Poem : Priya's words

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Posted: 2012-07-25T07:37:34Z
It's been long since I saw BALH properly.. But after reading y'day update, I wrote this poem.. From Priya's point of view.. I knw it's stupid, but still...


"Wait... till I gather the pieces left,
and treat the scars that went to depth...

As I sit helpless and can see nothing, but the dark night..
How can I not recall the days that were bright..

Where did I go so, so wrong, that I have to pine? for the love, that was once only mine..

Wish we lived in world where neither rules existed nor any law..
I would have made true, each dream that you saw

With you, life was content, like a melodious song..
Now laments only remain, for the choice that I made wrong

Yeah... I wanted you to move on, to live life in a better way...
But... trust me, without you, I didn't want to spend even one day!

I should have known.. it's not only 'you' or just 'me'..
coz my love, 'we' are meant to be...

It was my mistake... All my fault..
but can you try to forgive the princess (still, I hope) of your heart?

I want to remorse, but my words are broken... 'cause nothing can justify the joys that were taken


I just wanna be in your arms and apologise, will you hold me tight?
nothing else can make my world seem right...


Loving you, and being loved by you is all that matter
give me another chance, and our smiles will never again shatter!   


I wanna be happy, but don't need any charm
It's just that, Ram loves Priya and Priya is meant for Ram..."
Edited by Priya_Fan - 2012-07-25T07:43:27Z
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Posted: 2012-07-25T08:13:10Z
you are very good with words Amy
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Posted: 2012-07-25T08:22:23Z
OMGGG its just wowww...awsome poem love it sooo much
thanx 4 sharing
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Posted: 2012-07-25T08:35:07Z
Beautiful, beautiful,beautiful...i was literally speaking it eachtime i read a line,..u penned down her thoughts so well...after initial anger towards priya i now feel sad fr her...
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Posted: 2012-07-25T09:28:15Z
Amy honestly how can you write like this?.. Absolutely wonderful and so apt and meaningful.ClapThumbs Up.
Wish we lived in world where neither rules existed nor any law..
I would have made true, each dream that you saw


I should have known.. it's not only 'you' or just 'me'..
coz my love, 'we' are meant to be...

Best lines I loved in your poem.. Come on now dont stop here.. carry on with your work. Lets see how the new BALH goes and accordingly do post your works often..
Edited by maris08 - 2012-07-25T09:40:59Z
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Posted: 2012-07-25T09:40:21Z
Amy Darling...Hug

Another post where I wish I could hit the Like button over and over .

beautiful poetry and so meaningful. Loved it.

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Posted: 2012-07-25T09:41:12Z
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Posted: 2012-07-25T09:56:01Z
Originally posted by maris08


<font color="#6600cc">Amy honestly how can you write like this?.. Absolutely wonderful and so apt and meaningful</font>.ClapThumbs Up.
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<div>Wish we lived in world where neither rules existed nor any law..
I would have made true, each dream that you saw


I should have known.. it's not only 'you' or just 'me'..
coz my love, 'we' are meant to be...

<font color="#6600cc">Best lines I loved in your poem.. Come on now dont stop here.. carry on with your work. Lets see how the new BALH goes and accordingly do post your works often..</font>



That coming from a poetess, means a lot! Thanks Maris.. :)
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