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Posted: 11 years ago
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                        *A Warm WelcomeTo All Of U*

                    

                                                 
               
  
       ~This is a thread where u can express your scenes..if u dont lik any scene in a particular episode , u can twist it in other way or your own imaginative scenes..here u can create a scene according to ur taste..hope you all njoy ur time here..the main purpose of this thread is to have fun nd to bringout ur imaginative skills..hope the cvs see this nd get impressd by ur scenes..plz evryone make a try~

                                                                                                                                           

                                                                                    

                      

            

  


                                                       
   


U can express any type of scene (ie)comedy,sentiment

Not to argue or go against other member's scenes..if u lik it then appreciate,if u dnt lik it then leave it off*

Use numbers while u r posting any scenes (ie) scene1,scene 2 it shuld b in continuous irrespective of members who post it

Do not quote any scenes..just write @ the  members  name nd add your comment

No problem if u commit any gramatical errors or ur scenes is not nice when compared to others..plz do try it

It can be in any speech (ie) direct or indirect

There shuld be no negative comments
  
All the scenes shuld be in english as sum people doesn't knw hindi
    
Those who post any dream sequence will be added to the '~creativity stars~'  list

If u wanna b a part of creativity stars then post any dream sequence

Add a subject to ur scenes..I will add it on the first page


The scenes can b related to past also


The scenes shuld not be more than 1 page

Those who post more than 3 scenes will b added to super doopers list

And u can also have a chat in this thread

U can post your creations here..it will b appreciated..it shuld not only be related to this..it can b of anythng

SCENE 5 -Princessofkesar:Yukta scene   click here

SCENE 6 -Am008:Meecha union click here  

SCENE 7 -Robertp:veer-meethi ds click here

SCENE 8 -Oldveechafan:Veecha ds(joke)   click here

SCENE 9 -Ashvi:Mukta realises click here  

SCENE 10-robertp:yuvi-meethi ds click here  

SCENE 11-Ashvi:Mukta meets rathore click here  

SCENE 12-Uttaranian123:Ichcha tappu ds click here

SCENE 13-Shrishteemathur:Veecha union  click here

SCENE 14-Preeti_shadia:Ameeth ds click here

SCENE 15-Uttaranian123:Scene before leap  click here

SCENE 16-Shrishteemathur:Yuthi ds click here  

SCENE 17-Ashvi:Mukta is caught click here  
  

          
                  DREAM STARTS..!!👍🏼


                                                               
         
             
                



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Posted: 11 years ago
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guys as this is my thread i wil strt it first..this is an example..hope u understand how to do it!

scene 1:(Ichcha is talking to tapu's foto )

Ichcha:y u left me?ur my life tappu. .I wish to have u wit me bt i dnt knw wer u are..thats okay..i thought mukta would fill ur absence..bt she hates me..do u knw y?nani has spoilt her by sayng that i ruined ur life..bt it is not the truth tappu..bt if she cums to knw the truth that i only brought her up she would not behave lik this..do u remember?wen u left her in a street i only took her nd brought her here..veer nd i luved her so much..we considerd her as our daughter..u didnt even knw that she is ur daughter till nw..bt aftr u went i came to knw that she is ur daughter..then i handed her to our papa..even kanha luved her alot..bt she didnt remember anythng  as she was too small..i could tell this truth to her bt i wil not tell bcoz she wil strt hating u lik my daughter hates me nw..i dont want that..all my kids mukku,meethi,yuvi hates me tappu..y tappu!😭..(mukta is listening all this standing behind her nd cryng)
Mukta:I am sry maa for accusing u..Now its my responsiblity to make yuvi nd meethi to realize abt u!(nani is seeing dat nd cryng)
Nani to herself:  I am a fool..i shuld have not done tis..am very old nd im not behavng lik that..realy ichcha is grt!i shuld b punished for wat nd all i did
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Posted: 11 years ago
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well i write dream scenes, i have written two already  in yukta at.

i can post them here too?

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Posted: 11 years ago
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bt name it as scene 2 nd scene 3..only in english!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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cool , i will post then!
dont throw eggs and tomato on me guys for my weird dream scenes!😛

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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome thread!!! cool!!👍🏼👍🏼

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dream scene-2


Yuvraj mukta dream scene- kya mujhse dosti karoge?

Love is weird feeling, sometime you starts loving the person whom you hated the most.

Your worst foe turns into your best frn.

Well mukta and yuvi ki love story kuch aise hi start hui!😳



Mukta was walking along the road side in the late evening. It was nearly 7 pm and few streetlamp illuminated the path with their dim light. The normal simple life of mukta had seen sudden ups and down within span of 1month. She fell in love and made new frn  and then lost her love because of her best frn.  Aman constantly gave priority to his frns more than their relationship, which resulted in their frequent fights and ultimately breakup. Her Life became from bad to worse when she realized her family is bankrupt now and her haveli will be sold in auction to pay the debt. But yet another twist was waiting for her. She was shocked when her so called enemy , meeth's mom bought the house just to hand over back to them. Now she was confused what to believe and whom to believe her nani or savior  of her nanu's izzat.

Her  thought process was halted by loud horn of car coming behind and when she turned, she noticed a tall figure coming out of car. She picked a stone from ground and was about throw on person who was stalking her now, when she heard a familiar voice.

"mukku-nukku , kya kar rahi ho ? mein hoon!"

M: yuvi?[ She exclaimed  in surprise] mera piccha kar rahe ho?

Y: nahi toh! Maine tumhe apne ghar se itna tense hokar bahar jaate huae dekha. Who bhi andhere mein ! itne sunsan sadak par! Toh mujhse raha nahi gaya!

M: mujhe tumhari help ki koi jarurat nahi! Nahi kisse ki sympathy ki jarurat hai!

Y: jaanta hoon! Tum khud ko sambhal sakti ho, mein sirf saath dena chaahta hoon, tumhari musibat mein, kya baat hai mukku?

M:tum nahi samojge ! jo  sawaalon ka toofan mere mann mein hai, pata nahi kahan usske jawaab milege!

Y: well ek jagah hai! Jahan shyaad tumhe saare answers mil jaaye!

M: kahan?

Y: chalo toh sahi

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 Mukta and yuvi sat on steps of old temple of mahadev on hilltop. For an hour they were just observing the peaceful surrounding around the temple which was mesmerizing in moonlight  , silently wid out speaking a single word. yuvi was happy to see the calm and pleasant smile on mukta.

"Yuvi" , finally mukta breaks the silence between them , "tum batao , agar tumhe pata karna  ho ki kaun sach aur jhoot bol raha ho, toh kaise pata chalega?"

 

Y: mukku- nukku , mein sirf itna bata sakta hoon, apne dimag par na jiyaada jor mat dalo!

Pehle  sunno tumhara dil kya soch raha hai? Dekho pehle mein sochta tha ki tum bahut boring rude irritating person ho! Lekin  jaise mere dil ki sunne lage, pata chala ki tum kitne simple , samjhdar,sweet beautiful aur independent ladki ho! Tumhara gussa , tumhare baatein, tum jo  bhi karti ho aab accha lagata hai!

Tum dushman se itne pyaari dost kaise bann gayi pata hi nahi chala!

M: hum dost kab bane?

Y:  yeh mukku nukku , usse din ki batahmizzi ke liye sorry kaha na! dekho aab study date'I mean tuitions ke liye bhi time pe aata hoon.

Plzz plzz aab toh dost bana lo

And he extendes his hand towards her

Y: kya mujhse dosti karoge?

Mukta first paused for while and looked at yuvi and said in serious tone , "u knw wat? Agar pehle pata hota ki tum mere ek  thaapad  se  sudhar jaaoge toh  first year mein hi chaanta maarti''

She chuckled when she saw , the confused expression on yuvi's face.

And then slowly placed her hand on yuvi's hand 'aab toh dosti karne hi padhge, kyun ki spoiltbrat sensible joh ho gaya hai!'

Yuvi took the sigh of relief, 'thank god,haan toh kar diya! ,.waise madam , yuvi thappad se nahi darta hai  par pyaar se darta hai!'

M: mr filmy yuvraj singh bundela, bahut late ho chuki hoon tumhare  wajah se, ghar drop karne ki takleef uthainge?

Y: anything for my princess, aapka driver aapki khidmat mein haazir hai! And he winks at her.


Journey from temple to her house was filled wid laughter as yuvi cracked his silly jokes, just by spending some moment wid yuvi  had made the strom  in her mind silent  .

She felt rejuvenated now, ready to face the challenge of her life.



 

Edited by princessofkesar - 11 years ago
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dream scene-3 part a



part  a


Yuvraj  was waiting for mukta  outside the library , they had decided to meet at 3pm but he came 1 hour before in the hope that mukta will be already sitting in the library and he could spend more time with her. But  to his bad luck professor shukla  had decided to finish his portion by taking  extra class for mukta's batch.

'' yeh professor shukla  kya computer  hai? Yeh  Kabhi tired kyun nahi hota? Lagta hai aaj hi poore year ka portion khatam karega!'' yuvi mumbled to himself in anger. He had already send 20-30 msges to mukta  by now and must have given at least 50 miss calls. But mukta did not reply to any of them, he knew she does not like to reply to msg or call during the lecture and when she will come he will have to listen another bhashan for disturbing her! But he was used to it; in fact he used to feel that his day is incomplete when mukta would not scold him for his stupid mistakes.

'' mere doston ko yakin hi nahi hoga ki mein tumhara library mein intezzar karta hoon woh bhi tuitions ke liye, vishwas nahi hota ki kuch din pehle tum mera intezaar karti thi! Mujhe bar-bar call kar ke jabardasti library mein bulati thi, Aur meri batahmizzi ke bawjood mujhe padhaya karti thi. Tum khud nahi jaanti mukta , kitna badal  diya hai tum ne mujhe!'' yuvi sighed  as he  remembered the small fights between mukta  and him.

Finally mukta arrived and yuvi's face lit up wid broad smile.

''yuvi  kitni  bar kaha hai  ki during lecture mujhe aise miss calls or msges  se disturb  mat karo! Lekin tume  mujhe tang karne mein  mazza aata hai!'' mukta  started scolding him while dragging him inside  by holding his arm.  And yuvi was constantly looking at his arm where mukta was holding him, as if all his senses have become numb and only sense of vision and sense of touch where mukta is holding him are functional.

M: yuvi hum tumse kabse kuch poonch  rahe hai aur tum ho ke sirf muskura  rahe ho!

Y: hmm

M: hmmm kya? Phir se mujhe lect mein disturb karoge?

Y: hmmm

M: what? toh itni der se main tume jo samjha rahi thi uss ka kya? Pata hai professor shukla ne  mujhe tumhara sms padhte samay pakad liya. 4-5 baar sorry kehne ke  baad hi mujhe unka lect attend karne ka permission mila. Tume pata hai agar mujhe woh class se bahar jaane ko khete toh meri image baaki students ke saamne  kitne kharab hoti?

Y: hmmm

M: hmmm? Aaj tumhara mounvrat hai?

Y: hmmm

M: toh phir thik hai, aaj tuition cancel. good bye

Y: ruko mukta, I was really listening to you. Aur tum chali jaaogi toh mujhe kaun padhayega? Plz rukjao na!

Yuvi was begging to her  exactly like small kid would do while asking chocolate  from his mother, mukta tried to suppress her smile by pursing her lips , and to tease him more she said "professor shukla hai na? "

She always had fun looking at different expression that yuvi gives whenever he hears shukla's name.

" par mukta Shukla tumhare tarah beautifull thodi hai, jo main unke saath apna time '.?" yuvi bit is tongue, he turns his  face away from mukta to hide his embarrassment .' oh god , control your tongue yuvi' he said to himself .

M: kya kaha tumne? Mukta comes in front of him.

Y: mera matalab yeh hai ki woh tumhari tarah beautifully nahi padhata! , he was still hiding his face behind his notebook so that mukta would not be able to catch his lie!

M: kab tak yun hi apna muh choopate rahoge? Chalo jaldi library mein jaate hai, warna aur time waste ho jaayega.

Y: hanha ' mein bhi toh wahi keh ne wala tha.

He was relieved that mukta did not hear exactly what he said.

They go inside the library.


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part b

inside the libary

M:yuvi haan woh economy textbook ke  left mein jo book  hai,  woh nikalo.

Y: mukta kabse tum mujhe yeh laao , woh laao karke order dey rahi ho! Main kya tumhara wife hoon  ya phir pa jo mujse saare kaam karva rahi ho? Pata hai ghar mein  main ek glass bhi nahi utha hoon, sab kuch mere pass naukar ley aate hai.

M: apne  PJ marna band karo, aur mere saath rahoge toh apna kaam khud karna sikh jaaoge.

Now concentrate, growth in economy depends upon demand and supply. Matalab, product ke jitni demand badeghi aur usska jitna supply fast hoga to fulfill the demand, utni hi tejise economy mein growth hoga . toh koi business shuru karne se pehle hume aam aadmi  ki jarurat ka khayal rakhna chahiye….

But yuvi was intently looking at mukta, admiring her natural beauty. Her lips moved like petal of rose when they bloom. he could not resist the spell that her sparkling eyes constantly casted  when they glared at him whenever  mukta paused to seehim whether he is understanding what she is saying.   And her long silky hairs were tickling his face while playing with wind. He could not comprehend what mukta was teaching but few words like economy, demand, jarurat tried to vibrate his eardrum.

Y: tum meri sirf jarurat thi lekin aab tum meri zindgai ban gayi ho! Yuvi's mouth again failed to hide the subconscious thought that came in his mind.

M: tum kya bol rahe ho yuvi?kaunsi poem hai yeh?tumhara dhyan kahan hai?

Y:hum sun rahe hai mukta!

M: accha! Toh batao  kya sikhaya maine?

Y: aaa….. demand ki jarurat economy hai!  He himself did not understood what he said.

'' kuch aisa he kaha than a tum ne mukku-nukku" he narrowed his eyes and tried his best to deviate mukta's anger wid his innocent smile .

M: yuvi! Tumhe mujhse padhana accha nahi lagata toh  mere saath time waste kun kar rahe ho!

Tume kya lagata hai , humare pass free time hai issleye hum tume yahaan padhane aate hai?

Jaao tum na apne pyaare prof. shukla ke saath hi padho! Ya phir apne awara dost sid aur monty ke saath time pass karo . hum jaa rahe hai!

Y: mukku-nukku , ruko toh sahi! I m sorry, plz.  Mukku!

But mukta left the library without even turning back, yuvi was disappointed with himself.

'' mukku tume aab  phir se kaise manau?''


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third dream scene i have prepared the story in my mind , will post in 2-3 days!

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