[MG-SS] If it wasn't for The Night [Epilogue-p 89] - Page 9

Originally posted by: bangalores

*sigh* been missing ur stories... and am i glad u started one * big smile... twirling with joy*
beautiful poem...
of course you always make me go fida over ur storis and this is no exception...
as always i cud see the frightened eyes of the little girl and her heart going bang bang each time he comes around...
the thrill of anticipation for the party now...same as the excitement of knowing something special  is going to happen  which geet must me feeling
oh ! no matter how many times u restart ur buddy list count me in always😃

You make me hide my face in my pillow and grin like an idiot😆
You are too sweet to tolerate my crap and say sweet things about them :)
Added you in my buddy list and btw belated happy birthday once again :)

Originally posted by: Tyro

Congrats on the new SS...

loved the start...

n it was maan n not rehan who wrote the card it seems...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thank you. 😳

Originally posted by: --Neelam--

lovely part...
I am sure rohan knows his  bro's feelings for geet ...
what about geet...waiting to know...

Haha, Geet's feelings would be known in future updates :)

Originally posted by: namita25

loved the beginning...

seems like it's Maan who wrote that note...n geet thinks it's Rehan...

waiting for the next part...

continue soon...

Hm the curious case of misplaced note 😆
I can't say who put it but can say it does play a major role in the story.

Originally posted by: punam2712

what a lovely start

one scold from maan left a scar on her for ever

she loves him byt fears him too

and maan wants to tlk to her but finds it impossible

what is rehan upto

wish you could change it into an ss or ff

Sometimes simple things leave a big impact, and especially if they happen at a tender age. This is a SS of three parts buddy :)

Originally posted by: bhanu_rekhag

lovely n amazing part


loved it a lot

Originally posted by: ammu5

fabuls start. do continue n add me to ur pm list

Originally posted by: singh24

 Interesting part ...

 Cont.   plz...

 

 

 

Originally posted by: dona86

congrats on the new ff

interesting start

cont soon

Originally posted by: Serious-Beauty

absolutely loved it

awesome start dear👏

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94

Interesting! Can't wait to read more!

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

Originally posted by: Gcs-girl

Congo on new ss
Awesome concept
loved the update
continue soon
thankx for pm

Originally posted by: sridevi_n

awesome update. i guess that card was kept by maan and geet is asuming that rehan has kept it. please continue soon.

Thank you everyone🤗

Originally posted by: maneet-laksh

ITS MAAN OBVIOUSLY!AN THIS STORY GOONA BE SPECIAL COZ MY BIRTHDAY IS 16 FEB!!😃

Wow! That's great :)
Bang on for coincidences :)

Originally posted by: mandymore

awsome start...maan scared hell out of her..

 

is geet thnkng d card is frm rehan..😕

Maan is a maahir at scaring people. Don't you think?😆

Originally posted by: SweetestPari

awesome yar... very nice concept... maan had written tat card for geet but geet misunderstands it to b rehan... n i think will be one playin among maaneet... n tats y he confessed his long back mistake now as i thinh he as a slite idea of maans feelings for geet... waiting for next pat... update soon yar... n do PM me... i lik all ur works... yar

THank you so much. Have added you in my PM list..

Originally posted by: spvd

congrats hon...

part 1
awesome start dear...
waise what are the current ages of Maan and Geet?
so Geet is scared of Maan...
and Maan has feelings for Geet and seeing her scared infuriates him...
cont soon dear...

Well what will be marriageable age? 🤣
Jokes apart, Geet is 21, and Maan 26 right now

Originally posted by: FeistySoul

Mein tumhein ithni jaldhi nahin chodungi...

So expect a request from me buddy🤗...

Now coming to the update...

Each seen was so , kya kahein, dekh sakthi thi apni aankhon se...

Geet ke baalon ka hawaaon mein udna thak...

Acha ji! Tho bachpan se lekar paden hain Maan saab apni Geet mohtharma ke peeche...

It's really great na, bachpan ka interest or woh chota love badein ho kar bhi humaarein saath rahein...

Aisen log bohuth bohuth lucky hain na Shikhs...

Rehan tho cupid khel raha hain ek saal se I guess...

So kisko kya answer milegi jaldhi batha na!

I am waiting on my toes...

Love ya...

🤗

Aa gayi meri not-so-choti behan?🤣
Yes people are indeed lucky to have their love known all their life, but if you ask me, don't they get bored of the same face?🤣
Alright enough of my silly jokes. I am very very glad you are here feisty soul ji😆
And you might be the first one who assumed Rehan to be positive😆
Love you too Nidha🤗

Originally posted by: ukdesigirl

Love it Shika👍🏼

Originally posted by: PaintedSky

beautiful !! will wait for the next part.

Originally posted by: swetha10

Awesome!!!!

luved it.. very interesting!!!

plzz continue

Originally posted by: sekhonpuneet

Awesome

Originally posted by: soniya_lovesu

Great plot!! :) how can we forget u? 😊 Aww..maan must have written tht poem, oh god! And geet loves rehan? Y?😭

Originally posted by: Shruti_Goyal

wow...

Originally posted by: SuperbDrashti

   😃

I loved it  superb start ⭐️

thanks for pm 

Originally posted by: Ash1991

amazing update...

Originally posted by: Kaval05

this is interesting, i wonder how this story will turn out

Originally posted by: rs12345

wow awesooome loved it...

Originally posted by: -memorable-

beautiful concept

Originally posted by: sona-rai

welcome back dear  🤗 🤗

awesome lovely start eagerly waiting for next update

Originally posted by: gargi12

awesome strt...
Loved d concept aloottt...
Cont soon
Thnx fr pm

Originally posted by: --Dia--

When are you updating next part?? 

Nice to see you back with another awesome work.. 😊

Thank you everyone🤗
Next update would be in a day or two :)

Originally posted by: LILY111144

read ur all wrk ,wt 2 say ,SUPER,run away bride my favrte ,sistrly lov each one is a master pc created by u ...about dis one ithink geet also lov maan ,card is from maan its obvios ,rehan know it ,   nd wil play cupid, lets see wt u hav planed..nd wen is next prt?

Sister's love is really close to my heart and Run away bride is something I enjoyed a lot while writing. Glad to know you liked them😳

Originally posted by: alfik

i jst dint understand d last paragraph of part 1???

Edited

sorry forgot to write...its reallly a lovely part n pleaaassseee do not disappear update this story soon n also ur other stories...i m dying to read them pleeeaaassseee

 
Ermm in the last para Geet says Rehan would get his answer this time, as far as I remember. Anyway lemme know what you didn't understand exactly so that I would try and clear that. And I would try not to go into hibernation this time😆

Originally posted by: Cloud9.

Dude what are you doing here?😆
It is really embarrassing when our friends read whatever crap we write. Isn't it?😆
oh yeah about the scared uncle wala part even I have a memory. I will tell you more about it in 5 minutes. Right now me in skype and doing combined studies with my friend :P rofl
Edit:
So when I was a kid, there was this uncle near to our home and I dreaded him. He was sweet with all the kids but I don't know why I was shit scared of him. For no apparent reason. So much so that whenever our Rikshaw crossed their home, and if he was outside I used to hide myself crouching back. He many a time tried to call me, get me chocolates and what not but I always ran away from him. Actually my bhai and all the kids of our locality were friendly with him and even my parents were his friends whatever. So one fine day he got pissed off, stopped the Rickshaw on the way back my home, and with the help of my co rickshaw mates, who were laughing, he pulled me out, literally carried me like a sack of potatoes over his shoulder, took to his home, dumped the chocolates he bought for me and made me watch TV with his mother. Forcefully. I hated watching that show. But who'd listen to me. Argh. I hated him. BTW I was studying first standard then😆

Originally posted by: World-of-Dreams

Ok..Shika dear... Please stop repeating this word! CHOCOLATE! 

You are tempting me to spend all my bacha kucha money on chocolates! 😆

Sadly, I had no such uncle who showered chocolates on me ! *Sigh* But yeah I was always showered with lots and lots of never-ending lectures! 😳

🤣Oh by the way you asked me why I named the teddy erm you know what right?
Well, It is because I always wanted to name my teddy that but since my teddy is not brown but butterscotch in color, i named it Butterscotch and since this is fiction, I named Geet's teddy You know what.😆

beautiful

sweety welcome back 😊

geet loves rehan 😲

please continue soon!!!!