagada bhi toh itna bhi bura nahi.. Aisa hota hai.. Mera birthday pe he yeh aisa kuch kaam karega.. Zarur yeh gusse se he gaya hai..

 

As he stands pondering over this matter, he receives FREDDY's call.

 

DAYA: Haan bolo FREDDY..

FREDDY: A Very Very Happy Birthday Sir..! Sada khush rehna..

DAYA: Thank  you FREDDY. Thank you very much..

FREDDY: Toh sir kya gift diya ABHIJEET sir ne..??

DAYA: Baat mat kar FREDDY uske bare mein..

FREDDY: Kyun sir? Kya hua?

DAYA: Kuch nahi.. Chodo..

FREDDY: Bureau aa rahe hai na sir?

DAYA: Haan haan, nikal he raha tha main..

FREDDY: Theek hai sir. Wahi milthe hai.

 

So DAYA finishes his breakfast, tidies the house and leaves for the bureau. Even before reaching the bureau every team member had called him. ACP sir, Dr. SALUNKHE, RAJAT, SHREYA, NIKHIL, PANKHAJ, TARIKA, SACHIN and others. Yet something was missing. ABHIJEET hadn't wished him. That was pricking him somehow.  By this time he reaches the bureau. Everyone greets him and wishes him with a smile.

 

RAJAT: Happy Birthday sir! Yeh lijiye..

DAYA: Thank you RAJAT..

PURVI: Happy Birthday Sir.. Aapke liye mera,SHREYA ka aur DR. TARIKA ka gift.

DAYA: Thank you very much..

 

FREDDY who was seemingly thinking something springs up as though he was enlightened.

 

FREDDY: Ek minute..

ACP: Ab kya hai bhae..

FREDDY: DAYA sir.. ABHIJEET sir kaha hai? Who aapke saat nahi aaye kya?

DAYA's face drops a bit but manages it.

 

DAYA: Woh kisi kaam se bahar gaya hai. Pata nahi kab aayega.

 

ACP sensing something was wrong between the two, signals DAYA to come into his cabin.

While both of them move, ACP gets a call.

 

ACP: Hello ACP Pradyuman... Kya?? Kaha pe? Theek hai..  Abhi pohonchta hu.

          Chalo DAYA, hum dono abhi nikalte hai.

DAYA: Par sir.. Kaha?

ACP: Batata hu.. Tum chalo mere saat..

 

They both move out in a hurry out of the bureau.

 

RAJAT: Hua kya hai? Yeh ACP sir aur DAYA sir jaa kaha rahe hai? Kafi tension mein bhi lag rahe the.

FREDDY: Haan sir. Pata nahi kya. Shayad aate hee bataenge..

 

Here the two rush out of the bureau and ACP sir asks DAYA to head towards LIFE LINE HOSPITALS,

 

DAYA: Sir hua kya hai? Pareshaan kyun lag rahe hai? Aur hum ab hospital kyun jaa rahe hai?

ACP: DAYA, ABHIJEET ke number se phone tha..

DAYA: (confused) ABHIJEET ke number se hospital ka kya lena dena hai.??

ACP: DAYA, hospital se ek aadmi ABHIJEET ke number se phone kiya..

DAYA: Matlab?

ACP: DAYA, kisine ABHIJEET ko sadak par behosh dekha tha aur usine ne phone kiya.

DAYA: Lekin who toh apna ghadi lekar gaya tha..

ACP: Shaayad ghadi ke saat kuch gadbad ho gaya aur mechanic ko dhoondne ke liye gaya hoga.

DAYA could still not get it. ABHIJEET had left home without clearly detailing anything. Now this news. What was going on? He gets really tensed.

 

They both reach the hospital.

ACP: Mr ABHIJEET kaha hai?

Receptionist: Ek minute.. Sir woh toh abhi abhi chale gaye sir.

DAYA: Kya?? Iss haalat main.. and he sits down with pain and frustration.

"Mujhe uss tarah baat nahi karni chahiye thi. Sub mere wajah se"

 

ACP: DAYA, main samajh sakta hu. Chalo, tumhare ghar chalthe hai. Shaayad waha gaya hoga.

 

So DAYA steadies himself and follows ACP sir's words. While driving the car he is very tensed but all through the journey ACP sir is silent. DAYA thinks

 

"Kahin pe chala jaayega aur mera naam bhi bhool jayega. Abhi abhi tabiyat theek hui aur aisa kar raha hai. Main chodunga nahi ise''

 

They both reach the house. The house showed no signs of recent activity. It looked just as before DAYA had left it when he left home.  Disappointed, DAYA and ACP sir get to the bureau. There is no one in the bureau either.

 

DAYA: Ab yeh log kaha gaye?

ACP: Shayad, koi leads mil gaya hoga case mein, investigate karne gaye honge. And he calls FREDDY

 

ACP: Hello FREDDY.. Kaha ho tum log??.. Achha.. Ek bhi clue miss mat karna samjhe.?? Haan.. OK..

 

DAYA: Sir..

ACP: Kya hua DAYA??

DAYA: Sab mere wajah se..

ACP: Aisa kya hua?

DAYA: Sir, woh hamare beech mein jagada hua tha kal raat. Main bhi ghusse main kuch zyada hi bol diya.

ACP: Aree.. Tum dono ek doosre ko kitne samajte ho. Aisa nahi hai. Woh aa jayega. Tum abhi ghar jaake aaram karo. Sab theek ho jayega.

 

DAYA, with that assuring look from ACP leaves the bureau and reaches the house. He parks the vehicle in the garage and turns open the lock. He switches on the lights and the sight that greeted him was overwhelming. Standing there, was his entire team including ACP sir. They all cried together " HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAYA"

 

It was all happening and he had to believe it. Yet DAYA's face hung as he hadn't even seen ABHIJEET on his birthday.

 

FREDDY: DAYA sir.. kya soch rahe hai?

DAYA: Tum log... yaha pe???

FREDDY: Sab baad mein.. Ab time for the biggest surprise for the birthday boy..and he chokes twice "Ahem ahem"

 

DAYA couldn't believe what he heard. He had just heard these words

 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MERA MOTU DAYA πŸ˜Š

 

The others had wished him alright but this was a single voice. Again

 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAYA πŸ˜Š

 

Yes. That was it. It was the voice he knew so well. The voice that consoled him everytime he was broken. It was ABHIJEET. His lips moved as "ABHI...JE..ET"..and looks towards PURVI and SHREYA from behind whom the voice had seem to come. They moved away. His eyes certainly weren't deceiving him. It was ABHIJEET standing. Smiling and with those loving eyes.

 

DAYA slowly comes forward.

 

DAYA: ABHIJEET... tum???

ABHIEET: Haan main.. Koi shaq hai birthday boy???

DAYA: Magar.. kaise??

ABHIJEET: Baaki sab baatein baad mein.. Pehle cake khato..and gives a loving slap on DAYA's face.

 

So the celebration begins and they all merrily enjoy among themselves. Everything goes on well.

 

DAYA: Sir, aap yaha mere pehle kaise?

ACP: Short cut toh hai hee na??

DAYA: Aur tum log??

SALUNKHE: Woh ek lambhi kahani hai boss (and he winks). Jab tum aur ACP bureau se nikle the tab hi yeh log mujhe phone kar liya aur plan execution shuru!
DAYA: Lekin ACP sir ne toh..

PURVI: Woh sab plan tha sir and smiles at the others.

DAYA: Kaisa plan??

FREDDY: Daraasal, phone pe jab ACP sir investigation ke bare mein baat kar rahe the toh actually iske bare main he baat kar rahe the.

DAYA: Kya!!!??

 

ACP: Hello FREDDY.. Kaha ho tum log?

FREDDY: Sir, hum ghar phonch gaye hai. Thaiyari ho chuki hai.

ACP: Achha.. Ek bhi clue miss mat karna..

FREDDY: Don't worry sir. DAYA sir ko zara bhi shaq nahi hoga.

ACP: Haan.. OK

 

DAYA is amazed and elated. It was all perfectly planned. Everyone is chuckling and ABHIJEET grinned. DAYA glares at him and turns away.

 

DAYA: Aap log mere liye yeh sab kuch kiya.. Thank you very much..

SHREYA: Sir, thank you toh aapko ABHIJEET sir se bolna parega. Masermind toh wohi hai.

 

DAYA looks at ABHIJEET and murmurs a dry THANK YOU.

 

After the harmonious celebration, everyone leaves for their own houses.

 

Silence prevails between DUO as they put away all the items in order. After finishing the job, ABHIJEET looks up to see DAYA standing by the window, in his own world of thoughts. ABHIJEET goes to him.

 

ABHIJEET: DAYA...

DAYA turns around and hands ABHIJEET a slap. ABHIJEET understands

DAYA: Samajh kya rakha hai tu apne bare mein? Bewajah gussa karega aur bina bataye chala jayega.. Pata hai kitna hurt kiya tu ne..??

ABHIJEET: Zaraa baat

DAYA: Kya sunu main.. Tu wish bhi nahi kiya.. Jab hospital se phone aaya toh saans hi rukh gayi meri..

ABHIJEET stifles a laughter..

DAYA: Kya hua.?? Joker lag raha hu main..

ABHIJEET: Shaant ho jayiye baba..

Woh jagada, mera sadak par behosh milna, hospital.. sab kuch plan tha.. Iss plan mein sab log shaamil the. Hospital main jab aap dono aaye toh main ghar par he tha.

DAYA: Magar, woh receptionist ne bataya ki ABHIJEET sir chale gaye hai.?

ABHIEET: Main gaya toh thaw aha par. Kuch dino se bohot cold aur recurring fever tha na. Isliye doctor se consult karne gaya tha.  Phir ab aap log ghar wapa aa rahe the, tab maine apna ghadi kahi aur park karke aa gaya.

DAYA: Toh, hum dono bureau chalthe waqt sab log yah ape the.. Magar tumhe kaise pata chala ki hum hospital se yaha aa rahe hai?

ABHIJEET: Abhi tak samjh mein nahi aaya?? ACP sir ne mujhe SMS bheja tha.

 

Now DAYA remembers how ACP sir was doing something with his cell phone all through the travel from the hospital to the house and he smiles.

DAYA: Arre aur woh jagada kyun shuru ki tu ne?

ABHIEET : Taaki sahab ko mujhpar naraaz ho jaaye.. Simple !

DAYA : Tu kabhi sudhrega nahi ABHIJEET. !

ABHIJEET : Chalo.. Plan toh mera kaamyab ho gaya..

DAYA: Bada plan..(sarcastically)

ABHIJEET: Come on buddy.. Yeh sab toh maine tere liye kiya na.. uske baad bhi kyun naraaz ho.? Chill out birthday boy.

DAYA: Dubara aisa kuch kiya na, main tujhe chhodunga nahi..

ABHIJEET: Dekho DAYA, dosto sirf isliye hote hai.. Chhota mota jagada.. phir usike liye sorry.. Rona.. Hasna.. Jagadna.. Agar yeh sab nahi hai toh dosti naam ka rishta khoobsurat nahi hoti. Dosti ek aisa rishta hai jaha log dil se jude hue hai... FORGIVENESS, CARE AND UNDERSTANDING.. Agar yeh teeno hait oh khobsurat ban jaati hai zindagi... Isko sunkar bhi naraaz rehna chahte ho toh raho( and he turns to go to his room)

DAYA pulls him and wraps ABHIJEET in his hug and ABHIJEET returns it.

 

DAYA: Nahi ABHI, main naraaz nahi hu ab.

ABHIJEET : Great( smiling)

DAYA : Thank you very much yaar.. Sab logo ko tera jaisa he dost milna chahiye..

ABHIJEET: Tu bhi na.. Achha sahab ko kya kya mila aaj ?

DAYA : Gifts aur bohot sare khushiya..

ABHIJEET smiles understandingly.

 

ABHIJEET: Hey bhagwaan..!

DAYA: Kya hua..

ABHIEET: Ek minute.. abhi aata hu..

 

So he runs to his room leaving a perplexed DAYA behind.

 

DAYA: Achanak ho kya gaya inhe?

 

ABHIJEET returns back with a gift and a card wrapped beautifully.

ABHIJEET: Yeh lo DAYA.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY..!

DAYA: Yeh sab ki kya zarurat hai.. Tum ho na sabse bada gift..

ABHIJEET: Ab chupkar kholo..

 

DAYA opens it tenderly lest it should get damaged.

 

ABHIJEET: Arre sambhalke.. cover ko kuch nahi hona chahiye na..and giggles.

DAYA: Chhup..

 

DAYA finds a beautiful ring with two letters DA engraved on it. His eyes well up with tears and he looks up at ABHIJEET, who was lovingly smiling back at him. He opens the card. Written inside it was

 

You are a priceless gift to me

For eternity may our friendship be,

May your smile last forever,

I will stay your best friend forever

 

HAPPY BIRTHDAY DAYA..!

 

He smiles thinking how lucky he was to have a friend like ABHIJEET. They both hug each other again and move off to the terrace where they spend some more quality time recalling some sweet memories that would make them smile forever.


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Note: The short investigation was just an arbitary one to lead into the main story. I apologize for the delay in posting it.  I was delayed due to my exams. Please read it and comment. πŸ˜Š

Edited by Reshma. - 10 years ago
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Very nice Reshma. Warmth and friendship written all over.πŸ‘
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Aesi hoti hai dosti...Enthralling title buddy. Sound's really interesting. We'll read it today for sure and comment tooπŸ˜ƒ
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Will read soon Reshma...I am actually in the middle of making one duo creation. πŸ˜›
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Woow.. Reshma dear is back with bang.. Back to back vm and story. Will read it soon.. Dear please upload the last VM in YT.