Poem : Priya's words

It's been long since I saw BALH properly.. But after reading y'day update, I wrote this poem.. From Priya's point of view.. I knw it's stupid, but still...


"Wait... till I gather the pieces left,
and treat the scars that went to depth...

As I sit helpless and can see nothing, but the dark night..
How can I not recall the days that were bright..

Where did I go so, so wrong, that I have to pine? for the love, that was once only mine..

Wish we lived in world where neither rules existed nor any law..
I would have made true, each dream that you saw

With you, life was content, like a melodious song..
Now laments only remain, for the choice that I made wrong

Yeah... I wanted you to move on, to live life in a better way...
But... trust me, without you, I didn't want to spend even one day!

I should have known.. it's not only 'you' or just 'me'..
coz my love, 'we' are meant to be...

It was my mistake... All my fault..
but can you try to forgive the princess (still, I hope) of your heart?

I want to remorse, but my words are broken... 'cause nothing can justify the joys that were taken


I just wanna be in your arms and apologise, will you hold me tight?
nothing else can make my world seem right...


Loving you, and being loved by you is all that matter
give me another chance, and our smiles will never again shatter!   


I wanna be happy, but don't need any charm
It's just that, Ram loves Priya and Priya is meant for Ram..." Edited by Priya_Fan - 11 years ago

you are very good with words Amy
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OMGGG its just wowww...awsome poem love it sooo much thanx 4 sharing

Beautiful, beautiful,beautiful...i was literally speaking it eachtime i read a line,..u penned down her thoughts so well...after initial anger towards priya i now feel sad fr her...

Amy honestly how can you write like this?.. Absolutely wonderful and so apt and meaningful.👏👍🏼. Edited by maris08 - 11 years ago

Amy Darling...🤗

Another post where I wish I could hit the Like button over and over .

beautiful poetry and so meaningful. Loved it.

Originally posted by: maris08

<font color="#6600cc">Amy honestly how can you write like this?.. Absolutely wonderful and so apt and meaningful</font>.👏👍🏼.

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<div>Wish we lived in world where neither rules existed nor any law..
I would have made true, each dream that you saw

I should have known.. it's not only 'you' or just 'me'..
coz my love, 'we' are meant to be...
<font color="#6600cc">Best lines I loved in your poem.. Come on now dont stop here.. carry on with your work. Lets see how the new BALH goes and accordingly do post your works often..</font>

That coming from a poetess, means a lot! Thanks Maris.. :)

Originally posted by: mem1

<font color="#990066">Amy Darling...🤗

Another post where I wish I could hit the Like button over and over .

beautiful poetry and so meaningful. Loved it. </font>

Gita di... Thanks you... And WHERE have u been??

Such a beautiful poem.👏👏

wow Amy di 👏 👏
this is the reason y we crave for ur writings... u are so damn good in bringing out PK's feelings...

loved every single line!❤️
now how i wish u continue to bless us with ur works 🤔