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snehapriya

@snehapriya

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#741

It's getting more complicated.
She loves him.
She can't live with him.
She left him.
Dont know wat else is in store.

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rockin_gal

@rockin_gal

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

#742

Ah you had to stop at this part?? 😡 And it was such a short update 😔 lol sorry for complaining but i was just to into the story that i felt bad that the part ended so quicky and that too at an interesting moment.. Huh anywho that was an awesomeee chap plz try to update as soon as you can, though i understand work commitments too, so take your time but not too much lol 😛

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560298

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#743

i can't be favorable to one here

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#744

Hiii...awesome update...loved it...kinda feeling bad 4 maan...sad...hope geets comes back soon...can't wait 4 more...con soon...thanks 4 da pm

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640638

Posted: 11 years ago

#745

Awesome update.

The scene in the past was beautiful. Their coming together. She owns him, for him to say that, was totally wonderful. She had let go of everything there to be with him.

Coming to the present was a quagmire for me. Why did she go back to the same place where it had started? Did she want to unconsciously start something again?

Again the devastation for Maan to find her gone.

When is it ever going to be enough. They are beautiful separate and together and in so much pain, it makes me question how or if they will come together again.

Did remind me of the U2 song: I can't live with or without you...

Loved it.

Thanks for updating.

Edited by had2bu - 11 years ago

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823375

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#746

AT THE END I WAS CRYING

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indiegirl

@indiegirl

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

#747

Please update the next one soon..

It is such a good story, we know you have work commitments,

But at least try

Thanks

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533840

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#748

simply amazing.loved it

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vivacious_gurl

@vivacious_gurl

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#749

awesome update sanji... loved the way u hv moved the story... please dont give up on the story... we wont mind slow updates if u r busy with work, but surely do complete the story

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477562

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#750

It was a beautiful chapter👏. Loved the way you wrote it. So she packed her bags and left him. I have a feeling that she might have gone back to that house which was mentioned in the past. I wonder if Maan will go behind her. Looking forward to reading the next chp. Thanks for the PM. Update soon😊

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