Right, I is here. 😳
I woke up early this morning, logged in, found that you've updated. I read at once. I could not comment, though because I wanted to keep the my usual which would not have been feasible then.
Anyway, so this is one chapter that goes straight in the league of chapters in which you've SwaRon in exclusivity and with extra-special emphasis on their characteristic features. You did wondrous detailing in all those olden chapters as well. Every microscopic thing about the duo woven into something spectacularly well penned.
The narrative never, ever stops being gripping and you're constantly eluded by the fact that yaiks, this might have en end to it as well. Therefore, I was sorta taken aback when whoops, the chapter ended. (:
Swayum and Sharon have come undone, more or less. The sentiments, both sides were really well captured. Thing is, you first have to discover the sentiment you'd be penning, then you play around with it via words. That's what an author usually does unless they are writing something personal, like a journal or autobiography. The trick is to make it appear free flowing and you've nailed it. That's about it. Cheers!
Thanks for the PM.
I love you,
Kanks (Do not call me KD/Kay-Dee, disgusting stuff, let Raf have these)
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