Originally posted by: heydoc27
rabzonedge,busybee bhavita n sujatha ,beautiful stuffπ
pls do continu ur shaayaris,dey r amazingππΌ
Thanks hey Doc..if possible read my OS too...and give your comments..π³
Bhavita: aapki likhawat bahut achi hain..
Ashu Adopted by Baba
ashu POV
part-2
Shakein hilti hai toh Madhur swar(words) nikalte hai
Sapne bhi sach hote hai..aakaar mein dhalte hai
Bhagwaan roop badal kar Baba ke roop mein aaye hain
Amawasya mein hai chaand,registan mein phool khilte hai
ye naye kapde,naya school,naya bhavisya pukarta hai mujhe
palkon ke aashiyane mein soye armaan machalte hain
violin ka sangeet..violin ka lay..violin ki taal.violin ke sur
bajata hoon main.baba ke aankhon ke diye jalte hai
baba ki khamoshi, baba ki ichchayein ,baba ka dard, baba ki tanhai
sab ko mita dunga pyaar ki garmi se ghamon ke barf pighalte hain
dusro ke liye jiunga,shehar ka sabse bada doctor banunga
pure karunga baba ke khwaab jo unke andar mere liye palte hain...
Originally posted by: mudraswathi
Yaar...sachi... itna jaldi jaldi//sab likh rahe ho...
Wonder ! How nicely you inspiring each other!π
Thanks Mudra..Ye sab Aap logo ka Kamaal hai...π
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