Battle of love & Power- New FF Part 2(pg 4) 08/10

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Hello Friends

I am starting New FF called Battle of Love and Power on Manveer'

Character Sketch:

Udayveer Singh:- Yuvraj of jaygadh. He is a player and a charmer. He has shut his heart a long time ago at the age of eight on a fateful day of his mother's murder and his fiance and his best friend's kidnapping. He saw his mother dying in front of his eyes and his manyata getting snatched from him by Vikram singh who he considered his uncle. He wants to find Manyata because she can get him Devgadh's throne and she can lead him to his mother's murderer. He doesn't believe in friendship or love anymore. Everything for him is a political game and he admires his dadi-shaab  Mrinalini devi very much because she has a great political mind. He loves his sister dearly and can do anything for her.

Manya Singh/Manyata Kumari Chahuan:- She is lost princess of Devgadh but she doesn't remember anything. Her world is her father Vijay Singh. She studied business in Cambridge University in USA but her lifetime training also consisted how to be a royal. Her father taught her to be a royal and he also taught her sword-fighting, horse-riding and other royal customs. He taught her best politics as well. She is always confused as why her father teaches her about being a royal or politics but she never questions him as she loves him very much. She always has nightmare about a royal palace and a lady crying in blood and a young boy was calling out for help and herself in a car with a masked man. She can never take this out of her memory and she doesn't know why' She loves Dr. Aakash because he saved her best friend's life.

Mrinalini Devi Chauhan:- Rajmata of Devgadh, She is considered the best female ruler in all Rajwadas. Everyone likes her and respects her. Her politics are best played for the people of Devgadh. She always thinks of her riyaasat before anything else. She has a son and a daughter named Bridraj and Menaka. She seems strict from outside but she also loves her family very much. She has three Grand kids. But since her eldest grand kid Manyata got kidnapped at age of 5, she always protected her other two grandchildren and she became stricter towards everyone. She pines for her eldest Grandchild Manyata and she is still looking for her after twenty years. Manyata is the legal heir of Devgadh.

Bridraj Chauhan:- Current Maharaj of Devgadh. He is clean hearted person. He always thinks of his praja before himself. Unlike his mother, he can never play politics and that's why he never officially took charge of Devgadh. Even though he is Maharaj of Devgadh, he lets his mother handle all the politics. He also loves his family very much. He has two daughters: Manyata and Jaynandini. His heart pines for his elder daughter Manyata since she got kidnapped. He showers his unconditional love on his second daughter Jaynandini and his nephew Vijay ray. He still believes like his mother, that one day his daughter Manyata will come back to them. He is best friend of Giriraj.

Komal Chahuan:- Current Maharani of Devgadh. She is a loving mother and dutiful Maharani of Devgadh estate. She pines for her Manyata even after twenty years of her kidnapping. She celebrates her daughter's birthday every year and she always buy same gifts for her both daughter. She loves Jaynandini  and vijay very much but her motherly heart always pines for her elder daughter.

Menka ray- She is Mrinalini Devi's daughter. She is cunning lady. She didn't marry a royal against her mother's wish because she loved a businessman called Harsh Ray. Harsh is always on business trips and never find time for his family. He sent his wife and his only son Vijay to Rajmahal when Vijay was ten years old. He never came back for his wife or his child. Rajmata never wanted her daughter back after disgrace to her family but Bridraj and Komal persuade Rajmata to take Menka back to her family for at least Vijay's sake. She doesn't want manyata to come back because she wants vijay to take charge of devgadh estate after her mother. She shows fake concern to Jaynandini and always shows her wrong path and spoils her so she can never become good ruler.

Jaynandini Chahuan:- Only Rajkumari of Devgadh estate at present. She is spoiled child as her parents, her aunt and her grandmother loves her too much and never says no to her. She is selfish and cunning. She does partying and never cares for common people. She never thinks that Manyata can come back and she feels her parents and grandmother is foolish people to hope for her sister's return.

Vijay Ray- He is most confused person. He has a good heart but he is easily influenced by his mom and his cousin sister Jay. He learned good things from his mama-mami and Nani but still he follows his mother's footsteps most of the time. He doesn't think much about Manyata but he knows that Manyata is legal heir of Devgadh and nobody can change the fact.

Doctor saab:- He is family doctor of Devgadh and Jaygadh. He also has political connections and he is trying to find Rajkumari Manyata for last twenty years.

Giriraj Singh:- He is Maharaj of Jaygadh estate. He has a political mind and he only thinks about Jaygadh estate. He is also a loving father. He has two kids: Uday and Unnati He loves his children very much and he can do anything for their happiness. They are his reason to live after his wife's death. He loved his wife very much and he was a clean hearted person but after her tragic death, he believes world is cruel and he became ruthless businessman. He is best friend of Bridraj. He also waits for Manyata's return because his son's wedding is fixed with Manyata and he wants to take revenge of his wife's tragic death because the kidnapper who took Manyata away is his wife's murderer.

Vasundara singh:- She was Giriraj's wife and a very loving queen. She died in an accident because she tried to save Rajkumari Manyata when she was being kidnapped but the kidnapper killed her with the car and took Rajkumari Manyata with him.

Unnati Singh:- The princess of Jaygadh' She is a very sweet person. She knows about Manyata but she doesn't know about her mother's death. She loves her brother and father very much. She does everything her brother asks her to do. She is a very sensible princess.

Aakash Verma:- Manya's love interest. He is a doctor by profession. But he is greedy and arrogant person but he behaves nicely with Manya and in front of others too. Nobody knows his actual nature. He always thinks about himself first.

Vikram Singh:- He was Devgadh and Jaygadh estates's vajeer. But he kidnapped Rajkumari Manyata and in rage, he also killed Maharani Vasundara devi but he regrets killing her as his only intension was kidnapping  Rajkumari manyata.

K & L:- Jaynandini's friends'

Soni Gupta:- Manya's best friend. Doesn't know anything about Aakash's true character. She thinks her friend is lucky to have Aakash as her boyfriend.

Jeet Gupta:- Soni's husband and Considers Manya as his sister. He doesn't like Aakash either but he doesn't say to Soni or Manya as he knows they won't believe him.

 

The story behind Manyata's kidnapping:

Vikram singh's wife and daughter was killed an accident. The accident happened with a royal car. That day Giriraj and Bridraj took the car for their hunting in a forest. So Vikram singh believed that accident happened because of them. He went to Rajmata for justice but they never found any proof that Bridraj and Giriraj were in the car that day in fact they were in a forest at campsite waiting for their prey to kill. He kidnapped Rajkumari Manyata to get revenge from both Bridraj and Giriraj because Manyata was the only person who could unite both devgadh and Jaygadh estate by marrying Udayveer according to Bridraj and Giriraj's fathers' will. And he thinks he also gave punishment by killing Maharni Vasundara devi to Giriraj but it happened accidently. But the real story was that Vikram singh's family was killed by Murari driver who was drunk and got the car from forest to meet his love interest. Bridraj and Giriraj found out after Mayata's kidnapping and gave severe punishment to Murari but they didn't forgive Vikram singh either as he killed Vasundara and kidnapped Manyata.

The present story line:-

Vikram Singh kidnapped Manyata but he couldn't kill her and he always served royals so he knew everything about how to raise a royal. He taught Manyata everything and gave her best education. Manyata was raised in Delhi and went to US for higher studies. Manyata is very stubborn and although, she knows how to speak politely as royal or how to behave as royal, she loved her Delhi place and her noisy neighbors.  She speaks like them and eats like them. She respects her father but she always wants to live a normal life. She has a great unique personality.  Even after her higher education her father doesn't let her work outside and she always fuss about it. After her higher education, she moved to Mumbai with her father in a posh but general area where there are chawls too. She met Mahi and Jeet there who lives right across from chawl in a decent building and Dr. Aakash also lives there with his snobby parents and Manya lives with her father in the same decent flat.

Udayveer is back from London after his higher education and his hotel business is booming. He annoys Jaynandini and Vijay very much. Jay is totally in love with Uday but uday doesn't like her but he keeps himself friendly around her because of their families. He sees Mother in Maharani Komal and he loves her and can't make her unhappy. He detests Menaka very much.

What will happen when Udayveer and Manya meet? What will happen when everyone finds out that Manya is in fact Rajkumari Mayata?

This story is about two strong personalities who are equally stubborn and both want different things in life and most importantly both know how to play politics very well'. Who will win in this war of power? Will they ever love each other? Will they ever unite?

 

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Part 2- pg 4

 

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This story is about two strong personalities who are equally stubborn and both want different things in life and most importantly both know how to play politics very well'. Who will win in this war of power? Will they ever love each other? Will they ever unite?

 

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Part 1

One fine morning in Mumbai:-

At chawl people are buzzing over their regular schedule. There is a decent building right across the chawl. A girl is running down the stairs and rushed up to the watchman who is appointed at the gate.  A girl is none other than Manya. She wore blue denims and white shirt and her hair are tied in a high pony-tail.

Manya (to the watchman)- Uncle ji, kya soni neeche aa gayi?

The wathman- Nahi Manya betiya, aaj bhi tum hi sab se pehle aayi ho.

Meanwhile, another girl in salwar-kameez approaches them and says to Manya- yaar sorry main phir late ho gayee, wo jeet ko aaj jane main dair ho gayee is liye…

Manya (goes toward soni)- Kya yaar, tujhe romance se fursadh milegi tab tu use jane degi na… haan nahi to…

Soni- Ab ched mat Manya… Kya kare tera doctor jo har waqt busy rehta hai lekin ek baar teri shaadi ho jane de phir dekhte hai tu kitni free rahegi.

Manya(dreamily)- shaadi aur wo bhi aakash se hmmm… interesting… lekin us se pehle uske do bodyguard to impress ho jaye? Phir sochenge…

Soni- Bodyguards? Dr. Aakash ko bodyguards ki jaroorat kab se padne lagi?

Manya- are yaar main uske khaddos ma-baba ki baat kar rahi hoon jab dekho tab uske saath lage rahte hai. Kabhi akela padne hi nahi dete… aur uski ma ek no. ki make-up ki dukan hai yaar… poori bala hai… kabhi kabhi sochti hoon ki aakash unka hi beta hai ya adopt kiya hua hai?

Soni- Haan yaar, jab dekho tab chawl main ja kar apne status ki dinge haanki rehti hai…

Manya- Chod na unki baat ko…. Chal hum mall chalte hai mujhe kuch shopping karni hai…

Soni- Are yaar, pichle hafte to tune shopping kit hi… ab phir se ?

Manya- Haan shopping bill badha rahi hoon ye soch ke ki bill dekh kar shayad baba kuch kaam karne ki izzazat de de… yaar kab se bol rahi hoon job karna hai lekin nahi…. US se bula liya wapas … Na wahan job karne di aur na yahan karne de rahe hai…

Soni- Achi baat hai… nahi to tu bhi busy ho jayegi aur mera timepass kaise hoga… chal chalte hai…

Both head out in Manya's car toward the shopping mall….

On the other hand, Royal palace at Devgadh:

Rajmata Mrinalini Devi was talking to her family members at breakfast table.

Rajmata- Hum aap sab se kuch kehna chahte hai.

Bridraj- Haan Ma saab kahiye…

Rajmata- Aaj Udayveer ladakh ki rally jeet kar wapas aa rahe hai is liye hum ne socha hai ki hum Maharaj Giriraj, Uday aur Unnati ko dinner ke liye invite kare waise kaafi din ho gaye unhe yahan aane hue…

Komal- Ye to bahut achi baat hai. Hum khud sab ki pasand ka menu taiyaar karvayenge ma saab…

Menaka- lekin ma saab aaj to hum sab ko minister ravte ki party main jana tha na…

Rajmata- Jee nahi menka hum ne wo party cancel kar di hai…. Waise bhi ravte saab hamare estate ke khillaf hai is liye hum nahi chahte ki unke kisi bhi social function main hum shaamil ho…

Bridraj- Jaisi aapki marzee ma saab…

Menka makes a sour face and continues her breakfast.

Jaynandini- Phir to hum aaj shopping jayenge aakhir hum ko shaam ke liye best ready hona hai… Hum chalte hai DS… Vijay bhai aap hamare saath chalenge?

Vijay- Nahi Jay, hamari kuch aur appointment hai, aap k or L ke saath chale jaye.

Jay- jaisi aapki marzi… hum abhi K & L ko phone karte hai…

She orders garima to bring her phone and went from breakfast table followed by vijay bhai  who had already finished their breakfast as well. Soon everyone dispersed to their work.

Rajmata was working in her study with Bridraj when Doctor saab came there.

Doctor saab- rajmata, ye rahi latest project ki copy… Hum ne Devgadh aur Jaygadh main teen bade hospital banvane ka project approve karva diya hai… Abhi hamari baat Mahraj Giriraj se hui. Unhone signed copy bhej di hai.

Rajmata- Chalo ye bhi hamari praja ke liye unnati ka kaam hoga. Lekin is hospital ke naam kya rakhenge.

Bridraj- Devgadh estate main ban rahe hospital ka naam hum Manyata ke naam se rakhenge ma saab aur Jaygadh estate main ban rahe hospital ka naam Maharani Vasundara devi ki yaad main banvayenge. Kal hi is bare main hum ne aur Giriraj ne baat ki thi.

Rajmata(sadly)- Haan bridraj, taaki jab hamari rani beti wapas aaye tab unhe pata chale ki sirf hum ne hi nahi unki praja bhi unhe yaad karti hai…

Komal (entering the study)- Pata nahi kahan hogi hamari manyata?

Scene shifts to the mall:

Jay is walking arrongantly with K & L and making snide comments about some stores in the mall. They enter one shop and the manager of that shop welcomes them and shows his best desighing outfits  and Jay chooses some dress and starts to leave the shop. Meanwhile Manya and Soni enters in the same shop. Jay was walking arrogantly and Manya was looking at a pretty dress in the shop, but Jay doesn't see her and collides with her and fell down along with Manya  and the dress.

Jay- What the hell? Are u blind? Dekh ke nahi chal sakti thi tum gavar kahin ke? Hamare aage aane ki kya zarrorat thi? Hum ko gira diya… Manager Manager…

Meanwhile Manya pulls herself up and looks at Jay with weird looks. Soni comes to her as well. K & L also pulls Jay up and start their bakwaas about how stupid and ill manner the other girl is….

Manager also comes there running and stood shocked there.

Jay(angrily to Manya chillate hue)- Hello, yun khadi khadi dekh kya rahi ho, chalo hum se maafi mango… Ek to andho ki tarah chalti ho aur upar se itni bhi manners nahi ke apologize karo…

Manya is smirking at her and Jay gets angrier asking her why she is smiling at her.

Manya- nahi bas ye soch rahi hoon ki tumhare paas dimag hai bhi ya nahi… Ek to khud bina dekhe dumb ass ki tarah chalti ho… kisi aur se takrati ho phir expect karti ho ki wo tum se maafi mange? Aur ho kaun tum… kahi ki hoor pari ho kya? Tumhare jaise logo ke dimag main bhusa bhara rehta hai kya… ameer zaadi ho to kya… kisi ki bhi insult karti phirogi? Itna hi paisa ho to apna khud ka mall kyon nahi banva leti? Wahin pe ja kar akele shopping karna aur unth ki tarah sar uncha kar ke ghoomti rehna…. Phir kisi se takrati nahi phirogi haan nahi to…

Jay- Tumhari itni himmat… Tum ne hamari insult ki? Tum janti nahi ho hum kaun hai… Hum chahe to tum ko is mall se bahar phikwa sakte hai…

Manya- Oh hello, this is free country…. Tum is desh ki president bhi hogi na to bhi mera kuch nahi bigad paogi…

Manager(to Jay)- Rajkumari ji, main inki taraf se aap se maffi mangta hoon… Please aap shaant ho jaye… In ke jaise logo se mooh lagne se aap ki shaan ki tahueen hogi…

Manya(to Manager)- Oye ye filmy dialgoues bandh kar aur behla is nakhchadi rajkumari ko… Kyonki waise bhi tere ye dukhan main ek bhi dhang ka kapda nahi hai…

Jay- Tum jaise logo ki aukaat hi kya jo tum ko samaj main aayenge ke designer dress kise kehte hai…

Manya leaves the shop but when she is leaving she knocks a hanging flower pot and Jay was standing right there and all muddy water from flower pot gets on her hair and dress. Jay screams loudly along with K & L but Manya has already left with Soni and Manager stood there shocked at another incident in his shop.

Jay is super angry and cursing Manya while Manya & soni laughed and leaves to eat some food. Jay in super angry mode leaves the mall in same condition followed by K & L.

Manya was having food when She gets a call from Aakash.

Aakash- Hi Manya, kahan ho tum?

Manya- Are aakash main yahan mall main hoon soni ke saath but tum ne is waqt call ki? Tum hospital main nahi ho kya?

Aakash- Haan maine break main tum se baat karne ko phone kiya…

Manya- Oh how sweet… to batao kab free ho rahe ho? Aaj shaam ko kahin chalte hai.. Main, tum Jeet aur soni sab chalenge…

Aakash- aaj possible nahi hai… Meri massi aa rahi hai to unko pick karne jana hai… Kyon na hum kal chale?

Manya- Ok we will go tomorrow see ya…

Soni (to Manya)- Are manya kal ka program banaya to tum dono ko akele jana hoga, kal mujhe jeet ke saath uski office ki party main jana hai… waise acha hai tujhe apne pyar ke saath waqt mil jayega akele…

Manya- Kya yaar tu bhi na….chal theek hai phir to main aur aakash enjoy karenge haan nahi to…

They both also leave the mall and Manya drops Soni at her house but she remembers that she forgot to pick up something from market so she goes back to the market.

On a highway, a car is speeding away and the driver is handsome dude wearing sunglass. He is wearing red polo-shirt and blue denim jeans and looking extremely handsome. He is driving with speed and enjoying the breeze. His  phone is ringing and he picks up the call.

Unnati(on the phone)- Dada aap kahan ho? Hum aap ka kab se wait kar rahe hai. Aaj hum ko dadi-saab ke yahan dinner pe jana hai aur hum kab se taiyaar ho kar aap ka intezaar kar rahe hai…

Udayveer- Kya choti hum wahan khud pahunch jayenge aap dad ke saath janewali thi na?

Unnati- Dad ki koi meeting thi to wo wahan se seedhe aa jayenge aur hum waise bhi aap ke saath jana chahte hai.

Udayveer- Theek hai hum aap ko pick karne aate hai.

He hangs up the phone and says to himself- Hmmm ab hotel pahunchne ke liye short-cut lena padega… warna time se dinner pe nahi pahunch payenge… Ye choti bhi na… Hamari drive ko short kar diya.

He went back to the city and takes a short-cut to go to his hotel. He is going in speed and suddenly another car was coming from other side and takes turn ahead of him but he was speeding  so he hits the car in the back and the taillight of the car is broken. He curses the other car…

Uday- damn ab ye car ko bhi hamare aage aana tha?

The other car driver comes out of the car and it's none other than Manya. Uday also comes out of his car. Manya sees her tail light is broken and she sees Uday out of the car. He is still wearing his sunglasses when it's evening and sun has already sat..

Manya- Abe o, tujhe dikhayi nahi diya hamari car ki tail light tod di…

Uday(angrily)- Tum hamari car ke aage achanak se aa gayi aur waise bhi hum speed main gaadi chala rahe the to break nahi laga paye… aur waise bhi sirf tail light tuti hui hai aur kuch nahi hua…

Manya- kuch nahi hua lekin bahut kuch ho sakta tha…. Ye busy road hai yahan pe highway ki tarah car ko udane ki kya zarrorat thi agar kisi rah chalte se car takrai hoti to? Wo to mar hi jata na…

Uday pulls out money from his pocket and put in manya's hand….

Uday- Ye lo, itne se tumhari gadi ki tail light to theek ho hi jayegi aur baki tum rakh lena tip ke taur pe… waise bhi tum jaise logo se jabban lada kar hum apna din kharab nahi karna chahte…

He was going back to the car when Manya pulled him back and put his money back in the hand. Ye lo tumhare paise aur kahin ja kar apne liye tameez kharid lena in paise so aur haan ruko… She took out 100 rupees from her bag and shoved in his hand…

Uday(angrily)- what the hell is this money for?

Manya- Abhi dikhati hoon. She took a big stone from the road and smacked Uday's car's headlight.

Uday- What the hell ye tumne kya kiya?

Manya- Badla liya… Tumne meri gadi ki tail light tod di aur maine tumhari gadi ki head light… Hisaab barabar… aur haan ye jo 100 RS diye hai na wo tumhare liye tip hai… Rakh lena… Haan nahi to…

And she stormed towards her car cursing udayveer with words like Halkat veda suvar kahin ka pata nahi aaj kis ki shakal dekh ke uthi thi to stupid logo se pange ho rahe hai…

Uday was standing there in anger and he heard  every curse word of her and said to himself- Tum se hum jaroor milna chahenge miss Haan nahi to…

He clutched the 100 RS note in his hand and angrily drove toward his hotel.

 

Precap: Dinner at Rajmahal…. Jay and Udayveer meet Manya once again….

 

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